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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 22, 2008 23:08:01 GMT 5
razi saheb adaab buhut khubsoorat ghazal share ke aap ne, Saari hi ghazal bahut achi hai lekin yeh she'r tery dharty pay har dukh kay liay tayyar rehtay hain kisi bhi haadsay per log ab hayraan nahin hotay daad qabool farmaiay Brijinder"Sagar" brijinder sahab khushi hui aap ka tabsra daykh kar muddat k baad aur ghaliban pehli baar aap ny hamari ghazal ko saraaha boht shukria aap ka yeh inayat kartay raha karain thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 22, 2008 23:10:53 GMT 5
Wah wah....Khoob luft aaya razi bhai...bahot bahot khoobsurat ghazal hai..aap ko humarii aur se dheroN se bhi ziyaada daad... waaaaaaaaaaaah!! maza agya rooh sahiba boht shukria aap nay pazeerai ki razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 22, 2008 23:13:18 GMT 5
ghareeb-e-shehr kay dar par to ik dastak hi kaafi hay jahan dehleez hoti hay wahan darban nahin hotay Wah Razi bhai zabardast ghazal lagi, har shair qaabil-e- daad hai. itny khubsurat ghazal k liye daad qubool kijye thanx neha sahiba khushi hui k muddat kay baad aap sukhanwar par regular aanay lagi hain razi
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Post by kanwal on Jul 30, 2008 23:17:25 GMT 5
kisi ki fatah ka is waastay saaman nahin hotay keh hum barbaad hotay hain magar weeran nahin hotay
Waah ,...
Kamaal jee ,...Issi liye to kathin musaafateiN bhi Zindagi ki raunaQeiN chheenane meiN na kamiyaab rehti haiN ,... badi umdagi se apni shakhsiyat ka yeh haseeN ranG paish kiya Aap ne ,.... daad e guL Aap ke waaste ,... Aankh se jo gir jaayeiN woh Qabil e Ehtraam nahiN hua karte, acha hai ke aise Aansoo bhi ehtraam ke laiQ rehte haiN ,.... waaH ,...
Waqae Aaj k halaat issi baat ke misdaaQ haiN ,....
bohat umdaa ,...waah razi jee ,... bohat umdaa ,...
Sahi kaha ,...bohat khoob ,...
Razi jee har sher hi ik haseeN nageeN ki taraH laga, jinko Aap ne bohat umdagi se joda hai ,...
Daad ke saare gulshan Aapke Qalam ke naaM ,...
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 31, 2008 10:21:25 GMT 5
kisi ki fatah ka is waastay saaman nahin hotay keh hum barbaad hotay hain magar weeran nahin hotay
Waah ,...
Kamaal jee ,...Issi liye to kathin musaafateiN bhi Zindagi ki raunaQeiN chheenane meiN na kamiyaab rehti haiN ,... badi umdagi se apni shakhsiyat ka yeh haseeN ranG paish kiya Aap ne ,.... daad e guL Aap ke waaste ,... Aankh se jo gir jaayeiN woh Qabil e Ehtraam nahiN hua karte, acha hai ke aise Aansoo bhi ehtraam ke laiQ rehte haiN ,.... waaH ,...
Waqae Aaj k halaat issi baat ke misdaaQ haiN ,....
bohat umdaa ,...waah razi jee ,... bohat umdaa ,...
Sahi kaha ,...bohat khoob ,...
Razi jee har sher hi ik haseeN nageeN ki taraH laga, jinko Aap ne bohat umdagi se joda hai ,...
Daad ke saare gulshan Aapke Qalam ke naaM ,...kanwal boht tafseel k saath tum ny ghazal par tabsra kia thanx razi
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