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Post by saeed on Jul 17, 2008 12:08:52 GMT 5
eik zer-e-tameer ghazal Sukhanwar ki tesri salgireh ki nazr..... Rukney ka irada tha, guzer jaaney ki zidd hai Phir josh-e-musafat kisi deewaney ki zidd hai
Ham ne abhi khushboo ki kahani naheN kholi KiyuN shehr-e-lab-o-gosh ko afsaaney ki zidd hai?
Reh reh ke usey dekhna acha naheN lekin Her naqsh ko aankhoN meiN uter jaaney ki zidd hai
ApnoN ke wo andaaz na pehley se maraasim Guzrey hooey din-raat ko duhraaney ki zidd hai
Maloom naheN wehshat-e-be-faiz januN ko Jeeney ki tamanna hai keh marr jaaney ki zidd hai
Us reig-e-rawaaN se gul-o-gulzar ki khwahish Ye ishq nahen hai kisi deewaney ki zidd hai
izafa:
aabaad hai ujRey hooey chehroN ki wafa se ye shehr keh basti nahen, veeraney ke zidd hai
kis ramz ka aazaar khula chashm-e-januN per ab hamko samajhney ki na samjhaaney ki zidd hai
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Post by saeedsaeed on Jul 17, 2008 13:17:01 GMT 5
aoa saeed yar keys hy yar aur kiya ho raha hy aj kal?
accha ab ghazal par bat karta hoon aik bat kahoon, sab share hy zabardast sy bhi sy zabarsat hain, har share aacha lga hy mujy yar saeed, aur main thumary ye ghazal parh kar, bar bar parh kar jhoomta raha hoon , matalb es ka nasha mujh par tary ho gya hy mujhy fakhar hy tum meyre halqa e ahbab mein ho yar,
hamesha sy hameesha tak jeety rahoo thumara mubashir saeed
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noshi
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Post by noshi on Jul 18, 2008 11:59:41 GMT 5
Saeed Khan,
Hasb e riwayat bohat jazb se kahi gaee ghazal hai ye bhi... Lafz o maani ke naey nawailey se tajrubey aapki infaradiyat bhi hai aur Ahmed Faraz Sahib ki shaery ki khushbu ka ehsas bhi dilatey hain. Apney sheri asasey main Ik taza izafa Mubarak ! Khas tor pr ye sher kitna piyara hai,
Ham ne abhi khushboo ki kahani naheN kholi KiyuN shehr-e-lab-o-gosh ko afsaaney ki zidd hai
Noshi Gilani
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 18, 2008 12:36:41 GMT 5
saeed sahab boht umda ghazal aur hasb e riwayat naya usloob taazgi ka ehsaas hota hy aap ki shairi parh kar Reh reh ke usey dekhna acha naheN lekin Her naqsh ko aankhoN meiN uter jaaney ki zidd hai khoob kaha aap nay yeh shair daad qabool kijiay razi
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Post by saeed on Jul 18, 2008 15:45:30 GMT 5
aoa saeed yar keys hy yar aur kiya ho raha hy aj kal? accha ab ghazal par bat karta hoon aik bat kahoon, sab share hy zabardast sy bhi sy zabarsat hain, har share aacha lga hy mujy yar saeed, aur main thumary ye ghazal parh kar, bar bar parh kar jhoomta raha hoon , matalb es ka nasha mujh par tary ho gya hy mujhy fakhar hy tum meyre halqa e ahbab mein ho yar, hamesha sy hameesha tak jeety rahoo thumara mubashir saeed Yar Mabashir Mein kheriyat se hoon....bas pakistan janey ki tayyariyaN ho rahi haiN...sept meiN. tumhari is mohabbat bhari daad se mera hosla baRha hai.... Buhut nawazish aur mohabbateN! Saeed
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Post by saeed on Jul 18, 2008 15:50:05 GMT 5
Saeed Khan,
Hasb e riwayat bohat jazb se kahi gaee ghazal hai ye bhi... Lafz o maani ke naey nawailey se tajrubey aapki infaradiyat bhi hai aur Ahmed Faraz Sahib ki shaery ki khushbu ka ehsas bhi dilatey hain. Apney sheri asasey main Ik taza izafa Mubarak ! Khas tor pr ye sher kitna piyara hai,
Ham ne abhi khushboo ki kahani naheN kholi KiyuN shehr-e-lab-o-gosh ko afsaaney ki zidd hai
Noshi Gilani Noshi saheba, Buhut nawazish aapki.... Faraz sb ki khusboo aa jaye to phir aur kiya chahiye....kash! aapki daad se mujhey tavanayi mili hai. aadaab Saeed
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Post by saeed on Jul 18, 2008 15:53:06 GMT 5
saeed sahab boht umda ghazal aur hasb e riwayat naya usloob taazgi ka ehsaas hota hy aap ki shairi parh kar Reh reh ke usey dekhna acha naheN lekin Her naqsh ko aankhoN meiN uter jaaney ki zidd hai khoob kaha aap nay yeh shair daad qabool kijiay razi Razi bhai, sab aapki is khubsurat mehfil aur mohabbatoN ka faiz hai...werna ham tifl-e-maktab kahan. Buhut nawazish!!! Saeed
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 20, 2008 1:05:19 GMT 5
eik zer-e-tameer ghazal Sukhanwar ki tesri salgireh ki nazr..... Rukney ka irada tha, guzer jaaney ki zidd hai Phir josh-e-musafat kisi deewaney ki zidd hai
Ham ne abhi khushboo ki kahani naheN kholi KiyuN shehr-e-lab-o-gosh ko afsaaney ki zidd hai?
