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Post by naheedv on Apr 25, 2008 3:54:57 GMT 5
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Apr 25, 2008 9:16:00 GMT 5
Wahhhhh Bohat Khoob Naheed sahiba
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Post by nadeem on Apr 25, 2008 11:20:15 GMT 5
muhtarma Naheed Sahiba aap ki ghazal paRhi bahut achi hai lekin baaz ashaar maen radeef '' bolay '' pori tarha nibh nahen rahi zara nazr e sani keejiey ga agar in tamama ashaar maen say 6 ya 7 ashaar muntakhib kar liey jaen to ghazal achai nikal sakti hai
wesay kehnay ko maen bhi keh sakta hoon
1`panion maen koi bool kesay sakta hai 2`dasht e khahish kesay bool sakta hai yani dasht to nahen bool sakta 3`gumaan ki bhi zubaan nahen hoti 4`roshni bhi baat nahen kar sakti aisi chand misalaen aur bhi haen baharhaal aisa nahen kahon ga kiyon kay aap ki hausla shikani ho gi ghazal maen achay ashaar bhi haen agar unhi ko muntakhib kar liya jaey aur radeef ko bamaani bana diya jaey to ghazal bahut achi bhi ho sakti hai
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Apr 25, 2008 20:37:19 GMT 5
Naheed Sahiba...!
mein Nadeem Saahab ki is baat say itifaaq karta hon keh agar 6,7 ashaar ka intikhaab kar lia jaeay tu ghazal bahut umda hojaeay gi jahan tak un kay points ka tauluq hay tu aik takhleeqi sataha par kam karnay walay kay leay har shay mein tab e goyae hoti hay un kay ye etarazaar poetic nukta e nazar say darust nahi hein. majmooe taur par is mein aik achi ghazal poshida hay
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Post by nadeem on Apr 26, 2008 0:32:39 GMT 5
muhtram Aqeel Malik sahib aap naen darust farmaya wo maen naen issi liey kaha kay aisay nuqtay uthaey jatay haen kay sher ko sheri satah par bhi ghair fitri nahen hona chahiey issi liey maen naen kaha kay maen aisa nahen kahoon ga
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Post by naheedv on Apr 26, 2008 6:40:39 GMT 5
Wahhhhh Bohat Khoob Naheed sahiba buhat shukriya Rafi saahab,
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Post by naheedv on Apr 26, 2008 6:43:13 GMT 5
muhtarma Naheed Sahiba aap ki ghazal paRhi bahut achi hai lekin baaz ashaar maen radeef '' bolay '' pori tarha nibh nahen rahi zara nazr e sani keejiey ga agar in tamama ashaar maen say 6 ya 7 ashaar muntakhib kar liey jaen to ghazal achai nikal sakti hai
wesay kehnay ko maen bhi keh sakta hoon
1`panion maen koi bool kesay sakta hai 2`dasht e khahish kesay bool sakta hai yani dasht to nahen bool sakta 3`gumaan ki bhi zubaan nahen hoti 4`roshni bhi baat nahen kar sakti aisi chand misalaen aur bhi haen baharhaal aisa nahen kahon ga kiyon kay aap ki hausla shikani ho gi ghazal maen achay ashaar bhi haen agar unhi ko muntakhib kar liya jaey aur radeef ko bamaani bana diya jaey to ghazal bahut achi bhi ho sakti hai Nadeem saahab, ghazal kee pasaNdeedagi ke liye mamnoon hooN. ji maiN bhee iss baat se itefaaq karti hooN k qata'band se pehle ke she'r chhaan.ne ke zaroorat hai. shukriya Naheed
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Post by naheedv on Apr 26, 2008 6:50:58 GMT 5
Naheed Sahiba...! mein Nadeem Saahab ki is baat say itifaaq karta hon keh agar 6,7 ashaar ka intikhaab kar lia jaeay tu ghazal bahut umda hojaeay gi jahan tak un kay points ka tauluq hay tu aik takhleeqi sataha par kam karnay walay kay leay har shay mein tab e goyae hoti hay un kay ye etarazaar poetic nukta e nazar say darust nahi hein. majmooe taur par is mein aik achi ghazal poshida hay aadaab Aqeel saahab, ghazal ko tavajjoh se paRhne kaa shukriya. aur mashware kaa bhee. jald hee iss kee kaat chaaNt karti hooN shukriya Naheed
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 26, 2008 16:33:07 GMT 5
Naheed Ji! Majmooee taur per aik umda aur napi tuli ghazal, aur bahut maharat kay saath kahi janay wali behr kay intekhaab ki daad deta hooN. Aap per lazim nahiN hai keh aap iss ghazal ki kaaNt chaaNt karaiN, agar ho jaay tau behtar hai. Mashwara free hota hai iss liay maiN nay bhi day diya. Shukriya
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Post by naheedv on May 1, 2008 6:55:14 GMT 5
Sunita,
ghazal pasand karne kaa buhat shukriya!
Naheed
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