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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 8, 2007 15:35:33 GMT 5
khwaja fareed ki dharti rohi k liay aik nazm hazir hy aap ki ara ka muntazir rahoon ga yeh nazm puranay forum par bhi paysh ki thee hum ny thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 8, 2007 22:57:51 GMT 5
Bohat Khoobsoorat nazm Razi bhai
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Post by khalid on Jun 9, 2007 6:51:50 GMT 5
waah!!! bohot khoob!!
be shak!! daad qubool keejey!!!
khaalid
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Post by shahkaar on Jun 10, 2007 21:08:51 GMT 5
razi bhai
buhut umdah nazm he,
shayeed aap hi ki zabani suni thee kuch mahinoon pehlay, ik dafa phir enayat ka shukria
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 14, 2007 16:17:41 GMT 5
Bohat Khoobsoorat nazm Razi bhai shukria rafi bhai thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 14, 2007 16:18:33 GMT 5
waah!!! bohot khoob!!
be shak!! daad qubool keejey!!!
khaalid khalid sahib bohat muhabat aap ki thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 14, 2007 16:20:19 GMT 5
razi bhai buhut umdah nazm he, shayeed aap hi ki zabani suni thee kuch mahinoon pehlay, ik dafa phir enayat ka shukria shukria waqar aap ki muhabaton ka razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 6, 2008 12:22:07 GMT 5
Kia Khoobsoorat chunao hai alfaaz ka apnay dil ki baat kehnay kay lieay! Thanx for sending such a nice poem!
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Post by maya on Jan 9, 2008 8:02:08 GMT 5
Salam Razi sahib pehlay yea nazam parh kar be main nay kaha tha kay andar ki Payaas ka bayan bohat mushkil hota hay.lakin es nazam nay yea asaan kar dea hay.mujay yea nazam ab be yad thy aur aksar zahen main ati rahti thy.dobara parhna be acha laga. waslam Fatimah
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 26, 2008 17:47:45 GMT 5
Kia Khoobsoorat chunao hai alfaaz ka apnay dil ki baat kehnay kay lieay! Thanx for sending such a nice poem! atif bhai nazm pasand karnay ka shukria razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 26, 2008 17:48:39 GMT 5
Salam Razi sahib pehlay yea nazam parh kar be main nay kaha tha kay andar ki Payaas ka bayan bohat mushkil hota hay.lakin es nazam nay yea asaan kar dea hay.mujay yea nazam ab be yad thy aur aksar zahen main ati rahti thy.dobara parhna be acha laga. waslam Fatimah bohat shukria fatimah k aap nay nazm ko saraaha razi
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Post by ramishjaan on Feb 26, 2008 3:01:32 GMT 5
AOA razi bhai kitni peyas he kitna dard he kitni siskiya chupi hain is khobsorat nazm me razi bahi bohat sari dili dad ke phool is dard se sajo sanwari nazm ki nazr ..........
waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Sukhanwar on Feb 26, 2008 8:57:58 GMT 5
AOA razi bhai kitni peyas he kitna dard he kitni siskiya chupi hain is khobsorat nazm me razi bahi bohat sari dili dad ke phool is dard se sajo sanwari nazm ki nazr ..........
waslam mukhlis ramishjaan bohat shukria ramish ji razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 31, 2008 10:36:59 GMT 5
saeed bhai abhi aap ki nazm parhi to apni aik nazm bhi yaad aa gai mera khyaal hy ye nazm aap ki nazr say nahin guzri lijiay is ka bhi mutaala kijiay aap ki raay k muntazir rahoo ga
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Post by saeed on Jul 31, 2008 10:52:52 GMT 5
Razi bhai Buhut piyari nazm hai....aur meri nazar se guzer chuki hai. maine apni nazm aapkey nam isi liye ki hai keh woh kisi had tak is nazm se mutasar hai... aur kuch faiz shayad meri khwaja Farid se mohabbat ka bhi hai. Mera khayal hai ke mein ne is nazm pe pichley forum pe daad bhi zroor di hai. Aapki yeh nazm bila-shuba eik shahkar hai!!! MuhabbateN. saeed
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