Pommy
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Post by Pommy on Jan 1, 2009 11:38:57 GMT 5
Kash Main Ek Phool Hota Jo tere Ghar Ke Aanghan Main Mehkta Rehta Tum Kabhi Mujhe Choma Karti Kabhi Apnay Balon Main Sanwara Karti Youn Sara Din Tera Sath Rehta Leken jab Tum Khud Se Mujhay Alehda Kati Tu Judai Se Main Murjha Jata
Kash Main Ek Phool Hota...........!!!!
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 6, 2009 12:00:52 GMT 5
wah,,, riwayti khyaal hy laykin aap isi tara koshish jaari rakhain thanx razi
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Post by Meticulous on Jan 7, 2009 14:25:47 GMT 5
good! achhi koshish hai ..
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 7, 2009 19:20:39 GMT 5
Atif Sahib! Kia yeh copied khayal nahiN! "Kaash main teray haseeN hath ka kangan hota" aur shayad yeh bhi kissi ki copy hai, khair dil maila mat kijiay ga. Bawazn shaeri ki koshish karaiN, ya maidan-e-nasr trey kaaiN.
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Jan 9, 2009 0:59:38 GMT 5
Achhi Kaawish hai Atif Sahib.
Daad Qubool kijiye.
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Pommy
ibtidaai rukn
Posts: 17
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Post by Pommy on Feb 4, 2009 10:39:22 GMT 5
Thanks For All.Plz Help me in my Shairy.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Feb 6, 2009 0:49:29 GMT 5
Thanks For All.Plz Help me in my Shairy. aatif aap fikr na kijiay hum aap ki her mumkin help karain gy
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Feb 8, 2009 23:21:04 GMT 5
Atif Miyan, preshan na hona. Himmat se kaam lena, keh
ishq ki trah sha'ery bhi "Ek aag ka darya hai aur doob kay jana hai "
Layyah adab ki aik zarkhaiz sarzameen hai, kisi achhay ustaad se
raabta kro.
Naik Khwahishat Kay Saath,
Junaid Sikandar
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Feb 28, 2009 14:13:59 GMT 5
Bahut khoob ... Koshish jari rakheay ... Sada khush raheay...
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