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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 5, 2008 9:51:06 GMT 5
tayray bin mera jeewan fasaana sa hay yeh naya saal kitna puraana sa hay
bay zameeN ko zameeN kha rahi hy yahan bay nishan hi to is ka nishaana sa hay
ghaar k daur main ji rahay hain abhi yeh zamana to pehla zamana sa hay
dhool hi dhool hay aaj chaaron taraf aur wo kehtay hain manzar suhana sa hay
yeh jo shaakhon main sholay bharraktay hain ab in main daykho koi aashiaana sa hay
mayray ashkon pay hansnay lagain gay sabhi jaanat hoon yahan muskraana sa hay
baat karna bhi mumkin nahin ab razi saans layna bhi ik taaziaana sa hay
razi-ud-din razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 5, 2008 10:02:58 GMT 5
ghaar k daur main ji rahay hain abhi yeh zamana to pehla zamana sa hay
Bohat khoob Razi bhai sari ghazal behtareen wahhhhhhh
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 5, 2008 18:42:42 GMT 5
Razi sahib iss khoobsoorat inayat ka shukriya!
Mujhay poori ghazal tau achi lagi hi magar yeh dau ashaar bohut bhaay
Ghaar k daur main ji rahay hain abhi Yeh zamana to pehla zamana sa hay
Dhool hi dhool hay aaj chaaron taraf Aur wo kehtay hain manzar suhana sa hay
Iss tarah ki inayaat kartay raha kijiay!
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 6, 2008 1:09:23 GMT 5
ghaar k daur main ji rahay hain abhi yeh zamana to pehla zamana sa hay Bohat khoob Razi bhai sari ghazal behtareen wahhhhhhh rafi sahib pazeeraai ka shukria thanx razi
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Post by khalid on Jan 6, 2008 19:38:56 GMT 5
bohot khoob razi bhaii! khoobsoorat aur umda ghazal k liye daad qubol keeje!
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 6, 2008 21:27:57 GMT 5
Razi sahib iss khoobsoorat inayat ka shukriya! Mujhay poori ghazal tau achi lagi hi magar yeh dau ashaar bohut bhaay Ghaar k daur main ji rahay hain abhi Yeh zamana to pehla zamana sa hay Dhool hi dhool hay aaj chaaron taraf Aur wo kehtay hain manzar suhana sa hay Iss tarah ki inayaat kartay raha kijiay! aatif bhai shukria k aap nay ghazal passand ki thanx razi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 6, 2008 21:31:24 GMT 5
bohot khoob razi bhaii! khoobsoorat aur umda ghazal k liye daad qubol keeje! shukria khalid bhaai thanx razi
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Jan 14, 2008 11:45:58 GMT 5
Bohat sahi akkasi ki hey aap ney watan ke halaat ki Razi bhai. Allah karey zor-e qalam aur ziyada.
Mash'alen derd ki seenoN mein jalaaey rakhna aapney kaandhon pe saleeboN ko uthaaey rakhna
kher andesh
Qamar
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 14, 2008 14:56:28 GMT 5
Bohat sahi akkasi ki hey aap ney watan ke halaat ki Razi bhai. Allah karey zor-e qalam aur ziyada. Mash'alen derd ki seenoN mein jalaaey rakhna aapney kaandhon pe saleeboN ko uthaaey rakhna kher andesh Qamar qamar sahib shukria is pazeeraai ka razi
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jan 14, 2008 16:52:39 GMT 5
Razi Sahab adab
mujh aisay kam maya talibilm ki raey yaqeenan ghair mamooli nahi hoti kiun keh abhi tu seekhnay ka amal jari hay,bawujood is kay ke kae bar is ghazal ko parha ho soul meanings talashnay ki koshish ki magar ap kay apnay mayar par bhi pori utarti hoe ghazal nahi hay mein is ghazal ko kabhi bhi ap ki numainda ghazlon mein shumar nahi kar sakta bahut samnay ki ghazal ho gae hay ham ap say kisi aur sata ki expectation rakhty hein. umeed hay is gustakhana raweay kay leay mazrat qabool karein gay.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 18, 2008 22:34:35 GMT 5
Razi Sahab adab mujh aisay kam maya talibilm ki raey yaqeenan ghair mamooli nahi hoti kiun keh abhi tu seekhnay ka amal jari hay,bawujood is kay ke kae bar is ghazal ko parha ho soul meanings talashnay ki koshish ki magar ap kay apnay mayar par bhi pori utarti hoe ghazal nahi hay mein is ghazal ko kabhi bhi ap ki numainda ghazlon mein shumar nahi kar sakta bahut samnay ki ghazal ho gae hay ham ap say kisi aur sata ki expectation rakhty hein. umeed hay is gustakhana raweay kay leay mazrat qabool karein gay. aqeel bhai main aap ki raay ko kabhi bhi ghair ehm nahin samajhta aap ko ghazal pasand nahin aai shaid is ki aik wajah yeh bhi ho k yeh aik hi mahol ki ghazal hay aur aik khas kayfiat main kahi gaai main nay yeh ghazal naay sal ki pehli shab kahi aur jin halaat main hum saans lay rahay hain woh is main shid brah e raast shamil ho gaay ..afsos aap ko yeh ghazal pasand nahin aai mujhay aap ki bay lag raay achi lagi forum main aysi hi aara aani chaahian aur sab ko inhain tameeri nuqta e nazar say daykhna chahiay thanx razi
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