neha
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Post by neha on Dec 12, 2008 16:15:43 GMT 5
Aik Misra-e- tarah par likhy gai ghazal
Uss se jab majboor ho kar mein juda honay lagi Mujh se shamm-e-zindagi tu kiun khafa honay lagi
Abr jab chanay laga tou mein nay poocha chaand se Tujh se teri chaandni ab kiun khafa honay lagi
Meri aankhon main bohut jal thal tha shayad isliye Mujh se sharminda bohut kaali ghata honay lagi
Dil ki madham dhadkano'n se aa rahy hai ye sada Saans ki lay zindagani ki saza honay lagi
Raaat ki tanhai main jee khol kar rotay rahay Yaaad uski mere zakhmon ki dawa honay lagi
Bas aza'n hotay hi chokhat pe jhukaya apna sar Phir namaz-e-ishq.... us dar par ada honay lagi
Waqt kay sailaab main beh kar kahan hum aa gaye Apni hi pehchaan khud hum say juda honay lagi
Mein tou jeena chahty hoon dusron kay wastay Mujh se meri zindagi hi kiun khafa honay lagi
Kia karay shikwa bhi NEHA ab kisi kay samnay 'Aah'... ab uski jahan main be sada honay lagi Neha jee mashallah bohat khoobSurat aur murassa ghazl hai aapki dil ko chuu gaee hai khush rehaiN Shukriya janab
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 9, 2009 11:45:10 GMT 5
AOA Neha jee bohat arse ke bad ap ka koi klam parhne ko mila par bohat umda mila khobsorat Ghazal ke liye bohat sari dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by neha on Jan 16, 2009 22:24:13 GMT 5
AOA Neha jee bohat arse ke bad ap ka koi klam parhne ko mila par bohat umda mila khobsorat Ghazal ke liye bohat sari dad qabol ki jiye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan Bohut shukriya Ramish sahab..k aap ko ghazal pasand aai..ye aap sab doston ki hosla afzai hi hai jo aaj mein is qaabil hoon .thanx again
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 16, 2009 22:59:13 GMT 5
waah buhat hi kamaal ki ghazal kahi hai aapne..har shair apni jagah buhat zabardast hai..daad qubool kijiye.
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Post by neha on Jan 17, 2009 0:15:04 GMT 5
waah buhat hi kamaal ki ghazal kahi hai aapne..har shair apni jagah buhat zabardast hai..daad qubool kijiye. Bohut shukriya Janab
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