N@ina
ibtidaai rukn
Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
Posts: 33
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Post by N@ina on Jun 28, 2007 16:10:12 GMT 5
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 28, 2007 23:58:32 GMT 5
Bohat Khoobsoorat Nazm naina ji daad qabool farmaiay
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Post by kanwal on Jun 29, 2007 0:41:40 GMT 5
khoob ,.... Daad ke phool aapke naaM ,..
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 29, 2007 1:01:11 GMT 5
pehli bar aap ki koi tehreer parhi dilkash andaz hy aap ki poetry ka daad qabool kijiay than razi
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Post by sumanshah on Jun 29, 2007 10:36:27 GMT 5
Adaaaaaaaaaaab nainaa
nazm apnay andar dilkashi kay hazar rang liyee hoyee hay.kuch kehti hui ye nazm seedhay dil mein utr giyii dheeron daad qabool kareen.
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N@ina
ibtidaai rukn
Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
Posts: 33
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Post by N@ina on Jun 30, 2007 3:19:51 GMT 5
Bohat Khoobsoorat Nazm naina ji daad qabool farmaiay Nawazish Mohtaram, aap ki daad se bohut hosla afzai hui hai meri.
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N@ina
ibtidaai rukn
Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
Posts: 33
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Post by N@ina on Jun 30, 2007 3:20:48 GMT 5
khoob ,.... Daad ke phool aapke naaM ,.. Kanwal, bohut shukria, aap ke alfaaz aap ke naam or pholon ki tarah mehak rahe hain.
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N@ina
ibtidaai rukn
Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
Posts: 33
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Post by N@ina on Jun 30, 2007 3:22:29 GMT 5
pehli bar aap ki koi tehreer parhi dilkash andaz hy aap ki poetry ka daad qabool kijiay than razi Bohut shukriya Razi saheb, per ye is mehfil per pehli tehreer nahein hai, Meri kitab se bhi thread hai jo Suman Sahiba ne khola tha, us ko zaroor chack ker lijiye aa.............Shukriya
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N@ina
ibtidaai rukn
Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
Posts: 33
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Post by N@ina on Jun 30, 2007 3:24:26 GMT 5
Adaaaaaaaaaaab nainaa nazm apnay andar dilkashi kay hazar rang liyee hoyee hay.kuch kehti hui ye nazm seedhay dil mein utr giyii dheeron daad qabool kareen. Waa-lekum Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaab Suman.... Aap ne kya perh liya?
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 2, 2007 21:33:58 GMT 5
N@ina!
ap ki nazm ka matalia kia,aik khamosh nadi ki tarha behti hoe ghazal aur shaiyad jis behr mein likhi us ka bhi asar yaqeenan hoga kiun k us ka flow bhi nadi kay pani ki tarha rawan hota hay,nazm na'rasae kay us kachay rasty say guzarti mehsoos hoti hay jis par barish barasnay kay baad mehak ati hay, bawajood is kay ke nazm ka majmoe tasur acha hay magar ibtadae 4 satrein nazm kay is husn aur aik khas fiza ko gehna rahi hein in par nazr e sani chaheay
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N@ina
ibtidaai rukn
Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood.
Posts: 33
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Post by N@ina on Jul 4, 2007 19:41:44 GMT 5
N@ina! ap ki nazm ka matalia kia,aik khamosh nadi ki tarha behti hoe ghazal aur shaiyad jis behr mein likhi us ka bhi asar yaqeenan hoga kiun k us ka flow bhi nadi kay pani ki tarha rawan hota hay,nazm na'rasae kay us kachay rasty say guzarti mehsoos hoti hay jis par barish barasnay kay baad mehak ati hay, bawajood is kay ke nazm ka majmoe tasur acha hay magar ibtadae 4 satrein nazm kay is husn aur aik khas fiza ko gehna rahi hein in par nazr e sani chaheay Salaam Mohtaram Aapki zarah-nawazi ke isqader umdo tabsra peish kiya, saath hi is baat ki khushi hai ke aap ne is nazm ka ba-ghaur mutta-ala kiya, aap ko jahan per saaya nazar aaya us ki mein daad deti hon, wajah yun hai ke ye eik taweel nazm ka kuch hissa hai, lehazaa zauq-e-mutta-ala ki taskeen ke tehet mein ye poori nazm post ker rahi hon "Tum Khoobsurat Ho" umeed hai raayey se nawazeingey.....Shukriya
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Post by khalid on Jul 25, 2007 7:10:53 GMT 5
mutran,nam, khoobsoorat aur ta,assur se bherpoor nazm ke liye daad qubool keejey naina!!!
Undoubtedly genuine poetry communicates genuine sentiments, it comes naturally, and only from genuine people!!! keep it up
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Post by Tanweer on Jul 25, 2007 13:44:15 GMT 5
Naina Sahiba!
Ooper kiey gaey tamaam khushgawar tabsaron kay majmooaa mein hamaray bhi daad-o-tehseen k alfaaz ko shamil kar lejiey.
Aik khoobsurat pas^manzar mein achi tehreer.
Yon he likhti rahiey aur share karti rahiey
Tanweer
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 18:22:15 GMT 5
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