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Gazal3
Nov 1, 2008 18:23:12 GMT 5
Post by akhtarshumaar on Nov 1, 2008 18:23:12 GMT 5
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Gazal3
Nov 1, 2008 21:26:01 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 1, 2008 21:26:01 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob Akhtar bhai
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Gazal3
Nov 1, 2008 23:00:43 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 1, 2008 23:00:43 GMT 5
marnay walay rizq kamaanay aay hain uffff akhtar shumaar itna dard aur dukh aik manzar naqsh ho jata hy is misray ko parh kar saari ghazl khoobsoorat hay thanx razi
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jooni
sukhanshanas
Posts: 480
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Gazal3
Nov 2, 2008 23:30:57 GMT 5
Post by jooni on Nov 2, 2008 23:30:57 GMT 5
Akhtar Sahib, Boht khoobsoorat, boht umdah.
"Door watan se haadsay ki tafseel na poochh Marnay walay rizq kamanay aa'ay thay"
Wahh, daad qubool kijiye janab.
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Gazal3
Nov 5, 2008 17:49:26 GMT 5
Post by akhtarshumaar on Nov 5, 2008 17:49:26 GMT 5
Dear Razi ,jooni,Rafi Tabasum Sahib : Hosla afzai ka behad shukrea ...
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Gazal3
Nov 6, 2008 2:16:15 GMT 5
Post by tashiezaheer on Nov 6, 2008 2:16:15 GMT 5
Akhtar Bhai, Do sher bohat hi pasand aaey heN is ghal meN. Yaar na samjhey, AankhoN meN barsaat liey Ham nafrat ki aag bujhaney aaey they aur Door watan se haadsey ki tafseel na pooch Marney waley rizq kamaney aaey they. DheroN daad aur mubarakbaad
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zaki
sukhanshanas
Posts: 446
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Gazal3
Dec 8, 2008 13:10:23 GMT 5
Post by zaki on Dec 8, 2008 13:10:23 GMT 5
Bahut he umdah ghazal ..... bahut sari daad qabool farmaeay.....
Sada khush raheay....
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