neha
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Post by neha on Sept 17, 2008 12:31:59 GMT 5
Aik Misra-e- tarah par likhy gai ghazal
Uss se jab majboor ho kar mein juda honay lagi Mujh se shamm-e-zindagi tu kiun khafa honay lagi
Abr jab chanay laga tou mein nay poocha chaand se Tujh se teri chaandni ab kiun khafa honay lagi
Meri aankhon main bohut jal thal tha shayad isliye Mujh se sharminda bohut kaali ghata honay lagi
Dil ki madham dhadkano'n se aa rahy hai ye sada Saans ki lay zindagani ki saza honay lagi
Raaat ki tanhai main jee khol kar rotay rahay Yaaad uski mere zakhmon ki dawa honay lagi
Bas aza'n hotay hi chokhat pe jhukaya apna sar Phir namaz-e-ishq.... us dar par ada honay lagi
Waqt kay sailaab main beh kar kahan hum aa gaye Apni hi pehchaan khud hum say juda honay lagi
Mein tou jeena chahty hoon dusron kay wastay Mujh se meri zindagi hi kiun khafa honay lagi
Kia karay shikwa bhi NEHA ab kisi kay samnay 'Aah'... ab uski jahan main be sada honay lagi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Sept 17, 2008 22:49:56 GMT 5
neha aap ki ghazal kaai roz baad parhnay ka moqa mila hy jis twaatar sy aap pehlay apni tehreeron sy nawaazti theen ab us raftaar main kami aa gai hy khair aap ki masroofiat aarray aai ho gi taza ghazal bhi boht pasand aai khoobsoorat andaz hy aap ka
Raaat ki tanhai main jee khol kar rotay rahay Yaaad uski mere zakhmon ki dawa honay lagi
Bas aza'n hotay hi chokhat pe jhukaya apna sar Phir namaz-e-ishq.... us dar par ada honay lagi
wah wah khaas taur par is dooosray shair ka to jawab hi nahin daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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neha
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Post by neha on Sept 18, 2008 16:08:29 GMT 5
Thanx Razi bhai...actually koi taza ghazal nahin kahi thi bht din se socha tha k kuch naya likh k aap sab se share karoon. aap ko ghazal pasand aai is k liye bht bht shukriya.
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Post by Tanweer on Sept 29, 2008 18:54:55 GMT 5
Neha saheba!
khoobsurat ghazal aap nay pesh ki, daad qabool kejiey.
Faq't Tanweer
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Sept 30, 2008 11:55:07 GMT 5
Neha Ji
Bohat rawani hay aap ke kalam mein
bari sadgi sey bohat gehri baaten bayan ker deen aap ney
Bohat achey ashaar dil ko chu jaaney waley
maqta mein kuch abham hay...doosra misra kuch samajh mein naheen aaya......kam aqli meri.... ager kuch wazahat ferma den tow inayat ho gi......
ek bohat achi ghazal per daad hazir hay...qabool fermaaiye
Khaksar
Qamar
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Post by ehteshamanwar on Nov 6, 2008 7:41:55 GMT 5
Neha Shba Aadab!
kia kahnay haiN aap kay, bohat khooB, baRi umdah ghazal hay....
meray khayal maiN "Saans ki lay zindagani ki saza honay lagi" es misray mai typo rah gaya hay.....nazar e sani fermalaiN..
mukhlis, Ehtesham Anwar
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Nov 6, 2008 18:01:44 GMT 5
Boht Khoob Neha Sahiba.
