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Post by Sukhanwar on Sept 17, 2008 23:25:54 GMT 5
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Sept 18, 2008 9:54:28 GMT 5
Bahut Khoob razi Sahib.............
Nasir Malik Sahib app k leay bahut sari daad ........... sada khush raheay.......
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Post by Ghazalsara on Sept 18, 2008 17:57:49 GMT 5
Salam,razi Bhai! kia hi behtar hota agar ham ye ghazal har sher par aap k tabsaray k saath daikhtay....ab aap nay hamain imtihan main daal dia.
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Post by nasirmalik on Sept 21, 2008 8:37:44 GMT 5
Dost! sada silamat rahain. aap ne mera kalam pasand kia, bohat shukria aor mein umeed karta hoon ke aap isi tarah meri hosla afzai karte rahain ge aor mujhe tawanaian milti rahain gi. Razi ki website b dil awaiz he aor rabtoon ka makhzan.
Nasir Malik
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Post by Sukhanwar on Sept 21, 2008 10:49:06 GMT 5
nasir sahab aap ki ghazal main ny hi post ki thee magar choonkay forum main boht see posts aur oms ka jawab dayna hota hy is liay main is par tabsra na kar saka aap ki ghzal achi hy baaz ashaar boht khoobsooorat hain magar baaz jaga humain kuch misray behr sy kharij nazar aatay hain 4th shair ka doosra misra 6th shair ka doosra misra daykhain yahan lafz payghamat ki adaaigi pghamat k taur par ho rahi hy 8th shair ka pehla misra drust nahin usay bhi check kijiay maqtay ka doosra misra bhi check kkijiay is main nasir suna keh main lafz kay baandha gia hy aap k haan ghazal k boht imkanaat hain magar aap ghazal kehtay hain to kahin kahin ujlat ka muzahira kartay huay misron par nazr e saani nahin kartay shaid umeed hy aap khayriat sy hon gay boht see muhabatain aap k liay thanx razi
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Post by nasirmalik on Sept 21, 2008 12:51:36 GMT 5
thanks Razi Bhai! mein ne yeh ghazal likhi, compose ki aur aap ko arsal kar di. aap ne nishan dehi kar ke ihsan kia. Nasir Malik
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Sept 22, 2008 19:12:22 GMT 5
Bohat Khoobsoorat ghazal Nasir Malik sahib
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Post by nasirmalik on Sept 23, 2008 11:05:27 GMT 5
Bohat Khoobsoorat ghazal Nasir Malik sahib[/quote aap ki hosla afzai ka boht shukria k aap ne mery sokhta lafazoon ko pasand kia. Nasir Malik]
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Post by nasirmalik on Sept 23, 2008 11:09:20 GMT 5
Bohat Khoobsoorat ghazal Nasir Malik sahib aap ka boht shukria ke aap ne mery sokhta lafzoon par tawaja di aor meri hosla afzai ki. Nasir Malik
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Sept 26, 2008 11:42:39 GMT 5
Nasir saheb
Razi ney bohat acha kiya ke hamen aap sey mutaarif kerwa diya..
khub likhtey hain aap hazoor....................
lekin Razi ki tarah kuch ashaar per achanbha mujhey bhi hua tha..
mein samjha shayad typo hua hoga zaroor......
ba haciyat-e majmooi bohat aala ghazal tehreer ki aap ney
daad hazir hay....
Khaksar
Qamar
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Post by Tanweer on Sept 27, 2008 4:16:27 GMT 5
Bohat omdaah Nasir Malik saheb
daad qabool kejeiy.
Tanweer
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Post by nasirmalik on Sept 27, 2008 11:36:39 GMT 5
Dear Qamar! yeh khushi to mujhe b hasil hoi aur bahami rabt ka sehra to razi k sar par hi bandhe ga. razi to azeem insan he. behar haal aap ki daad ka shukria. Nasir Malik
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jooni
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Post by jooni on Oct 9, 2008 2:18:43 GMT 5
Boht khoob Nasir Sahib. Daad hazir hai.
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