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Post by miim miim mughal on May 26, 2007 18:34:25 GMT 5
Qaabil-e-EHtraam daustu, saathiyo aur bzurgaan-e-suKhan.. Ghazal HaaZir-e-Khidmat hay...aap kii aaraa ka intiZaar rahygaa.
is baat maiN sab kuch'h hay magar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay us samt kau jaataa hooN jidhar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay dar-paish hay SaHraa kaa safar soo'ay chaman-zaar aur is pe'h sitam zaad-e-safar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay
kis sha'y kay tajas'sus maiN hau tum meHv-e-nazaara' afLaak kay us paar agar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay say'yaarchay tasKheer kiay jaataa hay insaaN.. aur is kii mushaq'qat ka camar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay ik Umr maHab'bat kii riyaaZat maiN guzaarii... ab chaak-e-gariibaaN kay digar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay aajaa'ay muyas'sar jau kabhi iLm kaa saagar....... piyaa say kay Liay Umr-e-KhiZar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay
dushnaam Traazii hay muGhal~ us kaa vaTiira'h jis shaKhS kay haathauN maiN hunar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay
miim miim mughal
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Post by khalid on May 26, 2007 18:55:53 GMT 5
mughal sb iss bezm meiN khush aamdeed! aapki ghazal peRh ker lutf aaya! meiree jaanib se daad qubool keeje!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 26, 2007 23:33:23 GMT 5
Qaabil-e-EHtraam daustu, saathiyo aur bzurgaan-e-suKhan.. Ghazal HaaZir-e-Khidmat hay...aap kii aaraa ka intiZaar rahygaa.
is baat maiN sab kuch'h hay magar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay us samt kau jaataa hooN jidhar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay dar-paish hay SaHraa kaa safar soo'ay chaman-zaar aur is pe'h sitam zaad-e-safar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay
kis sha'y kay tajas'sus maiN hau tum meHv-e-nazaara' afLaak kay us paar agar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay say'yaarchay tasKheer kiay jaataa hay insaaN.. aur is kii mushaq'qat ka camar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay ik Umr maHab'bat kii riyaaZat maiN guzaarii... ab chaak-e-gariibaaN kay digar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay aajaa'ay muyas'sar jau kabhi iLm kaa saagar....... piyaa say kay Liay Umr-e-KhiZar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay
dushnaam Traazii hay muGhal~ us kaa vaTiira'h jis shaKhS kay haathauN maiN hunar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay
miim miim mughal Bohat Khoob Mughal sahib khoobsoorat andaz munfarid khayalaatpiyaa say kay Liay Umr-e-KhiZar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hayis misray maiN lafz Khizr ka talafuz ghalat ho giakia kia Khizr nay sikandarlafz Khizr hay khizar nahi
umeed hay meri guzarshaat ka bura nahi manaiN gayab yeh ghazal munasib jagah par post ki aap nay
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Post by miim miim mughal on May 29, 2007 12:31:34 GMT 5
Qaabil-e-EHtraam daustu, saathiyo aur bzurgaan-e-suKhan.. Ghazal HaaZir-e-Khidmat hay...aap kii aaraa ka intiZaar rahygaa.
is baat maiN sab kuch'h hay magar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay us samt kau jaataa hooN jidhar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay dar-paish hay SaHraa kaa safar soo'ay chaman-zaar aur is pe'h sitam zaad-e-safar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay
kis sha'y kay tajas'sus maiN hau tum meHv-e-nazaara' afLaak kay us paar agar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay say'yaarchay tasKheer kiay jaataa hay insaaN.. aur is kii mushaq'qat ka camar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay ik Umr maHab'bat kii riyaaZat maiN guzaarii... ab chaak-e-gariibaaN kay digar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay aajaa'ay muyas'sar jau kabhi iLm kaa saagar....... piyaa say kay Liay Umr-e-KhiZar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay
dushnaam Traazii hay muGhal~ us kaa vaTiira'h jis shaKhS kay haathauN maiN hunar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay
miim miim mughal Bohat Khoob Mughal sahib khoobsoorat andaz munfarid khayalaatpiyaa say kay Liay Umr-e-KhiZar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hayis misray maiN lafz Khizr ka talafuz ghalat ho giakia kia Khizr nay sikandarlafz Khizr hay khizar nahi
umeed hay meri guzarshaat ka bura nahi manaiN gayab yeh ghazal munasib jagah par post ki aap nay muHtaram rafii' tabassum SaaHib aadaab.. pasandiidgii kay izhaar kay Liay mamnoon hooN
agar aap mulaahiz' kijiiay ..
