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Post by neelofar on Oct 28, 2008 18:06:02 GMT 5
G H A Z A L *************
Jab bhi tufaan ko sahil pe thaherte dekha jo bhi they reit k gher unn ko bikherte dekha
sath hum chal pare kuch rakht e safer sath liye jab qareeb aagyii manzil to bicherte dekha
jab ye ehssas huaa hai ye sayahi shab bherr humm ne doobe huyee suraj ko ubherte dekha
jis ko mazloom k zalim ki bhi phchan na thee aise qanoon ko ek roz bdalty dekha
tu na ho phir bhi teri yaad meraa sermayaa inn hi yadoN se kbhi dil ko bhaltey dekha
haal e dil apnaa sunane ko jo sochaa maiN ne apni her saaNs ko ash'aar me dhaltey dekha.
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Post by jooni on Oct 28, 2008 22:03:32 GMT 5
Boht hi umdah koshish hai Neelofer Sahiba. Daad hazir hai, Qubool kijiye.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Oct 29, 2008 21:16:13 GMT 5
Nellofer jii khoob shairi farma rahi haiN aap
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 27, 2008 23:58:15 GMT 5
neelofar sahiba boht dheema lehja hy khoobsoorat andaz achi lagti hy aysi dheemi dheemi shairi daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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Post by neelofar on Nov 28, 2008 13:57:30 GMT 5
Addab !!! salamat raheN....Ammin, mujh jaisi tifl e maktab ko saraha aor twaajja di... aap bhaiyon ka be had shukria...apni shyri ke hwale se eik sher k.......
ZER NHIN MANGTI, DOULAT, NA HUKUMAT DERKAR MERE MOULA MUJHE LAFZON KA KHAZANA DEDEY
Talib e Duaa Neelofar
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