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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 2, 2008 9:18:15 GMT 5
Waah Razi bhai, taqribun aik saal pehle kee post hui ghazal ko log dhooNdh kar daad paish kar rahe haiN, tau waqai iss meN koi baat hai. ghazal be had pasaNd aayi. aik manjhaa huvaa andaaz.e.takallam. daad! shukriya Naheed waqayi naheed ji humain khud hayrat hui k yeh aik saal purani ghazal doston ny forum k malbay sy kaysay dobara dhoond li aur yeh kamal aatif sahab ka aap ny pasandeedgi ika izhar kia shukria razi
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Post by saeedsaeed on Jun 2, 2008 14:58:49 GMT 5
AOA RAZI SHAB I HOPE U WILL BE VERY VERY BEST AT URS HEALTH SIR AP KI GHAZAL PARHY MAZA A GYA SAB AASHAR THEEK THAT MAZA DYY RAHY HAIN ZAMEEN NEHAHT HY UMDAA HY AUR AP NY KHOOB NEBHAYE HY SIR
EN 2 AASAHR NY TU DIL KO CHOUU LIYA HY
chaahnay waalay tera wasl yaqeenan chaahain haan magar hum say talabgaar nahin chaahtay hain
hum kahaani say kai baar nikalnay waalay is main ab koi bhi kirdaar nahin chaahtay hain
DADD HAZER HY AP KA Muabshir saeed
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 23, 2008 11:39:02 GMT 5
AOA RAZI SHAB I HOPE U WILL BE VERY VERY BEST AT URS HEALTH SIR AP KI GHAZAL PARHY MAZA A GYA SAB AASHAR THEEK THAT MAZA DYY RAHY HAIN ZAMEEN NEHAHT HY UMDAA HY AUR AP NY KHOOB NEBHAYE HY SIR EN 2 AASAHR NY TU DIL KO CHOUU LIYA HY chaahnay waalay tera wasl yaqeenan chaahain haan magar hum say talabgaar nahin chaahtay hain hum kahaani say kai baar nikalnay waalay is main ab koi bhi kirdaar nahin chaahtay hain DADD HAZER HY AP KA Muabshir saeed mubashir boht shukria is pazeerai ka bot see muhabatain aap k liay thanx razi
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Post by saeed on Jun 24, 2008 5:39:57 GMT 5
Razi bhai,
Aapki yeh khubsurat ghazal bhi phichley saal ki un dinoN ki hai jab mein yahan Federal Election mein masroof tha….aur gher hazir raha. Mazrat!
Kiya khub matla hai… raah main aik bhi deevar nahin chaahtay hain log ab ishq main azaar nahin chaahtay hain
aur is sher ki kiya bat hai… ab zubaan kaat kay sir bhi mera foran kaatain aap mujh say agar inkaar nahin chaahtay hain
Dheron daad meri taraf se. Saeed
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Post by nazghazal on Jun 24, 2008 13:08:41 GMT 5
raah main aik bhi deevar nahin chaahtay hain log ab ishq main azaar nahin chaahtay hain
chaahnay waalay tera wasl yaqeenan chaahain haan magar hum say talabgaar nahin chaahtay hain
hum kahaani say kai baar nikalnay waalay is main ab koi bhi kirdaar nahin chaahtay hain
ab zubaan kaat kay sir bhi mera foran kaatain aap mujh say agar inkaar nahin chaahtay hain
chaahtay hain keh usay door talak daykh sakain laykin is baat par israar nahin chaahtay hainrazi-ud-din razi razi ji ! aapka kalaam hamaisha mutaasir karta zahir hai aap likhte hi itna acha hain aapki ye tehreer bhi bohot mutaasir kun or pur asar hai daad qabool kijyega janab bohot si naz ghazal
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 26, 2008 9:49:28 GMT 5
Razi bhai, Aapki yeh khubsurat ghazal bhi phichley saal ki un dinoN ki hai jab mein yahan Federal Election mein masroof tha….aur gher hazir raha. Mazrat! Kiya khub matla hai… raah main aik bhi deevar nahin chaahtay hain log ab ishq main azaar nahin chaahtay hain aur is sher ki kiya bat hai… ab zubaan kaat kay sir bhi mera foran kaatain aap mujh say agar inkaar nahin chaahtay hain Dheron daad meri taraf se. Saeed saeed sahab ghazal pasand karnay ka shukria razi
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Post by rooh on Jun 29, 2008 14:35:40 GMT 5
Razibhai salam
ghazal mei khayal to achhay pesh kiya hain..magar bunat aap ke standard ki nahii lag rahii hai...
appreciation for thots and not for word weaving..lol
bura na manain....but this is what i felt
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 29, 2008 15:11:30 GMT 5
Razibhai salam ghazal mei khayal to achhay pesh kiya hain..magar bunat aap ke standard ki nahii lag rahii hai... appreciation for thots and not for word weaving..lol bura na manain....but this is what i felt chaliay ji koi baat nahi aap ko bunat pasand nahi aai main aap ki raay ka ehtram karta hoon mujhy aap ki bay laag raay achi lagi thanx razi
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Post by tashiezaheer on Jun 30, 2008 2:20:23 GMT 5
raah main aik bhi deevar nahin chaahtay hain log ab ishq main azaar nahin chaahtay hain
chaahnay waalay tera wasl yaqeenan chaahain haan magar hum say talabgaar nahin chaahtay hain
hum kahaani say kai baar nikalnay waalay is main ab koi bhi kirdaar nahin chaahtay hain
ab zubaan kaat kay sir bhi mera foran kaatain aap mujh say agar inkaar nahin chaahtay hain
chaahtay hain keh usay door talak daykh sakain laykin is baat par israar nahin chaahtay hainrazi-ud-din razi Razi Bhai, BOhat khoobsoorat ghazal hey masha Allah. Khas taur per MATlA' bohat hi pasan daaya. Ek ghazal aap ki khidmat meN pesh karney ki jasarat ki hey aaj. sab dostoN ki a'ara ka intezaar rahey ga. Shukriya. Tashie Zaheer
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 7, 2008 23:49:34 GMT 5
raah main aik bhi deevar nahin chaahtay hain log ab ishq main azaar nahin chaahtay hain
chaahnay waalay tera wasl yaqeenan chaahain haan magar hum say talabgaar nahin chaahtay hain
hum kahaani say kai baar nikalnay waalay is main ab koi bhi kirdaar nahin chaahtay hain
ab zubaan kaat kay sir bhi mera foran kaatain aap mujh say agar inkaar nahin chaahtay hain
chaahtay hain keh usay door talak daykh sakain laykin is baat par israar nahin chaahtay hainrazi-ud-din razi Razi Bhai, BOhat khoobsoorat ghazal hey masha Allah. Khas taur per MATlA' bohat hi pasan daaya. Ek ghazal aap ki khidmat meN pesh karney ki jasarat ki hey aaj. sab dostoN ki a'ara ka intezaar rahey ga. Shukriya. Tashie Zaheer tashie sahab ghazal pasand karnay ka shukria thanx razi
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