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Ghazal
Mar 22, 2008 15:14:11 GMT 5
Post by neelofar on Mar 22, 2008 15:14:11 GMT 5
GHAZAL *****
Yeh jante hoye chalni hai ab jigar mera namak chirata hai zakhmo $e charager mera
mai uss ke yaad k sahraoN me bhatakti hoon na jane khatm kahaN hoga yeh safar meraa
mai bach k jaaoN kahan pathron ki barish se guzer k aata hai uss ki gali se ghar meraa
bachi na dil me kisi aas ki emaret bhi bas eik pal me bana shaher e dil khander mera har eik qadam pe yahan khahishon ka daldal haj jidher bhi jaaoN taa'qqub kare bhnNwar mera ***************
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Ghazal
Mar 22, 2008 23:13:13 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Mar 22, 2008 23:13:13 GMT 5
wahhhh Neelofer sahiba
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Ghazal
Apr 8, 2008 1:15:40 GMT 5
Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 8, 2008 1:15:40 GMT 5
Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Ghazal
Apr 8, 2008 3:47:24 GMT 5
Post by nadeem on Apr 8, 2008 3:47:24 GMT 5
neelofar sahiba As salam u alikum aap ki ghazal parhi sath atif mirza ki sarsari daad dekhi aur biradram rafi tabassum ka wah kehna dil maen chubhnay laga kay yahan shairi par guftago nahen ki jati agar aap ijazat daen to is par guftago ki jaey nahen to meri taraf say bhi wwwwwwwwwwwwwh mukhlis Nadeem Bhabha
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Ghazal
Apr 8, 2008 4:48:01 GMT 5
Post by sunita on Apr 8, 2008 4:48:01 GMT 5
neelofar sahiba As salam u alikum aap ki ghazal parhi sath atif mirza ki sarsari daad dekhi aur biradram rafi tabassum ka wah kehna dil maen chubhnay laga kay yahan shairi par guftago nahen ki jati agar aap ijazat daen to is par guftago ki jaey nahen to meri taraf say bhi wwwwwwwwwwwwwh mukhlis Nadeem Bhabha nadeem bhai jaan iss baat par main to keh keh kar thak gayi huN.Pehle sirf Rafi bhai waahhhh kehte the ab Atif sahab bhi nakal karne lage hain sirf apni post badaana aur karma zayaada karna hi maksad nahin hona chaaiiye. Nadeem bhai shukar hai aap yahan aaye hain to kisi ki madad ho sakegi.Yahan koii bhi bura nahin manaayega,aap jo bhi kehna chaaheN keh sakte hain.Neelofer ji bahut achhi hain vo kyuN bura manaayengi.hai na Neelofer ji?
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Ghazal
Apr 8, 2008 14:08:14 GMT 5
Post by nadeem on Apr 8, 2008 14:08:14 GMT 5
sunita ji yana sirf razi bhai hi bhai kehla saktay haen (kidding) asal maen har bazm ka aik mizaaj hota hai maen chunkay naya hoon aur sad shukr kay yahan sarwar raaz bhi maujood nahen hai ......... is liey pochna hi behtar samjha wesay khamoshi mujhay bhi khalti thi jab kay yahan pakistan kay naamwar shair bhi maujood haen jin maen razi haen saeed haen maen samjhta hoon daad kay sath tanqeed bhi honi chahiey aur naey likhnay waloon ko samjhaya bhi jana chahiey
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Ghazal
Apr 8, 2008 17:46:54 GMT 5
Post by saeedsaeed on Apr 8, 2008 17:46:54 GMT 5
AOA NADEEM BAHI main ap ki bat sy 100% agree hon kay , es forum par hamary umdaa aur famous poets ko yani razi shab, rafi shab,aqeel mailk aur ap ko aur bohot sy aur dosto ko har poet ki peesh ki jnay waly har ghazl py mukamml tanqeed karny chaye, es sy mujh jeysy naye loogo ko ghuftago karnay ka aur bohot khuch seekhny ka mooqa mily ga.
i hope u will start it now. waiting for urs response. Mubashir Saeed france
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Ghazal
Apr 8, 2008 18:01:57 GMT 5
Post by nadeem on Apr 8, 2008 18:01:57 GMT 5
neelofar sahiba ghazal sunanay kay baad ghaib hi ho gai haen ab jab tak wo ijazat nahen deten baat aagay nahen brhay gi wesay maen aik naya silsala shiro kar raha hoon ummeed hai wahan kuch bataen hoon gi
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Ghazal
Apr 12, 2008 13:03:14 GMT 5
Post by neelofar on Apr 12, 2008 13:03:14 GMT 5
Aziz bhno aor bhaiyo!!
Adab ARz hai!
Aap sab ne meri ghazal perhne k baad jo bhi socha aap iss silsile me azaad hain.mai apne aap ko iss adabi dunia me eik tifl e maktab se zyada nhi samajhti. SUKANWAR join kerne ka maqsad bhi yehi thaa ,hai aor rahe ga k kuch seekhne k amal se bhi guzrti rahon......aap meri ghazlon nazmon per belaag tabsare ker saktey hain...ghair hazri ki wajah sukhanwar per khinn maloom ho jaigi..........Regards
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