Reh reh ke usey dekhna acha naheN lekin Her naqsh ko aankhoN meiN uter jaaney ki zidd hai
ApnoN ke wo andaaz na pehley se maraasim Guzrey hooey din-raat ko duhraaney ki zidd hai
Maloom naheN wehshat-e-be-faiz januN ko Jeeney ki tamanna hai keh marr jaaney ki zidd hai
Us reig-e-rawaaN se gul-o-gulzar ki khwahish Ye ishq nahen hai kisi deewaney ki zidd hai
izafa:
aabaad hai ujRey hooey chehroN ki wafa se ye shehr keh basti nahen, veeraney ke zidd hai
kis ramz ka aazaar khula chashm-e-januN per ab hamko samajhney ki na samjhaaney ki zidd haiHasab e ma,amool khoobsoorat ghazal Saeed sahib daad qabool farmaiyay
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Post by saeed on Jul 21, 2008 5:20:38 GMT 5
Buhut nawazish Rafi bhai. saeed
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 21, 2008 13:37:41 GMT 5
Saeed Bhai! Bahut tawanaa ghazal hai. Tamaam ashaar khoob haiN. Aur tamaam per daad o tehsin lazim hai, lihaza qabool kijiay.
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Post by saeed on Jul 22, 2008 4:24:03 GMT 5
Saeed Bhai! Bahut tawanaa ghazal hai. Tamaam ashaar khoob haiN. Aur tamaam per daad o tehsin lazim hai, lihaza qabool kijiay.
Buhut Nawazish Atif bhai is zarra-nawazi keliye! saeed
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 24, 2008 18:24:02 GMT 5
ghazal bahut umda aur mafaheem kay etabar say nikhri hoe ghaazal hay matla ka dosra misra aur dosray sher ka misra e sani ko dobara dekh lejeay kasao aur bunat kay sath naeeyat aisi nahi chaheay misray kuch aur taqaza keay daytay heiN aur ye sher tu bara umda hay Reh reh ke usey dekhna acha naheN lekin Her naqsh ko aankhoN meiN uter jaaney ki zidd hai
aqeel
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Post by saeed on Jul 28, 2008 6:37:22 GMT 5
Buhut nawazish Aqueel saheb....daad aur mashwara donoN keliye.
mamnoon, Saeed
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Post by kanwal on Jul 30, 2008 0:57:12 GMT 5
eik zer-e-tameer ghazal Sukhanwar ki tesri salgireh ki nazr..... Rukney ka irada tha, guzer jaaney ki zidd hai Phir josh-e-musafat kisi deewaney ki zidd hai
Ham ne abhi khushboo ki kahani naheN kholi KiyuN shehr-e-lab-o-gosh ko afsaaney ki zidd hai?
Reh reh ke usey dekhna acha naheN lekin Her naqsh ko aankhoN meiN uter jaaney ki zidd hai
ApnoN ke wo andaaz na pehley se maraasim Guzrey hooey din-raat ko duhraaney ki zidd hai
Maloom naheN wehshat-e-be-faiz januN ko Jeeney ki tamanna hai keh marr jaaney ki zidd hai
Us reig-e-rawaaN se gul-o-gulzar ki khwahish Ye ishq nahen hai kisi deewaney ki zidd hai
izafa:
aabaad hai ujRey hooey chehroN ki wafa se ye shehr keh basti nahen, veeraney ke zidd hai
kis ramz ka aazaar khula chashm-e-januN per ab hamko samajhney ki na samjhaaney ki zidd hai kehte haiN ziyada zid karna acha nahiN hota ,...
Lekin kabhi kabhaar maan aur nafaasat se zid ki jaaye to bhali lagti hai, Aapki ghazL ki taraH ,...
alag ranG jis tarah Aap ne paish kiya hai Qaabil e tareef hai,...
Daad e gulshan Aapki nazR ,...
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Post by saeed on Aug 1, 2008 9:32:00 GMT 5
eik zer-e-tameer ghazal Sukhanwar ki tesri salgireh ki nazr..... Rukney ka irada tha, guzer jaaney ki zidd hai Phir josh-e-musafat kisi deewaney ki zidd hai
Ham ne abhi khushboo ki kahani naheN kholi KiyuN shehr-e-lab-o-gosh ko afsaaney ki zidd hai?
Reh reh ke usey dekhna acha naheN lekin Her naqsh ko aankhoN meiN uter jaaney ki zidd hai
ApnoN ke wo andaaz na pehley se maraasim Guzrey hooey din-raat ko duhraaney ki zidd hai
Maloom naheN wehshat-e-be-faiz januN ko Jeeney ki tamanna hai keh marr jaaney ki zidd hai
Us reig-e-rawaaN se gul-o-gulzar ki khwahish Ye ishq nahen hai kisi deewaney ki zidd hai
izafa:
aabaad hai ujRey hooey chehroN ki wafa se ye shehr keh basti nahen, veeraney ke zidd hai
kis ramz ka aazaar khula chashm-e-januN per ab hamko samajhney ki na samjhaaney ki zidd hai kehte haiN ziyada zid karna acha nahiN hota ,...
Lekin kabhi kabhaar maan aur nafaasat se zid ki jaaye to bhali lagti hai, Aapki ghazL ki taraH ,...
alag ranG jis tarah Aap ne paish kiya hai Qaabil e tareef hai,...
Daad e gulshan Aapki nazR ,...Kanwal Buhut nawazish is pzeerayi keliye. Saeed
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