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Post by muzafarmohsin on Nov 1, 2007 13:21:19 GMT 5
Kahaan Takk Chalnaa Chahoo Ge...?Bataa Do... Koi Ilzaam Baaqqi Haa...?Lagaa Do...?
Merre Sapnoo Ki Mehfil Phoonk Daalli....! Jo Baaqqi Bach Giaa Haa...DIL"Jalaa Do...
BARASSTI AAg Ha,Sholle Hen,Laashen...? Yeh Kis Kaa Hukkam Ha..?"sab Ko Mitaa Do"
Bharre Baazaar Men Ruswaa Huaa "SACH" "JHOOTAA"Keh Rahaa Ha Sar Jhukaa Do..
'"ALLAMM"..Lehraa Diaa Haa Us Ki MAAN Ne... MOHSIN PHOOL QABROON Par Phelaa Do... ---===Hafiz Muzaffar Mohsin===---
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Post by khalid on Nov 1, 2007 22:20:41 GMT 5
Kahaan Takk Chalnaa Chahoo Ge...?Bataa Do... Koi Ilzaam Baaqqi Haa...?Lagaa Do...? Merre Sapnoo Ki Mehfil Phoonk Daalli....! Jo Baaqqi Bach Giaa Haa...DIL"Jalaa Do... BARASSTI AAg Ha,Sholle Hen,Laashen...? Yeh Kis Kaa Hukkam Ha..?"sab Ko Mitaa Do" Bharre Baazaar Men Ruswaa Huaa "SACH" "JHOOTAA"Keh Rahaa Ha Sar Jhukaa Do.. '"ALLAMM"..Lehraa Diaa Haa Us Ki MAAN Ne... MOHSIN PHOOL QABROON Par Phelaa Do... ---===Hafiz Muzaffar Mohsin===--- mohtaram maasha allah khoob ghazal kahi hai aap ney! daad qubool keeje!
aakhri do ash'aar meiN se pehla nazr e saani aur aakhri wazaahat ka talabgaar hai! lekin majmooii taur per ghazal achi hai!
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Post by Sukhanwar on Nov 1, 2007 23:53:08 GMT 5
khoob hy muzzafar bhai thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Nov 2, 2007 7:39:06 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Hafiz sahib
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Post by Atif Mirza on Nov 2, 2007 15:13:14 GMT 5
Hafiz Sahib! Majmooee taur per achhi ghazal hai magar mandarja zail ash'aar kay donoN misr-e-sani qabil murammat haiN kiyunkeh donoN kharij az behr haiN. Barah-e-karam durust kar lijiay.
Atif Mirza
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Post by muzafarmohsin on Nov 6, 2007 9:02:15 GMT 5
khoob hy muzzafar bhai thanx razi thanks a lot
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Post by muzafarmohsin on Nov 6, 2007 9:03:02 GMT 5
bhai aap kaa bohat shukriyaa....
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Post by muzafarmohsin on Nov 6, 2007 9:03:44 GMT 5
Hafiz Sahib! Majmooee taur per achhi ghazal hai magar mandarja zail ash'aar kay donoN misr-e-sani qabil murammat haiN kiyunkeh donoN kharij az behr haiN. Barah-e-karam durust kar lijiay. Atif Mirza thanks for guidance
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Post by muzafarmohsin on Nov 6, 2007 9:04:22 GMT 5
Kahaan Takk Chalnaa Chahoo Ge...?Bataa Do... Koi Ilzaam Baaqqi Haa...?Lagaa Do...? Merre Sapnoo Ki Mehfil Phoonk Daalli....! Jo Baaqqi Bach Giaa Haa...DIL"Jalaa Do... BARASSTI AAg Ha,Sholle Hen,Laashen...? Yeh Kis Kaa Hukkam Ha..?"sab Ko Mitaa Do" aap ki raaey sar ankhooon par Bharre Baazaar Men Ruswaa Huaa "SACH" "JHOOTAA"Keh Rahaa Ha Sar Jhukaa Do.. '"ALLAMM"..Lehraa Diaa Haa Us Ki MAAN Ne... MOHSIN PHOOL QABROON Par Phelaa Do... ---===Hafiz Muzaffar Mohsin===--- mohtaram maasha allah khoob ghazal kahi hai aap ney! daad qubool keeje!
aakhri do ash'aar meiN se pehla nazr e saani aur aakhri wazaahat ka talabgaar hai! lekin majmooii taur per ghazal achi hai!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Nov 6, 2007 17:16:21 GMT 5
Hafiz Sahib! Majmooee taur per achhi ghazal hai magar mandarja zail ash'aar kay donoN misr-e-sani qabil murammat haiN kiyunkeh donoN kharij az behr haiN. Barah-e-karam durust kar lijiay.
Bharre Baazaar Men Ruswaa Huaa "SACH" "JHOOTAA"Keh Rahaa Ha Sar Jhukaa Do..
'"ALLAMM"..Lehraa Diaa Haa Us Ki MAAN Ne... MOHSIN PHOOL QABROON Par Phelaa Do...
(Ma'zrat keh pehlay post maiN ashaar likhnay bhool gaya tha)
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Post by muzafarmohsin on Nov 19, 2007 10:28:00 GMT 5
aap dost guide kartte rahen...ALLAH khair karree gaa...
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Post by shahkaar on Nov 21, 2007 14:57:06 GMT 5
muzaffar saheb
ghazal pasand ayee, daad qubool kejay
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Post by muzaffarmohsin on Nov 21, 2007 15:37:02 GMT 5
muzaffar saheb ghazal pasand ayee, daad qubool kejay shukriyaa janaab
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maya
rukn
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Post by maya on Nov 29, 2007 12:54:22 GMT 5
Muzaffar sahib
daad qabool kejeya. waslam fatimah.
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Post by kanwal on Dec 2, 2007 1:51:34 GMT 5
bohat khoob muzafar sb.
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