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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 18, 2008 22:43:14 GMT 5
mukamal chaand aadha reh gia hy mray bin koi tanha reh gia hy
kabhi kuch khat puranay daykh layna kisi main mayra wada reh gia hy
kisi ko hijr nay sayraab rakha koi qurbat main pyaasa reh gia hy
saza kut bhi gaai aur mujrimon main hamara naam likha reh gia hy
hamaray saath kia kia jhaylta woh bichar kar kitna acha reh gia hy
ajab raftar hy is zindagi ki ke jo jaysa tha waysa reh gia hy
razi main her kisi say poochta hoon safar jeewan ka kitna reh gia hy
razi-ud-din razi
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Post by khalid on Jan 18, 2008 22:51:38 GMT 5
mukamal chaand aadha reh gia hy mray bin koi tanha reh gia hy kabhi kuch khat puranay daykh layna kisi main mayra wada reh gia hy kisi ko hijr nay sayraab rakha koi qurbat main pyaasa reh gia hy kahani to mukamal ho gaai hay magar qissa adhoora reh gia hy saza kut bhi gaai aur mujrimon main hamara naam likha reh gia hy hamaray saath kia kia jhaylta woh bichar kar kitna acha reh gia hy ajab raftar hy is zindagi ki ke jo jaysa tha waysa reh gia hy razi main her kisi say poochta hoon safar jeewan ka kitna reh gia hy razi-ud-din razi waaah razi bhaii!
koii she'r single out kerne sey qaasir hooN. poori ghazal ke liye dili daad qubool keeje!
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 19, 2008 1:26:53 GMT 5
AOA razi bhai keya bat he MASHALLA ek bar pehle bhi kaha tha ap se ke bare our ache shora kam kam kehte hain kion unhe acha kehna parta he hazoor ap to bohat hi acha kehte hain dil ke chaman ke sare phool ap ki is khobsorat ghazal ki nazr qabol ki jiye ws mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 19, 2008 11:13:05 GMT 5
Wah Razi Bhai! Kia piyaray ashaar haiN. Koi aik she'r aisa nahiN jiss ki taareef na ki jaay. Ki Umda azdaz hai. Masha Allah
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 20, 2008 1:23:55 GMT 5
hasb e ma,amool khoobsoorat ghazal Razi bhai
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Post by sunita on Jan 20, 2008 5:19:55 GMT 5
Razi bhai jaan aap ki iss ghazal ko baar baar padne ka jii chaaha aur maine kayi baar pada bhi.ashaar sabhi laajawaab hain mujhe 5 aur 6 bahut pasand aaye.ek ashaar meri moti aqal ko samajh nahin aaya.
ajab raftar hy is zindagi ki ke jo jaysa tha waysa reh gia hy
zindagi ke kisi bhi daur main kuch vaisa hi nahin rehta, bahut badal jaata hai, to aap ne kya kehna chaaha hai?ho sake to samjhaa deN. shukariya.
meri aur se dheron daad iss haseen ghazal par.khush rahen.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 20, 2008 13:39:35 GMT 5
mukamal chaand aadha reh gia hy mray bin koi tanha reh gia hy kabhi kuch khat puranay daykh layna kisi main mayra wada reh gia hy kisi ko hijr nay sayraab rakha koi qurbat main pyaasa reh gia hy kahani to mukamal ho gaai hay magar qissa adhoora reh gia hy saza kut bhi gaai aur mujrimon main hamara naam likha reh gia hy hamaray saath kia kia jhaylta woh bichar kar kitna acha reh gia hy ajab raftar hy is zindagi ki ke jo jaysa tha waysa reh gia hy razi main her kisi say poochta hoon safar jeewan ka kitna reh gia hy razi-ud-din razi waaah razi bhaii!
koii she'r single out kerne sey qaasir hooN. poori ghazal ke liye dili daad qubool keeje! shukria khlid bhaai k aap nay pasandeedgi ka izhaar kia thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 20, 2008 13:43:44 GMT 5
AOA razi bhai keya bat he MASHALLA ek bar pehle bhi kaha tha ap se ke bare our ache shora kam kam kehte hain kion unhe acha kehna parta he hazoor ap to bohat hi acha kehte hain dil ke chaman ke sare phool ap ki is khobsorat ghazal ki nazr qabol ki jiye ws mukhlis ramishjaan ramish bhaaiaap ki muhabatan ka shukria razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 20, 2008 16:05:39 GMT 5
Wah Razi Bhai! Kia piyaray ashaar haiN. Koi aik she'r aisa nahiN jiss ki taareef na ki jaay. Ki Umda azdaz hai. Masha Allah shukria atif bhaai razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 20, 2008 16:07:55 GMT 5
hasb e ma,amool khoobsoorat ghazal Razi bhai rafi sahib shukria is muhabat ka razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 20, 2008 16:34:57 GMT 5
Razi bhai jaan aap ki iss ghazal ko baar baar padne ka jii chaaha aur maine kayi baar pada bhi.ashaar sabhi laajawaab hain mujhe 5 aur 6 bahut pasand aaye.ek ashaar meri moti aqal ko samajh nahin aaya. ajab raftar hy is zindagi ki ke jo jaysa tha waysa reh gia hy zindagi ke kisi bhi daur main kuch vaisa hi nahin rehta, bahut badal jaata hai, to aap ne kya kehna chaaha hai?ho sake to samjhaa deN. shukariya. meri aur se dheron daad iss haseen ghazal par.khush rahen. sunita ji bohat shukria k aap nay ghazal ki pazeeraai ki aap ny jis shair ki janib ishara kia us main dar asl zindagi k jamood ki janib ishara kia gia hy aap to janti hain k zindagi poori raftaar k bawajood jamood ka shikaar hay kabhi kabhi to yoon lagta hy k jaysay hum nay safar jahan sy shuroo kia tha ab bhi wahin par kharray hain thanx razi
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Post by neelofar on Jan 21, 2008 3:58:51 GMT 5
Super ghazal RAZI bhai....Allah kre aap ka qalam yunhi motiyaN bikherta rahe (Aamin)ye sher to dil ko jhugyaa k.......kisi ko hijjr ne seraab rakha koi qurbet me pyasa rah gyaa hai ********************
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 23, 2008 17:20:32 GMT 5
Razi sahab
kahani to mukamal ho gaai hay
darj bala misra hamary aik dost ka bhi hay aur bohat arsa pehlay un ki isi misray ki zameen mein ghazal adbiat mein chap chuki hay...... un ka sher ye hay zara thehro abhi roshni hay mujhy saey ki ahat aa rahi hay hami say hay ye rasm e seena koobi hamary hath par bayyat likhi hay mein apnay ap ko dohra raha hon kahani tu mukamal ho chuki hay
khiar tawarud hota rehta hay ye ghazal apnay manon mein bahut umda lagi hay
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Post by waqaar on Jan 23, 2008 18:36:10 GMT 5
razi SaaHeb, aadaab! huZoor kaisay haiN aap! ka,ii din ba'd aapki bahut hi uMdah ghazal paRh~ ker bahut lut^f aaYa. merii dilii daad qubool kee jiYay! waQaar
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 26, 2008 17:59:47 GMT 5
Super ghazal RAZI bhai....Allah kre aap ka qalam yunhi motiyaN bikherta rahe (Aamin)ye sher to dil ko jhugyaa k.......kisi ko hijjr ne seraab rakha koi qurbet me pyasa rah gyaa hai ******************** bohat shukria neelofar sahiba razi
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