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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 19, 2008 22:06:37 GMT 5
rafi sahab aik acchi radeef k sath bohot umda gazal kahi hay aap nay. main razi sahab ki raiy say ittafaq krta hoon k radeef ko bohot umdagi say nibhatay hoay bohot aala khayalat gazal main daikhnay ko milain hain. dad qabool kijiay zagham abidi Bohat bohat shukria Zaigham sahib
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 19, 2008 22:08:38 GMT 5
Rafi sahib! Bahut umda aur mukhtalif ghazal. Aik achhootaa andaz paish kia hai aap nay. Daad Hazir.
Atif Mirza sahib bohat bohat shukria
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Post by kanwal on Jun 19, 2008 23:39:07 GMT 5
Waah bohat khoob ,....
rafi jee kya kahooN Aapki har tehreer dil se nikalti hai aur dil talak pohnchti hai ,...
daad ke guL aapki nazR ,...
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Post by saeed on Jun 20, 2008 4:10:00 GMT 5
Rafi bhai
Buhut umda aur munfarid ghazal hai aur radeef bhi taro-taza hai.
“Dil pe tehreer kon hai, mein hooN” waaahhhh
aur ye sher jismein asatiza ki classiki riwayat apni poori shguftagi ke sath jhalakti hai, mujhey iski besakhtgi buhut achi lagi:
dasht mein khud he dekh lo ja ker qais ka pir kon hai, mein hoon
Dheron daad!
Saeed
PS. Aap sirf qais he ke nahen is mehfil ke bhi pir hain!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 20, 2008 21:50:14 GMT 5
Rafi bhai Buhut umda aur munfarid ghazal hai aur radeef bhi taro-taza hai. “Dil pe tehreer kon hai, mein hooN” waaahhhh aur ye sher jismein asatiza ki classiki riwayat apni poori shguftagi ke sath jhalakti hai, mujhey iski besakhtgi buhut achi lagi: dasht mein khud he dekh lo ja ker qais ka pir kon hai, mein hoon Dheron daad! Saeed PS. Aap sirf qais he ke nahen is mehfil ke bhi pir hain! Bohat bohat shukria Saeed sahib husn e zan hay aap ka
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 20, 2008 22:03:49 GMT 5
Waah bohat khoob ,....
rafi jee kya kahooN Aapki har tehreer dil se nikalti hai aur dil talak pohnchti hai ,...
daad ke guL aapki nazR ,... Bohat bohat shukria Kanwal behan
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Post by tarana on Jun 21, 2008 0:04:36 GMT 5
Rafi jee Nice poetry likhi aap ne, pur aser, umda aur mukhtalif andaaz. kia kehnay. Daad Hazir
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 21, 2008 1:06:51 GMT 5
Rafi jee Nice poetry likhi aap ne, pur aser, umda aur mukhtalif andaaz. kia kehnay. Daad Hazir Shukria Tarana sahiba
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Post by ramishjaan on Jun 28, 2008 17:25:52 GMT 5
AOA rafi bhai dili mazraat ke deer se reply kar raha ho,n ghazal to kafi din pehle parh li thi bas susti ke bayes reply nahikar saka ........... aj aik mukhtalif Dr rafi se mulaqat karwei he is ghazal ne aur bohat ache lage hume yeh wale dr rafi sahib bhi hamesha ki tarha aik burdbar halka sa tabasum liye dr sahib dili dad qabol ki jiye aur sada khush rahiye isi tarha apne khobsorat klam se nawazte rahiye ameen suma ameen waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 28, 2008 22:18:54 GMT 5
AOA rafi bhai dili mazraat ke deer se reply kar raha ho,n ghazal to kafi din pehle parh li thi bas susti ke bayes reply nahikar saka ........... aj aik mukhtalif Dr rafi se mulaqat karwei he is ghazal ne aur bohat ache lage hume yeh wale dr rafi sahib bhi hamesha ki tarha aik burdbar halka sa tabasum liye dr sahib dili dad qabol ki jiye aur sada khush rahiye isi tarha apne khobsorat klam se nawazte rahiye ameen suma ameen waslam mukhlis ramishjaan Bohat Bohat shukria Ramish Jaan sahib
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Post by rooh on Jun 29, 2008 14:01:41 GMT 5
Rafi bhai Aoa
bahot hi unusual radeef ke saath aap ne aik qamiyaad ghazal pesh ki haii..
bahot lutf aaya parh kar...aap ko humari aur se dheron daad
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 29, 2008 22:21:49 GMT 5
Rafi bhai Aoa bahot hi unusual radeef ke saath aap ne aik qamiyaad ghazal pesh ki haii.. bahot lutf aaya parh kar...aap ko humari aur se dheron daad Bohat shukria Rooh ji
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Post by Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy on Jul 6, 2008 0:09:32 GMT 5
Mohtram Rafi sahib, aap nay ye ghazal keh kar kamal kar diya hai, bohot hee khooooooob. wah wah
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 6, 2008 22:51:51 GMT 5
Mohtram Rafi sahib, aap nay ye ghazal keh kar kamal kar diya hai, bohot hee khooooooob. wah wah shukria saffy sahib
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Post by suhailabbaskhan on Jul 8, 2008 20:37:27 GMT 5
achii ghazal hay.ik tayree ki bajaey ik tyree chaheay .shyed composing ki ghaltii hay. faela tun mfaelun felun
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