N@ina
ibtidaai rukn
Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
Posts: 33
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Post by N@ina on Jul 4, 2007 19:42:43 GMT 5
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 4, 2007 21:03:51 GMT 5
ab myri raey qadray mukhtalif hay, is nazm mein bahut ziada editing ki zaroorat hay kiun kae aik misray bahut dheelay hein chust bandisg aur nibhao ka aqreena is ko khoobsorat bana sakta hay magar filwaqt kamzoor misrooN ki maujodgi meiN us tarha nahi dekha jasakta jis tarha ap kay us tukray ko dekha gia tha
aqeel malik
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 4, 2007 23:11:08 GMT 5
Naina ji maiN Aqeel Malik sahib say itefaaq nahi kar sakta bohat khoobsoorat nazm hay meri janib say daad qabool farmaiay
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Post by Tanweer on Jul 5, 2007 12:29:15 GMT 5
Naina Sahiba!
Aik khoobsurat nazm aapki, achay khiyalaat ki hamil...
pasand aaee
daad hazir hay
Tanweer
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Post by sumanshah on Jul 5, 2007 20:47:57 GMT 5
adaaab naina
lafz lafz khushboo hay baat baat mehki hay ye aihsaas hay jo ye khubsoorat nazm parh kar deer tak mery dil kay andar rahaaa.aik dilkash or umda tehreer tumaray aihsaas kay jamaal ka monh bolta saboot hayyyy .daad qabool karo.
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Post by khalid on Jul 6, 2007 6:00:22 GMT 5
nainaN saaheba maiN bhi rafi sb ka ham nava hooN! der asl aqeel saaheb ka meiyaar is bezm se kaafi buland hai! us tak phonchne k liye kaafi riyaazat ki zaroorat hai! lekin aapki nazm meiree qaabiliyat aur meiyaar ki had tak intehaii khoobsoorat hai!
daad qubool keeje!
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 16:42:17 GMT 5
Dil ko chhooti huwi nazm.
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