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Post by dnangrani on Aug 25, 2008 18:51:57 GMT 5
Gazal
Tapti dopahri mein har dam chanv chahe mera man Gunguni-si dhoop ko phir pal mein tarse mera man
Jab kshitij ke paar dekha kashtiyon ko doobte Saath unke doobte sooraj- sa doobe mera man.
shokhiaaN youvan ki, bachpan ki sharaarat beshumaar Dekhkar yaadoN ka sheesha tilmilaaye mera man.
gadishoN ki dhool mein dhaNste hai mere paanV jab Chatpataye chootne ko changulooN se mera man.
Bewafayi, berukhi uski rahi aadat sada Chupke -chupke tanha baitha aaj roye mera man
Baraha yaadon ke angnaayee mein ghoon aati hooN main Laakh usko main manaooN, par na mane mera man.
AndhiaoN mein bhi jale haiN aas ke Deepak sada Saaye mein unke hi Devi jhilmilaaye mera man.
Devi Nangrani
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Post by Sukhanwar on Aug 30, 2008 0:31:29 GMT 5
khoobsoorat andaz hy aap ka devi ji thanx razi
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Post by Tanweer on Aug 30, 2008 15:13:18 GMT 5
Devi Sahiba!
Khoob likha aap nay.
Tanweer
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Sept 1, 2008 6:15:33 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Devi g
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Post by ramishjaan on Sept 6, 2008 18:24:22 GMT 5
Salam Namaste Devi jee aj bohat arse ke bad ap ke umda uar pur taseer klam par nigah parhi bohat acha likha he dili dad qabol ki jyie waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy on Sept 7, 2008 15:30:05 GMT 5
wah wah
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Sept 10, 2008 13:47:18 GMT 5
Very Nice....
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Post by tmasood on Sept 11, 2008 3:56:10 GMT 5
acha likha hai aap ne devi jee
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