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Post by neelofar on Jul 11, 2007 21:20:29 GMT 5
AB KE BARAS
Ai umr e rawaN aa paas mere ek raaz ki baat btani hai ek kwaab sunana hai tujh ko el derd ki tees jo dil me hai uss ka bhi rang dekhana hai ai umr e rawaN.................... yeh neem shabi ki khamoshi mahsoor hon maiN san'nate me ek khouf sa zahn o dil ko lage tanhaayi bhi yeh chupke se kahe ai umr e rawaN aaa................. tujh se to faqat kahna hai yahi raftaar ko apne kam rakhna eek shakhas se milne ki khatir milne ki gharee jo bhi thahree ab ke baras ya agli sadi ai umr e rawaN kuch dair thaher aa pass mere........aa pass........
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Post by hooriya on Jul 11, 2007 22:08:50 GMT 5
waah buhat hi khoob...zabardastt nazm aapki....dil ko chooti hui.... buhat saari daad iss nazm k naam
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 11, 2007 22:34:33 GMT 5
Neelofer ji aap ki nazm bhi twana hoti hay
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Post by kanwal on Sept 12, 2007 0:08:50 GMT 5
"AB KE BARAS" aik bohat hi khubsoorat si nazM hai jiske liye dheroN daad k phool aapki nazr ,...
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 9, 2007 10:46:52 GMT 5
neelofar sahiba aap ki yeh nazm pata nahin kaysay itna arsa meri nazron sy ojhal rahi bohat khoobsooorat aur rawan dawan andaz hy aap ka thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 15, 2007 14:16:37 GMT 5
Umda khayal, Khoobsoorat andaz say buna hai alfaz ko app nay! Keep it up
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Post by dr.najma shaheen on Nov 5, 2008 17:08:29 GMT 5
BAHUT HI KHOOBSURAT NAZM HAY ,,,HER AIK KI RUADAAD
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Post by jooni on Nov 7, 2008 0:58:55 GMT 5
Boht khoob Neelofer Sahiba. Daad hazir hai.
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