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Post by brijinder on Nov 7, 2008 2:01:38 GMT 5
Aik dost nay yeh nazm abhi mujh say share ki hai.Agar koi galti ho to zaroor bataayiay.
mori arj suno (nazar-e-khusro)
"mori arj suno dasatgeer peer" "mai ri' kahooN ka se maiN apne jiya ki peed" "nayiya bandho re' bandho re kinar-e-darya'" "more mandir ab kiyooN nahi aaye"
is soorat se arj sunate dard batate nayiya khete minnat karte rasta takte kitni sadiyaN beet gayi haiN ab ja kar ye bhed khula hai jis ko tum ne arj guzari jo tha haath pakadni wala jis ja laagi naoo tumahri jis se dukh ka daroo manga tore mandir meiN jo nahi aaya woh to tumhi the woh to tumhi the --------------------
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Post by jooni on Nov 7, 2008 16:23:01 GMT 5
Brijinder Sahib, piyari si nazm share kernay ka boht shukriya.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 8, 2008 23:32:07 GMT 5
khoobsoorat kalam share karnay ka shukria razi
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