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Post by tashiezaheer on Nov 6, 2008 2:00:22 GMT 5
GHAZAL
Wehshat e ishq ka bazaar sajaya hooa hey Baar, ham ne bhi ye ik baar uThaya hooa hey
Rah badli to hey sochoN ki, magar soch meN hooN ye bhi rasta usi dushman ka dikhaya hooa hey
Aankh meN khab jo boney naheeN deta mujh ko koi khushrang mrey dil meN samaya hooa hey
wahshateN auRh ke beTha he jo rastey meN trey ye bhi shayad tree dunya ka sataya hooa hey
phir dar e dil pe usi wehm ne dastak di hey aik muddat se jisey ham ne bhulaya hooa hey
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 6, 2008 10:54:03 GMT 5
tashie sahab aap boht din baad aay aur aik khoobsoorat ghazal parhnay ko dee humain agar waqfa taweel na ho kitna hi acha ho hum aap ka khoobsoorat klaam baar baar parhna chaahtay hain is ghazal k yoon to tmaam shair umda hain magar mujhy is shair nay ziaada lutf dia Rah badli to hey sochoN ki, magar soch meN hooN ye bhi rasta usi dushman ka dikhaya hooa hey boht see daad aap ki nazr thanx razi
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Post by azeezbelgaumi on Nov 6, 2008 12:31:40 GMT 5
Zaheer bhai ..... Is Khubsurat gazal par hamari dad qubul kijiyega... Mushkil magar badi pyari zameen hai.... Zaban nihayat umda hai... "....Dushman ka dikhaya hua hay" wala shair umda hai..Subhanallah.. Azeez Belgaumi
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Post by Akif Ghani Malik on Nov 6, 2008 15:43:02 GMT 5
wahshateN auRh ke beTha he jo rastey meN trey ye bhi shayad tree dunya ka sataya hooa hey wah Tashi Zaheer sb wah, bahut khoob kia kehne GHAZAL Wehshat e ishq ka bazaar sajaya hooa hey Baar, ham ne bhi ye ik baar uThaya hooa hey Rah badli to hey sochoN ki, magar soch meN hooN ye bhi rasta usi dushman ka dikhaya hooa hey Aankh meN khab jo boney naheeN deta mujh ko koi khushrang mrey dil meN samaya hooa hey wahshateN auRh ke beTha he jo rastey meN trey ye bhi shayad tree dunya ka sataya hooa hey phir dar e dil pe usi wehm ne dastak di hey aik muddat se jisey ham ne bhulaya hooa hey
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Post by jooni on Nov 6, 2008 17:21:45 GMT 5
Boht khoob Tashie Sahib. Daad qubool kijiye.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 6, 2008 22:45:30 GMT 5
Tashei sahib Bohat khoob
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Post by tashiezaheer on Nov 7, 2008 3:06:06 GMT 5
tashie sahab aap boht din baad aay aur aik khoobsoorat ghazal parhnay ko dee humain agar waqfa taweel na ho kitna hi acha ho hum aap ka khoobsoorat klaam baar baar parhna chaahtay hain is ghazal k yoon to tmaam shair umda hain magar mujhy is shair nay ziaada lutf dia Rah badli to hey sochoN ki, magar soch meN hooN ye bhi rasta usi dushman ka dikhaya hooa hey boht see daad aap ki nazr thanx razi Razi Bhai, Ghazal pasand karney ka baihad shukriya! Is saal ka baishtar hissa badqismati sey beemari ki nazr hogaya. Heart attack samet mutaddad iqsaam ki beemarieoN se mulaqaat rahi. Khuda Kuda karktey, ab kaheeN sans dobara lainey ki nobat aaee hey. Abh bhi mukammal taur pe sehatyaab naheeN hoon. Is doraan jahaN jahaN mauqa mila, SUKHANWAR meN khamoshi sey hi sahi, shirkat karta raha hooN. Aap jis mehnat aur janfishani sey, SHKHANWAR ko batadreej aagey baRhha rehey heN, aur is adabi mehfil ko wasee tar kar rahey heN, uske liey dili mubarakbaad ke saath sath, meN Allah (SWT) ki Bargah meN, mukammal ijzo o inkasari ke saath, aap ki kamiabioN ke liey dast e du'a daraz kiey rakhta hooN. Noshi aur Saeed ki shaadi meN shareek na ho sakney ka bohat afsos hey mujhey laikin khushi is baat ki hey ke aap aur Biradaram Hussain Majrooh shareek ho sakey. Is sislsiley meN, Aaap ka mazmoon bohat "KHOOBSOORAT" tha. Men ney kaee baar paRha aur har baar utna hi lutf uThaya. Dili du'a hey ke Allah (SWT) Saeed aur Noshi ko jahan bhar ki khushioN ki daulat se maala maal kar dey, Ameen
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Post by tashiezaheer on Nov 7, 2008 3:11:56 GMT 5
Zaheer bhai ..... Is Khubsurat gazal par hamari dad qubul kijiyega... Mushkil magar badi pyari zameen hai.... Zaban nihayat umda hai... "....Dushman ka dikhaya hua hay" wala shair umda hai..Subhanallah.. Azeez Belgaumi Aziz Bhai, Baihad mamnoon hooN aapka ke apney meri kaawish ko pasandeedgi ki sanad ata farmaee. Aap se ek w'ada kiya tha jo meri kuch majboorioN ki waja se, ab tak wafa naheen ho saka. Jald hi Insha Allah. Du'aoN meN yaad rakhney ki darkhast hey aap se.
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Post by tashiezaheer on Nov 7, 2008 3:15:27 GMT 5
wahshateN auRh ke beTha he jo rastey meN trey ye bhi shayad tree dunya ka sataya hooa hey wah Tashi Zaheer sb wah, bahut khoob kia kehne Aziz e Mohtaram, Men shukrguzaar hooN aapka aur ujhey azhad khushi hey ke Aap ne sher pasand farmaya. Khush rahey! GHAZAL Wehshat e ishq ka bazaar sajaya hooa hey Baar, ham ne bhi ye ik baar uThaya hooa hey Rah badli to hey sochoN ki, magar soch meN hooN ye bhi rasta usi dushman ka dikhaya hooa hey Aankh meN khab jo boney naheeN deta mujh ko koi khushrang mrey dil meN samaya hooa hey wahshateN auRh ke beTha he jo rastey meN trey ye bhi shayad tree dunya ka sataya hooa hey phir dar e dil pe usi wehm ne dastak di hey aik muddat se jisey ham ne bhulaya hooa hey
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Post by tashiezaheer on Nov 7, 2008 3:16:28 GMT 5
Boht khoob Tashie Sahib. Daad qubool kijiye. Jooni, Aap ki daad ka baihad shukriya.
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Post by tashiezaheer on Nov 7, 2008 3:20:03 GMT 5
Rafi Bhai, Baihad khushi hooi aap ki tahreer paRh ke. Aap ke operation ki ittala mili thi. Du'aooN meN shamoliat to meN ne bhi ki thi. Shukr hey Khuda ka ke aap khair o Aafiat se heN. Ghazal pasand karney ka shukria.
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Post by zaki on Feb 28, 2009 12:40:40 GMT 5
Bahut khoobsorat sharing .... share karne ka bahut shukria Sada khush raheay...
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