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Post by Atif Mirza on Mar 30, 2008 2:20:28 GMT 5
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Post by naheedv on Mar 30, 2008 2:32:12 GMT 5
Atif Mirza saahb,
aap kee ghazal umdah hai aur pasand aayii, daad qubool kijiye. ghazal kee bunat ke hawaale se ye kehnaa chaahooN gee ke iss ke beshtar misre qadre kamzor meHsoos huve aur ye lagaa ke agar thoRi see aur tavajjoh dee jaaye tau behtari kee gunjaaish nikal sakti hai. aage aap maalik hain.
shukriya Naheed
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Mar 30, 2008 3:40:47 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat qafia radeef kay saath khoobsoorat aur munfarid Ghazal Mirza sahib daad qabool farmaiay maiN Naheed Virk sahiba say ittefaaq nahi karta
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Post by saeed on Mar 30, 2008 4:25:33 GMT 5
Mirza saheb.
kabhi qehqahoon ki barish, kabh aanso-oun ki barich
zamin bhi khubsoorat hai aur kavsih bhi. Daad!
saeed
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 30, 2008 22:09:02 GMT 5
aatif sahib muddat baad aap ki ghazal parhnay ko mili khoobsoorat radeef k sdaath boht umda mazameen tarashay aap ny daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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Post by naheedv on Mar 30, 2008 23:50:54 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat qafia radeef kay saath khoobsoorat aur munfarid Ghazal Mirza sahib daad qabool farmaiay maiN Naheed Virk sahiba say ittefaaq nahi karta Rafi bhai, meree raa'e sirf zaati raa'e thee aur uss se kisi kaa bhee itefaaq karnaa laazim naheeN hai. shukriya Naheed
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Post by Atif Mirza on Mar 31, 2008 21:48:05 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat qafia radeef kay saath khoobsoorat aur munfarid Ghazal Mirza sahib daad qabool farmaiay maiN Naheed Virk sahiba say ittefaaq nahi karta Rafi Sahib! Aap ki janib say tareefi alfaaz ka intihaee mamnoon hooN. Daad ka shukriya..
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Post by Atif Mirza on Mar 31, 2008 21:50:27 GMT 5
Mirza saheb. kabhi qehqahoon ki barish, kabh aanso-oun ki barich zamin bhi khubsoorat hai aur kavsih bhi. Daad! saeed Saeed Bhai aap ki muhabbat hai keh aap nay taareef ki, pazeeraiee ka shukriya.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Mar 31, 2008 21:55:24 GMT 5
aatif sahib muddat baad aap ki ghazal parhnay ko mili khoobsoorat radeef k sdaath boht umda mazameen tarashay aap ny daad qabool kijiay thanx razi Razi Bhai! Daad ka shukriya! Kafi arsay baad hazir huwa hooN, aap ka hukm jo tha... Asl maiN sarkari masroofiyat say jaan abb aa kar chhooti hai. Karachi say aanay kay baad aik aisi masroofiyat nay aa liya tha jiss maiN shab-o-roz gharat hotay rahay. bahar haal do chaar roz ab furSat kay muyassar aa gaay haiN tau ghaneemat jana keh apni koi kavish aap dostoN ki nazr karooN. Aap sub nay pasand kia meri mehnat wasool ho gayee.
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Post by khalid on Apr 2, 2008 4:16:14 GMT 5
aatif sb khoobsoorat ghazal k liye daad qubool keeje! waisey to tamaam ash'aar khoob haiN, lekin she'r nao 4 mujhey zyaada pasand aaya. daad qubool keeje! gahazal k baarey meiN meirey mehdood tajrebey aur ilm ki roshni meiN maiN ye kehna chaahooN ga ke sirf aapke maqtey ka misra e saani tavajjo chaahta hai!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 3, 2008 18:27:02 GMT 5
Atif Mirza saahb,
aap kee ghazal umdah hai aur pasand aayii, daad qubool kijiye. ghazal kee bunat ke hawaale se ye kehnaa chaahooN gee ke iss ke beshtar misre qadre kamzor meHsoos huve aur ye lagaa ke agar thoRi see aur tavajjoh dee jaaye tau behtari kee gunjaaish nikal sakti hai. aage aap maalik hain.
shukriya Naheed Naheed Sahiba Takheer say jawab denay ki maazrat. Magar kuch sarkari masroofiyat ki waja say tawajjah nahiN day saka. MaiN aap say tafseeli rehnumaiee ki darkhwast karna chahta tha magar Rafi Sahib nay apnay alfaz maiN mujhay sanad ataa kar kay mujh per ehsan kia. Gharoor nahiN karooN ga. Balkeh aap kay tabsray ko bhi sar ankhoN per rakh ker apni ghazal maiN mazeed nikhar paida karnay ki koshish karooN ga.Rafi bhai, meree raa'e sirf zaati raa'e thee aur uss se kisi kaa bhee itefaaq karnaa laazim naheeN hai.
shukriya Naheed Aap gham na karaiN, main aap say ittefaq karta hooN. Laikin aik guzarish hai keh hawalay ya namoonay kay liay apni shaeri kay link tau arsaal kijiay ga, takeh aap kay maayaar ka andaza ho jaey aur aainda aap kay maayaar kay mutabiq shaeri paish ki ja sakay.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 3, 2008 18:50:28 GMT 5
aatif sb khoobsoorat ghazal k liye daad qubool keeje! waisey to tamaam ash'aar khoob haiN, lekin she'r nao 4 mujhey zyaada pasand aaya. daad qubool keeje! gahazal k baarey meiN meirey mehdood tajrebey aur ilm ki roshni meiN maiN ye kehna chaahooN ga ke sirf aapke maqtey ka misra e saani tavajjo chaahta hai! Khalid sahib ghazal pasand karnay ka shukriya. Main aaj kal shaeri maiN sukht naa-laiqi kay daur say guzar raha hooN. Mujahy iss liay aisa lag raha hai keh lafz maiN asar kum hota jaa raha hai. Iss kay ilawa abb tau naee sadi kay shuraa bhi mo'tariz honay lagay haiN.
Aap ki observation kissi hudd tak theek hai. Koshish hai keh iss maiN nikhar laa sakooN. Jiss waqt bhi kamyaab huwa, yahaN durustgi bhi kar doonN ga.
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simran
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by simran on May 1, 2008 19:23:40 GMT 5
aap ki ghazal ke sabhi ashaar qaabil-e-daad haiN.iss khoobsoorat ghazal par dheron mubaarakbaad meri aur se.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 1, 2008 22:14:55 GMT 5
aap ki ghazal ke sabhi ashaar qaabil-e-daad haiN.iss khoobsoorat ghazal par dheron mubaarakbaad meri aur se. Simran ji! Ghazal pasand karany aur daad inayat farmanay ka shukriya>
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 2, 2008 0:56:37 GMT 5
Hur aik kaam maiN hikmat hoti hai. Daad ka shukriya.
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