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Post by neelofar on Mar 4, 2009 15:19:48 GMT 5
**** AA BHI JAAO ****
Aa bhi jaao! Nazer bulati hai Zakhm aawaz de rahe haiN tumheN SiskiyaN bhi sadayeN deti haiN Dil jhulasta hai aaNkh roti hai Ek sadaye alam ye khti hai AansoyoN ki pukar bhi hai yehi Aa bhi jaao! ke chehra e beshakl ko ek jhalak hi mil jaaye Jetne ghrey haiN zakhm chahat ke Tere aane se mundamil honge... Tu jo aajaye mere gher eik din Chak dil bhi jo haiN woh sil jaayeN ManziloN ke suragh mil jaayeN Aor gulshan me haiN udas jo gul.. Meri aasudgi pe khil jaayeN... Aa bhi jaao......... Aa bhi jaao............ ************************
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 5, 2009 0:10:52 GMT 5
intzaar ki boht bharpoor kayfiat hy is nazm main aur shaairi to naam hi kayfiaat k bharpoor izhaar ka hy aap k liay boht see daad thanx razi
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Post by jooni on Mar 8, 2009 21:53:08 GMT 5
Neelofer Sahiba,
Achhi nazm hai. Daad qubool kijiye.
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Post by neelofar on Mar 12, 2009 0:57:45 GMT 5
Razi Bhai Aor Jooni Bhaiyya Aap dono ki daad mujhe aisi lgii jaise khushk sali ke mousam me barish ki phoaar......bohat sara shukriaa..............SHAD & ABAD RAHYE..
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