zehrab
rukn
ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 15, 2008 11:43:51 GMT 5
Razi Bhai
Allah ka shuker hey ke Rafi saheb theek thak hein. Un ke liye kahi gayee aap ki ghazal bohat achi lagi.....daad qabool ki jiye.
Kher andesh
Qamar
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 21, 2008 15:34:30 GMT 5
Razi bhai achi kavish hai....ye sher khasker acha laga . taa rahay ashk bahanay ki riwayat zinda teray hotay huay marnay ki tamanna hay mujhy (halanke hamarey school of thought ka nahen;-) Jahan tak marney aur maarney ka taaluq hai to...Faraz sb ki nei kitab "A ishq-e-janoon pesha" mein Ghalib ki riwayat ka eik maqta hai... Ham to chahat mein bhi ghalib ke muqallid hain Faraz Jispe martey hain usey maar ke rakh detey hain buhut daad!! saeed saeed bhai aap nay ghazal pasand ki shukria
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 21, 2008 15:39:02 GMT 5
Razi sahab bahut umda ghazal hay aur ghazal chonkeh Rafi sahab kay nam hay is leay is sher nay do jehtoN say mujhy maza dia main kabhi aankh macholi bhi nahin jeeta hoon dhoondnay walay nay her baar hi dhoonda hy mujhy aik tu dr sahab ki tabiat kay sath mail khata hoa sher hay aur dosra is ka apna dakhli mizaj jis kay soty kahin door apni riwayat say ja k photty hein is ky ilawa taa rahay ashk bahanay ki riwayat zinda teray hotay huay marnay ki tamanna hay mujhy aur jahan ashk ko zindagi ki bataur alamat baat ki hay tu is ka jawab nahi aqeel malik aqeel bohat shukria aap nay ghazal ko passand kia razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 21, 2008 15:53:09 GMT 5
Razi bhai aap ki yeh ghazal bahut achhi lagi. dost hon to aise taa rahay ashk bahanay ki riwayat zinda teray hotay huay marnay ki tamanna hay mujhy bahut si daad aap ko iss ghazal par. sunita ji boht shukria aap ny pazeeraai ki thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 21, 2008 15:58:23 GMT 5
bohot khoob razi bhaii!! ghazal zabadarst hai! ho skta hai k ab rafi sb ko angiography bhi na kervaani paRey! ;D
daad qubool keeje! shukria khalid bhai hum rafi sahib ko engio k baghair hee kheek kar dain gy thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 21, 2008 16:02:43 GMT 5
Waaah ,.... Umdaa ,.... Razi jee aap kamaal ka likhte ho ,... YuN mehsoos hota hai jaise kaaghaz par nahiN balke diloN par aapka Qalam chal raha hai ,.... Umdaaa ,.... iss haseeN thofe ke liye daad ke hazaaro phooL aapke Qalam ke naaM ,.... kanwal bohat shukria itni dhair saari daad k liay razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 21, 2008 16:04:52 GMT 5
aatif bhai aap bhi hamaray dill k bohat qareeb hain thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 21, 2008 16:05:12 GMT 5
AOA qable ehtram razi bahi ..................... keya hi khosborat gahzal atta ki he khobsorat kion na hoti is ki 3 wajhoat jo hain .............
1- khobsorat soch our khobseerat insan ne likhi ..........
2- bohat khobsorat jazbe yani dosti ke liye likhi gai .........
3 - aik bohat hi nafees mukhlis isnan dost our inthei qable ehtram dost rafi sahib ke liye likhi gai ..................................
so razi bhai ap ke itne khobsorat jazbe ki nazr karne ke liye mujh jese tifle maktab ke pas dad ke phool kaha bas aik duaa he ke ALLHA kare ap ka qalam hamesha esi schayiaN likhta rahe is bazm me hamehsa dr rafi shaib jese mukhlis insan atta rahe our ap ki yeh bazm ap ka yeh chaman isi tarha mehkta rahe ameen ..............
razi bahi chamne qalb ki gehraion se bohat sari douayen ap ki nazr waslam mukhlis ramishjaan ramish ji boht boht shukria in muhabaton ka razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 21, 2008 16:07:05 GMT 5
Razi Bhai Allah ka shuker hey ke Rafi saheb theek thak hein. Un ke liye kahi gayee aap ki ghazal bohat achi lagi.....daad qabool ki jiye. Kher andesh Qamar shukria qamar sahab
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anmol
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by anmol on Mar 22, 2008 0:08:57 GMT 5
Razi SaaHib, aadaab!
ghazal bahut Khoob hai. meri jaanib se daad qubool kijiye.
Anmol
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 22, 2008 0:15:47 GMT 5
Razi SaaHib, aadaab! ghazal bahut Khoob hai. meri jaanib se daad qubool kijiye. Anmol anmol ji shukria is pazeeraai ka razi
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