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Post by waqaar on Jul 18, 2007 4:01:24 GMT 5
aadaab,
aik khaYaal aapki naZr ker rahaa hooN. iska ta'alluq meray zaati tajribaat say hay, umeed hay naagavaar nah guzray ga. SHukriah!
waQaar
======== naZ^m= "qaid"
qaid hay 'iShq mira 'iShq kay zindaaN maiN aaj!
qaid hay ruuH mirii jism kay zindaaN maiN kYuuN?
qaid haiN She'r miray beHr kay zindaaN maiN kYuuN?
khaak maiN kYuuN nah milaa dooN Yeh jahaan-e-afkaar?
toR DaalooN sabh~ii zindaaN, sabh~ii rasm-e-dunYa
soChta hooN keh zamaanay say baghaawat ker dooN zindagi tark basad Shoq-o-masarrat ker dooN
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Post by Tanweer on Jul 18, 2007 22:17:30 GMT 5
WaQaar Sahib!
Aapka ye falsafa aur baghawat achi lagi..
Daad hazir hay.
Tanweer
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 18, 2007 22:47:48 GMT 5
waqar sahib humain bhala aap ka yeh khyaal nagwaar kion lagay ga basa auqaat insan fikr ki aysi bulandi par hota hy ya us k paas kehnay ko itna bohat kuch hota hy k woh bohat see pabandiaan torrnay ki khahish karta hy yehi khaahish is nazm main jhalakti hy thanx razi
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Post by khalid on Jul 19, 2007 5:12:28 GMT 5
kya khoob ''qeid'' kiya hai ''qeid'' ko alfaaz ki ''qeid'' meiN ;D janaab azzadi ka matlab hi qeid meiN reh ker samajh aata hai!
nazm k liye daad haazir hai waQaar!!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 19, 2007 9:31:11 GMT 5
Waqar sahib khoobsoorat nazm dil say nikli hui meray dil tak bohat asaani say safar kia is nazm nay daad qabool farmaiay
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Post by waqaar on Jul 23, 2007 2:55:56 GMT 5
WaQaar Sahib! Aapka ye falsafa aur baghawat achi lagi.. Daad hazir hay. Tanweer Tanweer Saaheb,
aadaab,
aapnay merii falSafay ko samjh~aa aur parKh~aa, samjh~iYay meray "paisay wuSool" ho gaye. bahut Shukriah!
waQaar
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Post by waqaar on Jul 23, 2007 2:58:01 GMT 5
waqar sahib humain bhala aap ka yeh khyaal nagwaar kion lagay ga basa auqaat insan fikr ki aysi bulandi par hota hy ya us k paas kehnay ko itna bohat kuch hota hy k woh bohat see pabandiaan torrnay ki khahish karta hy yehi khaahish is nazm main jhalakti hy thanx razi razi SaaHeb,
aadaab,
is naZ^m maiN likh~nay kehnay kay 'ilaawah har qism kii paabandi say aazaadi kii bh~ii aavaaz hay. aapnay isay parkh~aa, bahut Shukriah!
waQaar
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 18:12:13 GMT 5
Wah WaQar Bhai shaandaar nazm hai aap ki.
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