jooni
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Post by jooni on Mar 8, 2009 23:00:01 GMT 5
*********AAJ MUJHE TUM KEHNAY DO *********
Aaj mujhe tum kehnay do Aaj mujhe tum matt roko Aaj mujhe tum kehnay do Baat wo barson pehlay ki Baat jo teri meri thi Baat jo dil main thi kab se Jab dekha tum ko, thi tab se Baat jo teray mann ki thi Baat jo meray mann ki thi Aaj mujhe tum kehnay do
Tum bhi kehna chahtay thay Main bhi sun-na chahta tha Inn piyasi tarsi aankhon main Kuchh sapnay bun-na chahta tha Jo baat isharon main kertay thay Baat jo kehnay se dartay thay Khouf kabhi iss dunya ka Paas kabhi inn rasmon ka Khamosh hi janan rehtay thay
Abb laikin kuchh bhi ho ja'ay Dunya dushman ho ja'ay Gham aur nahi abb sehna hai Saari dunya kay aagay Wo baat mujhe abb kehna hai Baat wo meri ulfat ki Baat wo teri chahat ki Aaj mujhe tum matt roko Aaj mujhe tum kehnay do
Haan Tum Se Mohabbat Thi Mujh Ko Haan Tum Se Mohabbat Hai mujh Ko
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sahil
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by sahil on Mar 10, 2009 17:06:56 GMT 5
Boht Khoob
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sahil
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Post by sahil on Mar 10, 2009 17:24:43 GMT 5
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Post by nasirmalik on Mar 10, 2009 17:44:06 GMT 5
dear jooni! khoob kalam paish kia aap ne sukhanwarooN ki mehfil meiN. aor haaN! ye apne Jamshaid ki rae ko dil par mat leje ga. jan jokhooN ka kam he jo wo baRe rasaN se keh chale haiN. ache kalam par mubarik baad qabool keje. Nasir Malik
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Mar 10, 2009 22:04:22 GMT 5
Jamshaid Dear, Adaab.
Nazm ki pasandeedgi ka boht shukriya.
Pakistan, Layyah aa ker bhi tum se na mil saka,
jis per boht sharminda hoon. sirf 4 din raha tha,
laikin mulaqat hona chahiye thi. I am really very sorry.
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Mar 10, 2009 22:10:41 GMT 5
Nasir Bhai, Adaab.
Nazm ki pazeera'ee kay liye boht mashkoor hoon.
Jamshaid ki baat to theek hai keh agar UrdU main
ho to achha lagay ga, magar sachi baat ye hai keh
mujhe iss hawalay se ma'loomat nahi hain. Agar
aap mujhe personal message main guide ker dain
to main koshish kroon ga. Boht Shukriya aap ka.
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 11, 2009 1:18:02 GMT 5
AOA jooni bro wahhhhhhhhhh lutf ageya boha umda jee pori tarha apne sath baha kar le jati he apki nazm qari ko seedhi dil me utar gai bohat sari dad ap ke husne kalam ki nazr waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by ramishjaan on Mar 11, 2009 1:19:22 GMT 5
AOA jooni bro urdu me likhne ke liye agar kisi madad ki zarorat ho ja koi cheez smajhne ki to khaksar hazir he ap ki khidmat ke liye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/color]
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Mar 11, 2009 12:06:11 GMT 5
Ramish Bhai, Adaab.
Nazm ko pasand kernay aur itnay khoobsoorat andaz
main ta'reef kernay per boht mamnoon hoon aap ka.
Allah aap ko khush rakhay!
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Mar 11, 2009 12:13:02 GMT 5
Ramish Bhai, Adaab.
Ta'awun ki paishkash ka boht shukriya.
Agar aap guide ker sakain to boht mehrbani ho gi.
Boht Shukriya.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Mar 11, 2009 18:14:51 GMT 5
Jooni bhai! Khoob kahi aur khul kar kahi. Kuchh nazr-e-saani ki zaroorat hai... maslan behr say kahiN kahiN kharij ho rahi hai aap ki nazm. Bahr haar "Practice makes a man perfact". Allah karay zor-e-qalam aur ziyada.
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Mar 11, 2009 23:06:17 GMT 5
Atif Bhai, Adaab.
Boht shukriya aap ka nazm pasand kernay ka.
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Mar 11, 2009 23:09:45 GMT 5
Atif Bhai, Adaab.
Aap ko 2000 waan post ki boht boht " MuBaRaK " ho.
Mujhe khushi hai keh aap ka 2000 waan post meri NazM
kay hissay main aaya hai. Aap ka boht shukriya.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Mar 14, 2009 0:39:25 GMT 5
Adna si iss kaawish ko saraahnay ka shukriya!
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jooni
sukhanshanas
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Post by jooni on Mar 14, 2009 21:52:39 GMT 5
Atif Bhai, Adaab.
Aap ka 2000 waan post aap ki SUKHANWAR se Mohabbat aur Khuloos
ka suboot hai aur ye koi ma'mooli baat nahi hai. I also wish to achieve
this milestone. Allah aap ko khush rakhay!
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