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ghazal
Mar 3, 2008 16:50:52 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 3, 2008 16:50:52 GMT 5
mujhy janooN nay abhi kar gar banana hay ke shehr e sang mein sheeshay ka ghar banana hay
mein pehlay ishq say bahir abhi nahi nikla zara theher mujhy apna agar banana hay
abhi tu sirf rawaN hein ye chand he maujein samandaroN nay abhi tu bhanwar banana hay
mein aik bar miri jan usay tarash tu loN ke jis nay bay hunari ko hunar banana hay
mujhy yaqeen say agay ka sochna hay, phir tiry khial ko rakht e safar banana hay
falak ki samat chala ho tu is leay ke aqeel jahan nahi hay wahan mujh ko dar banana hay
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ghazal
Mar 3, 2008 22:40:54 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Mar 3, 2008 22:40:54 GMT 5
bohat khoob malik sahib
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ghazal
Mar 4, 2008 6:37:37 GMT 5
Post by khalid on Mar 4, 2008 6:37:37 GMT 5
bohot khoob malik sb! daad qubool keeje!
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ghazal
Mar 4, 2008 18:50:58 GMT 5
Post by Tanweer on Mar 4, 2008 18:50:58 GMT 5
Malik Sahib!
Daad qabool farmaiey. Pasand aaee apki ghazal.
Tanweer
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ghazal
Mar 5, 2008 13:19:52 GMT 5
Post by saeed on Mar 5, 2008 13:19:52 GMT 5
Malik Saab,
mein pehlay ishq say bahir abhi nahi nikla zara theher mujhy apna agar banana hay
wah....ji khush ho gaya...aisey sher sirf hotey hain likhey nahen jaatey....aur 'agar' ka istemal bhi buhut lajawab hai.
Dheron daad! saeed
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ghazal
Mar 5, 2008 15:49:15 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 5, 2008 15:49:15 GMT 5
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ghazal
Mar 5, 2008 15:51:37 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 5, 2008 15:51:37 GMT 5
bohot khoob malik sb! daad qubool keeje! shukria
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ghazal
Mar 5, 2008 15:55:18 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 5, 2008 15:55:18 GMT 5
bahut khoob, yeh ashaar pasand aaye.daad qubuul kareN. mein pehlay ishq say bahir abhi nahi nikla zara theher mujhy apna agar banana hay mein aik bar miri jan usay tarash tu loN ke jis nay bay hunari ko hunar banana hay mujhy yaqeen say agay ka sochna hay, phir tiry khial ko rakht e safar banana hay ap ka shukria ke ap nay ashaar ko pasand kia
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ghazal
Mar 5, 2008 15:56:18 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 5, 2008 15:56:18 GMT 5
Malik Sahib! Daad qabool farmaiey. Pasand aaee apki ghazal. Tanweerpasand karnay ka shukria
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ghazal
Mar 5, 2008 15:58:00 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 5, 2008 15:58:00 GMT 5
Malik Saab, mein pehlay ishq say bahir abhi nahi nikla zara theher mujhy apna agar banana hay wah....ji khush ho gaya...aisey sher sirf hotey hain likhey nahen jaatey....aur 'agar' ka istemal bhi buhut lajawab hai. Dheron daad! saeed saeed khan sahab ap ki fikri asas ka qail hon aur mutmain hon ke ap nay sher par dad di
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ghazal
Mar 5, 2008 23:23:20 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 5, 2008 23:23:20 GMT 5
aqeel shaandar ghazal kahi aap nay aik to wohi shair mujhy acha lagajis ki taraf saeed sahibnay isharakia aur phir maqta bhi kamal ka hay apni aik purani ghazal ka matla yaad aa gia k zameen yehi hy
lakeerain khaynch kar mubhum sa ik payker banana hay phir us main rang bharnay hain usay behtar banana hay
daa qabool kijiay thanx razi
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ghazal
Mar 6, 2008 15:36:29 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 6, 2008 15:36:29 GMT 5
aqeel shaandar ghazal kahi aap nay aik to wohi shair mujhy acha lagajis ki taraf saeed sahibnay isharakia aur phir maqta bhi kamal ka hay apni aik purani ghazal ka matla yaad aa gia k zameen yehi hy lakeerain khaynch kar mubhum sa ik payker banana hay phir us main rang bharnay hain usay behtar banana hay daa qabool kijiay thanx razi Razi sahab ap ki taraf say hamesha intizar rehta hay ke kuch kahin jis ki waja say mayri hosla afzae aik taraf tehreek milti hay ke mazeed behtar likhoN aur yaqeenan ye ap ki he zameen mein danista likhi hay bas behr badal de hay ap ka shukria
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zehrab
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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ghazal
Mar 15, 2008 12:46:31 GMT 5
Post by zehrab on Mar 15, 2008 12:46:31 GMT 5
Wah Wah Aqeel saheb....kya rawani hey kya takhayul hey.....
mujhy janooN nay abhi kar gar banana hay ke shehr e sang mein sheeshay ka ghar banana hay
kya baat hey janab....shehr-e sang mein sheeshey ka gher....bohat khub
mein pehlay ishq say bahir abhi nahi nikla zara theher mujhy apna agar banana hay
ye acha hey ke is sey pehley ke dost usey aap kke mazi ke qissey sunaaen , kyun na aap khud hi bata den sab kuch.....
mein aik bar miri jan usay tarash tu loN ke jis nay bay hunari ko hunar banana hay
yahan "bey hunari" kuch beher mein shayad gerber ker rahi hey ho sakta hey ye meri kam fehmi ho
mujhy yaqeen say agay ka sochna hay, phir tiry khial ko rakht e safar banana hay
Bohat khub.....yaqeen sey aagey.....kya baat hey
falak ki samat chala ho tu is leay ke aqeel jahan nahi hay wahan mujh ko dar banana hay
Maqta bohat ala hey
dheron daad
Qamar
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ghazal
Mar 15, 2008 13:30:25 GMT 5
Post by waqaar on Mar 15, 2008 13:30:25 GMT 5
Aqeel SaaHeb, bahut khoob huZoor. aapki fanpaara paRh~ ker iimaan taazah ho gaYaa. daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar
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ghazal
Mar 24, 2008 18:06:26 GMT 5
Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 24, 2008 18:06:26 GMT 5
Qammar sahab!
ap ki mahabat hay
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