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GHAZAL
Nov 23, 2008 2:15:18 GMT 5
Post by dr.najma shaheen on Nov 23, 2008 2:15:18 GMT 5
Kisi ko main abb tak khuda likh rahi hun
Mai mujrim nahin par saza likh rahi hun
Kia jiss nay daaman ko khushiun se khaali
Bana gia bad dua ,uss ko dua likh rahi hun
Bana hay jo abb tak sabbab tairgi ka
Sittaarun ki uss ko ridda likh rahi hun
Kia khaak ko aasmaan ess dil ne
Main zakhmun ko hi dawa likh rahi hun
Barasnay kay qabil kabhi bhi nahin tha jo
Main ghunghor us ko ghatta likh rahi hun
Main hun heer apni wafa main abhi tak
So raanjhay ki khud ko sada likh rahi hun
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GHAZAL
Nov 23, 2008 13:02:57 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 23, 2008 13:02:57 GMT 5
aap ki ghazal parhi aur khushi hui k is main pehlay k muqaablay main boht behtri aai hy aap ny behr ko samajhnay ki koshish ki hy chand khaamiaan hain umeed hy aap unhain bhi door kar lain gee doosra shair is tarah kar lain
Kia jiss nay daaman ko khushiun se khaali main us k liay bhi dua likh rahi hun
4th shair main bhi mamooli tabdeeli ki zaroorat hy
Kia khaak ko aasmaan mayray dil ne Main zakhmun ko hi ab dawa likh rahi hun
aik aur shair main bhi mamooli tarmeem ho gi
Barasnay kay qabil nahi tha kabhi jo Main ghunghor us ko ghatta likh rahi hun
umeed hy aap isi tara shairi ka safar jaari rakhain gee
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GHAZAL
Nov 24, 2008 23:09:27 GMT 5
Post by dr.najma shaheen on Nov 24, 2008 23:09:27 GMT 5
sir,,,,bahut bahut shukria,,,is tabdeeli ki waja se kafi faraq parra hay..insha allah main koshish jari rakhun gi...
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jooni
sukhanshanas
Posts: 480
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GHAZAL
Nov 28, 2008 23:51:02 GMT 5
Post by jooni on Nov 28, 2008 23:51:02 GMT 5
Boht achhi koshish hai. Khoob.
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GHAZAL
Nov 29, 2008 23:30:19 GMT 5
Post by dr.najma shaheen on Nov 29, 2008 23:30:19 GMT 5
jooni sahib bahut bahut shukryia,,,,,
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GHAZAL
Nov 30, 2008 22:23:04 GMT 5
Post by uzair143 on Nov 30, 2008 22:23:04 GMT 5
very nice
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GHAZAL
Dec 10, 2008 23:51:56 GMT 5
Post by dr.najma shaheen on Dec 10, 2008 23:51:56 GMT 5
thanks uzair sahib,,,
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maya
rukn
Posts: 143
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GHAZAL
Dec 16, 2008 13:12:11 GMT 5
Post by maya on Dec 16, 2008 13:12:11 GMT 5
Najma jee
acha likha aap nay.dad qabool kejeay. waslam
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GHAZAL
Dec 25, 2008 19:58:05 GMT 5
Post by dr.najma shaheen on Dec 25, 2008 19:58:05 GMT 5
thanks maya....
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GHAZAL
Dec 28, 2008 1:01:40 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Dec 28, 2008 1:01:40 GMT 5
Wahhhhhhhh
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GHAZAL
Dec 29, 2008 17:46:53 GMT 5
Post by dr.najma shaheen on Dec 29, 2008 17:46:53 GMT 5
thanku sir....
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Pommy
ibtidaai rukn
Posts: 17
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GHAZAL
Feb 4, 2009 10:32:22 GMT 5
Post by Pommy on Feb 4, 2009 10:32:22 GMT 5
Bohat Achi Ghazal Hay App ki.Daad qabool kejeay
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GHAZAL
Feb 5, 2009 22:34:40 GMT 5
Post by dr.najma shaheen on Feb 5, 2009 22:34:40 GMT 5
thanks atif sahib,,,,
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GHAZAL
Jul 31, 2009 15:06:46 GMT 5
Post by dr.najma shaheen on Jul 31, 2009 15:06:46 GMT 5
thank u sir
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GHAZAL
Oct 27, 2009 20:11:33 GMT 5
Post by HASIB RANA on Oct 27, 2009 20:11:33 GMT 5
BOHAT ACH,HE KAWISH ... KEEP POSTING
BE HAPPY
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