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Post by Zagham Abidi on Sept 27, 2008 17:22:27 GMT 5
mohotram arakeen
mujhay aik nazm ki talash hay. agar mujhay is nzm k baray main maloomat mil jain to aap ka mumnoon hoon ga. nazm ka aik mista ye hay.
reet is nagar ki hay aur janay kub say hay
is nazm k poet aur kitab ka nam chahiay
zagham abidi
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Post by suhailabbaskhan on Sept 28, 2008 18:46:51 GMT 5
yeh nazm oriental college (punjab university )kay aik ustaad murgoob husain tahir ki hay woh aab bhi shuba urdu main perha rahay hain un ki hay.kitab ka maloom naheen chapi hay ya nahain.yeh jisay aap misra keh rahay hain yeh radeef hay.nazm kay teen shair hazir hain: titlioon kay mosam main nochna gulaboon ka reet iss nagar ki hay our janay kub say hay daikh ker parindoon ko bandhna nishanoon ka reet iss nagar ki hay our janay kub say hay tum abhi naey ho na iss liey prashan ho asman ki janib iss tarah say mut daikho aftain jub aati hain tutna azaboon ka reet iss nagar ki hay our janay kub say hay khamashi mera shawa guftgoo hunr uss ka meri bay gunahi ko lig kasay manian gay baat baat per jub keh mangna hawalon ka reet iss nagar ki hay our janay kub say hay murgoob husain tahir sahib ka number meri aik dairy main tha jo pakistan reh gaii hay.oriental college kay aik or ustad dr kamran ka number hazir hay aap un say mergoob sahib ka number lay saktay hain. dr kamran mobile:0323.4519290 off:042.9210832 res:042.6660984
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Post by suhailabbaskhan on Sept 28, 2008 19:02:31 GMT 5
aik or tasheeh yeh nazm naheen gazal hay.
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Sept 28, 2008 21:53:44 GMT 5
suhail sahab
aap ka bohot shukria k aap nay tafseel say jawab dia aur ghazal talash kernay main mairi madad ki. main bohot dinon say is ghazal ki talash main tha lakin kamyab nahin ho raha tha. mujhay yaqeen tha k is forum per zaroor koi mairi rhanumai ker day ga. aap k bataiy hoay no per main aaj hi rabta karoon ga. aik bar phir aap ka shukria
dr zagham abidi
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Post by Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy on Sept 29, 2008 4:36:52 GMT 5
shehr k ye bashinday nafratoon ko bo kar bhi intzaar kartay hain fasl ho mohabat ke kho kar haqeeqat ko dhondna saraboon ka reet iss nagar ke hai aur janay kab say hai
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Post by miim miim mughal on Sept 29, 2008 10:02:22 GMT 5
liijiya jnaab.. ye' naZm yooN hy.. suhail abbas khan SaaHib mulaaHiZa' kiijay .. ye' ghazal nahiiN naZm hy..
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Post by Atif Mirza on Sept 29, 2008 16:59:21 GMT 5
Aray 3M kia kehnay! Bahut shukriya. Bhai kaisay ho? KahaN ho? KiyooN ho? Kab ho? Kis tarah ho???
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Sept 29, 2008 18:09:51 GMT 5
atiq sahab
shukria
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Sept 29, 2008 18:13:11 GMT 5
mughal sahab
poori nazm bhajnay k liay shukria
zagham abidi
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Post by suhailabbaskhan on Sept 29, 2008 19:02:03 GMT 5
mughal sahib aap ki waja say mujaj murgoob sahib say baat kera pari mergoob sahib ka mobile number hay: 0300.4311042 woh suhail bukhari per phD ker rraha hain.un say aaj he baat hoi hay.yeh gazal hay or un ki hay 1986#87 main saham e sahar main shaya huii thi.kitab abhii naheen chaphi.ager mergoob sahib say pochana ho tu puch liejay keh dr suhail abbas ki osaka university say aap ki baat huii thi.AAP uss shakhsh ki yadaash per shak ker rahay hain jisay kulyat e nazeer keh saat soo safhaaat or kaii asataza kay dewaan zabani yad hain.classical sahiery say jaeed sahiery tek ki dwaween ka hafiz hoon mian.7 th class main talism e hosh ruba sari perh dali thi .meray pass urdu ki 300 lughaat hain jin kay naam bhi aap nay kabi naheen sunay hoon gay.nazm ki mushoor aath kismain hain jinhain musamat kehtay hain .iss kaey ilawa bhi kaii iksaam hain .kutakhi ki mafi chahata hoon. niaz mund suhail abbas
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 2, 2008 9:11:46 GMT 5
Aray 3M kia kehnay! Bahut shukriya. Bhai kaisay ho? KahaN ho? KiyooN ho? Kab ho? Kis tarah ho??? .... aur janay kub sy ho
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Post by Sukhanwar on Oct 2, 2008 9:23:21 GMT 5
