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Post by neelofar on Aug 28, 2007 18:22:31 GMT 5
Waqt phir aa gyaa judaai ka silsila kyaa ha yeh khudai ka
aaNkh ki mastiyoN pe shak to nhi yeh to hai raaz paarsaai ka
muddat e qaid berh gyii usski muntazer joo raha rehai ka
shaam e gham phir mere dreche me ek diya rakh gyyii duhaai ka
toot ker yuN bikher gye hum aaj tujh se shikwaaa hai narasai ka
yeh nhi zulmm to phirr aor hai kya khooN bha mil raha hai bhai ka
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Aug 28, 2007 22:17:38 GMT 5
shaam e gham phir mere dreche me ek diya rakh gyyii duhaai ka
bohat khoob Neelofer sahiba waesay yeh ghazal aap kay majmooaee mezaj say zra hat kay hay
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Post by naheedv on Aug 29, 2007 5:50:53 GMT 5
Neelofar,
aik achi koshish par daad qubool kijiye!
shukriya Naheed
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Post by khalid on Sept 27, 2007 19:54:29 GMT 5
bohot khoob nilofer saaheba, daad haazir hai!
mohtarema aaj tak aap ne kisi bhi peRhne aur tabsera kerne waaley ko javaab nahiN diya. daad deine waaley ko "aadaab" kehna hamaari mehfiloN aur mashaairoN ki aik haseen rivaayat hai! iski paasdaari ham sabka ferz bhi hai! waisey bhi javaab na deina aadaab ke munaafi hai! baRey baRey shua,raa ne ye kaam kiya hai, aap bhi ker deeje!
khaalid.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Sept 30, 2007 17:26:26 GMT 5
Neelofar G! Ghazal achhi hai! Laikin Mian Khalid Sahib say ittefaq karta hoon. Aap per farz hai keh jawaban Tasleemat hi farma dijiay. Shukria
Atif Mirza :-)
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Post by neelofar on Oct 5, 2007 2:29:34 GMT 5
adabi dunia ke mohtram dosto!!! mujhe is baat ka b shiddat se ehsaas ho raha hai k mujh se eik bewqoofana & bchgana sei ghalti hooi hai................yahan iss baat ki wzahet zaroori hai ke ye bilkul khair shauri tor per hooa.derasl june july aor august me 2 mokhtalif qisam ki shiddat e alalaet ki wajah se hosptilise rahi....bherhaal ye koi excuse nhi hai......mai sukhanwar ke tmaamadabi shakhsiyat ka tah e dil se shukriya adda kerti hoon ke aap ne meri koshishon ko twajja di aor saraha.....Allah sab ko apne hifz o aman me rakhe.....aamin........ apni is naahli per sharminda hoon............moa'zret.........aainda mohta
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Post by khalid on Oct 5, 2007 7:08:09 GMT 5
adabi dunia ke mohtram dosto!!! mujhe is baat ka b shiddat se ehsaas ho raha hai k mujh se eik bewqoofana & bchgana sei ghalti hooi hai................yahan iss baat ki wzahet zaroori hai ke ye bilkul khair shauri tor per hooa.derasl june july aor august me 2 mokhtalif qisam ki shiddat e alalaet ki wajah se hosptilise rahi....bherhaal ye koi excuse nhi hai......mai sukhanwar ke tmaamadabi shakhsiyat ka tah e dil se shukriya adda kerti hoon ke aap ne meri koshishon ko twajja di aor saraha.....Allah sab ko apne hifz o aman me rakhe.....aamin........ apni is naahli per sharminda hoon............moa'zret.........aainda mohta aapki alaalat k baare meiN sun ker afsos hua aur tashveesh bhi! khuda ta,aala jald aapko sehat e kaamela ata fer maaeN!! aameen!!
aap is soorat e ehvaal ko apni na ehli sey her giz tabeer na keeje! der asl forum takhleeqaat 'share' kerne ki jagah hote haiN! yahaN ager koii dost 'interact' na karey to ajeeb sa mehsoos hota hai. aap jab sehat mand ho jaaeN to baqaaedgi se tashreef laaya keeje, sukhanwer aik achhi mehfil hai aur yahaN dostoN ki takaleef kam hoti haiN share kerne sey.
dua go, khaalid.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 7, 2007 15:06:06 GMT 5
Allah aap ko sehat atta farmaeay aur hifz-o-amaan main rakhay. Jawab ka shukriya.
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 23:48:38 GMT 5
Jawab say ghair haziri achhchhi nahiN hoti.
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Post by neelofar on May 17, 2008 21:21:11 GMT 5
AATIF bhai salam, Ajeeb baat hai eik baar phir eik bare operation se guzri hooon...bhot sari moazrat....aap sab ki shikayaten ser aankhon per...per abhi recovery k merhale se guzer rahi hoon aor is me six maah se eik saal tak lag sakta hai..mohtaj e duaa hoonn.... Neelofar
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 2:09:02 GMT 5
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