Ghaalib, miir, MaShafii, shayftaa, saudaa, faiZ sab kay haaN "KHiZar'' aur "KhiZr" daunooN TaraH baaNdhaa gayaa hay...
" gar KhiZar rahnumaa nahiiN hautaa "
umiid hay aap aa'inda' bhii merii rahnumaa'ii farmaatay rahiNgy.. (mujhay apnii taSveer aur dastaKahT chaspaaN / chispaaN karnay haiN aap sy madad kiii darkhaast hay...raHnumaa'ii farmaaiay)
mamanoon-e-karam miim miim mughal
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Post by miim miim mughal on May 29, 2007 12:37:13 GMT 5
mughal sb iss bezm meiN khush aamdeed! aapki ghazal peRh ker lutf aaya! meiree jaanib se daad qubool keeje! MuHtaram Khaalid Mahmood Saahib aadaab-o-slaam-e-msnoon
aapny is bazm maiN Khush.aamdeed kahaa...intehaa-ee mamnoon hooN..aur ghazal kii pasandeedgiii kay izhaar kaa aik baar phir shukriyya.. umeed hay aap aaindaa bhii HauSla' afza'ii farmaatay rahayNgay..
safeer-e-dasht miim miim mughal
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Post by kanwal on May 29, 2007 18:04:34 GMT 5
bohat umdaa mughal sahib ,... Bohat khubsoorat ghazl kahi aapne ,.... Go ke ghazl ka har sher apni misaal aap hai par yeh kuch munfarid sa laga ,.... bohat umdagi aur khubsoorati hai aapke haaN ,... Daad ke phooL aapki iss haseeN takhleeQ ki nazR ,....
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Post by miim miim mughal on May 30, 2007 11:21:15 GMT 5
bohat umdaa mughal sahib ,... Bohat khubsoorat ghazl kahi aapne ,.... Go ke ghazl ka har sher apni misaal aap hai par yeh kuch munfarid sa laga ,.... bohat umdagi aur khubsoorati hai aapke haaN ,... Daad ke phooL aapki iss haseeN takhleeQ ki nazR ,.... MuHtarma kaNval Saahiba'..
aadaab-o-slaam-e-masnoon
aapko naacheez kii aik nacheez Ghazal pasaNd aa'ee intehaa'ee mamnoon hooN..phoolauN kay intehaa'ee KhobSoorat TuHfa irsaal karnay par aaNkhaiN farsh-e-raah haiN ..umeed hay aap aaiNda' bhii apnii aaraa' sy mustafeez haunay ka mauQa; fraha kijiay gaa.
aap kay pur KhulooS phoolauN kaa kaoii nE'mul-badal nahiiN aih sher aap kii naZr.
" vo'h tau vaHshii hay "KaNval" uskau bhalaa kiyaa ma'Loom narGissii aaNkh maiN rehnay kaa hunar kaysaa hay ? "
mamnoon-e-karam safeer-e-dasht EhQar-ul-Ebaad miim miim mughal
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 4, 2007 12:28:57 GMT 5
achi ghazal hy mughal sahib khaas taur par yeh shair dar-paish hay SaHraa kaa safar soo'ay chaman-zaar aur is pe'h sitam zaad-e-safar kuch'h bhii nahiiN hay thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 10:26:14 GMT 5
Janab M3 Kaisay hai? Aik baras baad iraadaa kia keh shuroo say sub kuchh paRhooN. Aur achhchhi nigarishaat ko qaboo kar looN. Aap ki ghazal bahut umda hai. Daad hazir hai.
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