mughal sahib aap ki waja say mujaj murgoob sahib say baat kera pari mergoob sahib ka mobile number hay: 0300.4311042 woh suhail bukhari per phD ker rraha hain.un say aaj he baat hoi hay.yeh gazal hay or un ki hay 1986#87 main saham e sahar main shaya huii thi.kitab abhii naheen chaphi.ager mergoob sahib say pochana ho tu puch liejay keh dr suhail abbas ki osaka university say aap ki baat huii thi.AAP uss shakhsh ki yadaash per shak ker rahay hain jisay kulyat e nazeer keh saat soo safhaaat or kaii asataza kay dewaan zabani yad hain.classical sahiery say jaeed sahiery tek ki dwaween ka hafiz hoon mian.7 th class main talism e hosh ruba sari perh dali thi .meray pass urdu ki 300 lughaat hain jin kay naam bhi aap nay kabi naheen sunay hoon gay.nazm ki mushoor aath kismain hain jinhain musamat kehtay hain .iss kaey ilawa bhi kaii iksaam hain .kutakhi ki mafi chahata hoon. niaz mund suhail abbas suhail bhai kis ki jurrat hy k aap ki yaad daasht par shuk karay yeh bila shuba ghazal hy magar kisi kitab main isay nazm ki tara chaap dia gia isi liay mughal sahab ko ghalat fehmi ho gaai zaygham ny jub is ghazal k baaray main mujh sy poocha to main ny unhain kaha tha k woh yeh sawal forum par rakh dain wahan dr suhail abbaas mojood hain aap ki help kar dain gy umeed hy aap khayriat sy hon gay aik baat to bataain japan main eid kaysi hohti hy thanx razi
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Post by suhailabbaskhan on Oct 3, 2008 18:01:17 GMT 5
razi bhaii pata naheen kiss mood main tha mera lehja "khudaa e sukhan" wala ho giya jiss per mazrat kha hoon.werna "mun aanam keh maun danam".japan main eid manana yehi samja jata hay keh kisi musjid main namaz per li jaey.meray naseeb main tu woh bhi na huii .uss din bhi meri classes theian.osaka say aik Ghantay ki musafat per aik sher hay"kobey" wahan masjid hay, wahann bara ijtama hota hay.main pehlay her "fitra" day aaya tha.jo 1500 yen teqreeban 1000 Rs pakistani bantay hain .yeh aik aadmi ka hay.shayaed iss liey keh japan main mengaii bohaat hay.lakin tunkha keh lehhaz say mehngaii maloom naheen hoti.wasay aik "karayla" 150 yen yani 100 Rs pakistani ka hay.japan ki batain bataoon tu kai din lag jaian gay.or sufarnamoon say main bagi hoon.japan main itni khamoosi hay keh "shoor" ko tarass giaya hoon.itnay muhazab hain jitna naheen hona chaeay.sarak per aik pata bhi daikhain gay tu authanay ko dooar parain gain.japani khanay bohat manhgay hain achay hotal main 4 aadmi khana khain tu 60000 sath hazaar yen tuqreeban 40000 chalees hazaar pakistani Rs bill aata hay.lakin yahan tunkhaian bhi lakoon main haan.meri taraf say shakir ko eid galay milna.yahan galay milnay ka riwaaj naheen hay werna kisii say milnay ki kosish kerta.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 4, 2008 1:11:17 GMT 5
Dr Sahib aap bahut baRay imsaan haiN. Kitni aajizi say aap nay nay maazrat talab ki hai keh koi zalim say zalim insaan bhi un ki maazat qabool karnay kay ilawah kuchh nahiN kar sakay ga. Hum aap ki baat paRh kar khuda kay shukar guzar haiN keh uss nay hamaiN apnay hi watan maiN rakha, kum az kum apnoN say doori ka fasla ghanToN maiN hai dinoN maiN nahiN. Multan say mera ghar sirf 5 ghanTay ki musafat per hai. Laikin maiN 10 maah say ghar na jaa saka. Dr saheb dar asl aik qisam aur hay doori ki jiss maiN faslaa jismoN ki bajaay dil kay beech maiN hota hai. Aap dinoN ki doori kay bawajood apnoN kay qareeb hotay hoN gay magar hamra apnoN say fasla jismoN ka nahiN balkeh diloN ka hai.
MaiN khush tha jab tha bay sahara Keh phir saharoM nay gham diay haiN
ya phir
Woh bin maNgay mujhay maayoosiaN tuhfay maiN Khushi aksar duaaiN dainay walay chheen laitay haiN
MaiN Multan maiN kissi say milnay maiN itna sakoon nahiN mila jitna Razi bhai say milkay mila. Yeh Allah taalaa ki mehrbani hai un per. HamaiN inn kay akhlaq nay bahut mutassir kia. Inn say hamara dil ka rishta qaim ho gaya hai. Razi bhai ki inkisaari bhi kamal hai. Apnay aap ko bahut hi nafi kia huwa hai.
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Post by suhailabbaskhan on Oct 4, 2008 5:44:28 GMT 5
atif sahab main multan main 7 saal raha.lakin kismat ki khami keheay keh aap say mulaqat na ho saki.aap kay khyalat perh ker kushi huii.sukriya.sukriya ko japani main kehtay hain "arigatu guzaimastay" iss ka matlab hay"aap nay namumkin kam meray liay mumkin banaya".
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