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Post by waqaar on Nov 17, 2008 20:25:15 GMT 5
Neha jii, aadaab! bahut hii aChh~ii aur bahut hii ravaaN davaaN ghazal hay aapki. 4 She'r say ghazal nay maZaameen nay zor pakRa hay, lagta hay kaafi din maiN aapnay likkh~ii hay Yeh ghazal. daad haaZir hay! waQaar
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Nov 25, 2008 19:23:42 GMT 5
Bas aza'n hotay hi chokhat pe jhukaya apna sar Phir namaz-e-ishq.... us dar par ada honay lagi
bahut khoobsorat ghazal hay dad qabool kejeay
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Post by HASIB RANA on Nov 26, 2008 21:28:58 GMT 5
. NICE POETRY
ALL THE BEST
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Post by tmasood on Nov 27, 2008 20:17:38 GMT 5
Aik Misra-e- tarah par likhy gai ghazal
Uss se jab majboor ho kar mein juda honay lagi Mujh se shamm-e-zindagi tu kiun khafa honay lagi
Abr jab chanay laga tou mein nay poocha chaand se Tujh se teri chaandni ab kiun khafa honay lagi
Meri aankhon main bohut jal thal tha shayad isliye Mujh se sharminda bohut kaali ghata honay lagi
Dil ki madham dhadkano'n se aa rahy hai ye sada Saans ki lay zindagani ki saza honay lagi
Raaat ki tanhai main jee khol kar rotay rahay Yaaad uski mere zakhmon ki dawa honay lagi
Bas aza'n hotay hi chokhat pe jhukaya apna sar Phir namaz-e-ishq.... us dar par ada honay lagi
Waqt kay sailaab main beh kar kahan hum aa gaye Apni hi pehchaan khud hum say juda honay lagi
Mein tou jeena chahty hoon dusron kay wastay Mujh se meri zindagi hi kiun khafa honay lagi
Kia karay shikwa bhi NEHA ab kisi kay samnay 'Aah'... ab uski jahan main be sada honay lagi Neha jee
kayaa baat hai waaaah bohaaaaaaat a'alaa!!! dilee daad Hazir hai
Khush rehaiN
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neha
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Post by neha on Dec 11, 2008 18:23:03 GMT 5
Neha jii, aadaab! bahut hii aChh~ii aur bahut hii ravaaN davaaN ghazal hay aapki. 4 She'r say ghazal nay maZaameen nay zor pakRa hay, lagta hay kaafi din maiN aapnay likkh~ii hay Yeh ghazal. daad haaZir hay! waQaar Thanx waqar sahab, Aap ko ghazal pasand aai is k liye shukriya..ye ghazal mein nay 2 din main likhy hai..
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neha
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Post by neha on Dec 11, 2008 18:23:55 GMT 5
Aik Misra-e- tarah par likhy gai ghazal
Uss se jab majboor ho kar mein juda honay lagi Mujh se shamm-e-zindagi tu kiun khafa honay lagi
Abr jab chanay laga tou mein nay poocha chaand se Tujh se teri chaandni ab kiun khafa honay lagi
Meri aankhon main bohut jal thal tha shayad isliye Mujh se sharminda bohut kaali ghata honay lagi
Dil ki madham dhadkano'n se aa rahy hai ye sada Saans ki lay zindagani ki saza honay lagi
Raaat ki tanhai main jee khol kar rotay rahay Yaaad uski mere zakhmon ki dawa honay lagi
Bas aza'n hotay hi chokhat pe jhukaya apna sar Phir namaz-e-ishq.... us dar par ada honay lagi
Waqt kay sailaab main beh kar kahan hum aa gaye Apni hi pehchaan khud hum say juda honay lagi
Mein tou jeena chahty hoon dusron kay wastay Mujh se meri zindagi hi kiun khafa honay lagi
Kia karay shikwa bhi NEHA ab kisi kay samnay 'Aah'... ab uski jahan main be sada honay lagi Neha jee
kayaa baat hai waaaah bohaaaaaaat a'alaa!!! dilee daad Hazir hai
Khush rehaiN Thanx a lot janab
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Post by tmasood on Dec 12, 2008 15:51:40 GMT 5
Aik Misra-e- tarah par likhy gai ghazal
Uss se jab majboor ho kar mein juda honay lagi Mujh se shamm-e-zindagi tu kiun khafa honay lagi
Abr jab chanay laga tou mein nay poocha chaand se Tujh se teri chaandni ab kiun khafa honay lagi
Meri aankhon main bohut jal thal tha shayad isliye Mujh se sharminda bohut kaali ghata honay lagi
Dil ki madham dhadkano'n se aa rahy hai ye sada Saans ki lay zindagani ki saza honay lagi
Raaat ki tanhai main jee khol kar rotay rahay Yaaad uski mere zakhmon ki dawa honay lagi
Bas aza'n hotay hi chokhat pe jhukaya apna sar Phir namaz-e-ishq.... us dar par ada honay lagi
Waqt kay sailaab main beh kar kahan hum aa gaye Apni hi pehchaan khud hum say juda honay lagi
Mein tou jeena chahty hoon dusron kay wastay Mujh se meri zindagi hi kiun khafa honay lagi
Kia karay shikwa bhi NEHA ab kisi kay samnay 'Aah'... ab uski jahan main be sada honay lagi Neha jee mashallah bohat khoobSurat aur murassa ghazl hai aapki dil ko chuu gaee hai khush rehaiN
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