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Post by nadeem on Mar 28, 2008 0:56:39 GMT 5
muhtram Dosto Adaab apni site www.nadeembhabha.com par kaam kar raha tha kay gogle par nadeembhabha likh kay enter kiya to yahan tak puhncha yahan aa kar dekha kay bahut say dost maujood haen jin maen awal ul zikr Razi ud Din Razi aur Rafi Tabassum jin say meri mulaqaataen bhi haen aur sath kai mushairay bhi parhay phir yahan Uzair ko dekha ji khush howa rafta rafta Sunita tak puhncha aur aaj Atif mirza ko bhi pa liya aur bhi bahut say dost hoon gay jo is jaldi maen kay pehlay membership lay loon phir dhondoon ga abhi tak nahen milay agar wo mujhay daikh laen to mujhay zaroor bataen so aap tamam loogon ki nazr bilkul taza ghazal hai meray wastay dua mera ishq mujh ko zarkhez kar gaya mera ishq is liey mutmain sa rehta hoon hai meray sath ab sada mera ishq tujh ko hi mangna nahen aaya mayri jholi to bhar chuka mera ishq mayray kamray ki kaainaat maen aa nazar aaey ga ja ba ja mera ishq sab naen apni salamti mangi maen pukara keh aey Khuda mera ishq is qadar baywafai jaiz hai mayri khatir nahen mara mera ishq aap kay mashwaray baja lekin kiya karon sab say hai juda mera ishq mujh ko manzil nahen mili na sahi tayri khatir hai raasta mera ishq ijazat chahoon ga Allah Saeen Hafiz
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 28, 2008 1:04:49 GMT 5
nadeem bhai kaysay hain aap abhi aap ko daykha khushi hui k aap bhi hum tak pohanch gay aik chotti see dunya hy yeh doston ki yeh ghazal parhi aap k makhsoos aahang jhalakta hy khushi hui daykh kar her shair umda radeef ko jis tara her baar naay zaawiay say barta aap nay lutf aa gia aur phir yeh shair to dill main utar gia
sab naen apni salamti mangi maen pukara keh aey Khuda mera ishq
wah wah lutf aa gia thanx razi
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Post by nadeem on Mar 28, 2008 1:30:10 GMT 5
razi bhai ye ziyadati hai aap naen mujhay bhai bana diya kher bahut hausla howa aap ki daad daikh kar maen abhi aap ki nazm ki tareef kar hi hata tha kay aap ka message yahan aa gaya inshaAllah mulaqat hoti rahay gi yahan bhi aur mushairon maen ya kabhi multan aana howa to salamat rahaen Allah Saeen hafiz
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Mar 28, 2008 23:39:55 GMT 5
muhtram Dosto Adaab apni site www.nadeembhabha.com par kaam kar raha tha kay gogle par nadeembhabha likh kay enter kiya to yahan tak puhncha yahan aa kar dekha kay bahut say dost maujood haen jin maen awal ul zikr Razi ud Din Razi aur Rafi Tabassum jin say meri mulaqaataen bhi haen aur sath kai mushairay bhi parhay phir yahan Uzair ko dekha ji khush howa rafta rafta Sunita tak puhncha aur aaj Atif mirza ko bhi pa liya aur bhi bahut say dost hoon gay jo is jaldi maen kay pehlay membership lay loon phir dhondoon ga abhi tak nahen milay agar wo mujhay daikh laen to mujhay zaroor bataen so aap tamam loogon ki nazr bilkul taza ghazal hai meray wastay dua mera ishq mujh ko zarkhez kar gaya mera ishq is liey mutmain sa rehta hoon hai meray sath ab sada mera ishq tujh ko hi mangna nahen aaya mayri jholi to bhar chuka mera ishq mayray kamray ki kaainaat maen aa nazar aaey ga ja ba ja mera ishq sab naen apni salamti mangi maen pukara keh aey Khuda mera ishq is qadar baywafai jaiz hai mayri khatir nahen mara mera ishq aap kay mashwaray baja lekin kiya karon sab say hai juda mera ishq mujh ko manzil nahen mili na sahi tayri khatir hai raasta mera ishq ijazat chahoon ga Allah Saeen Hafiz araaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Nadeem sahib bohat khushi hui aap ko yahaaN daekh kar www.nadeembhabha.compehlay bhi visit ki hay isi sukhanwar forum par kisi dost nay link dia tha aap ki ghazal aap ki tarah khoobsoorat aap ki zubani bhi sunaiN gay INSHA ALLAH
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Post by nadeem on Mar 29, 2008 0:19:50 GMT 5
piyaray Rafi Tabassum Salam ghazal pasand karnay ka shukriya ab to inshaAllah mulaqataen hoti rahaen gi
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Post by tmasood on Mar 29, 2008 17:06:23 GMT 5
ach koshish hai.................. daad Hazir hai Khush rehiye
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Post by rooh on Apr 1, 2008 17:17:52 GMT 5
Janab Nadeem Bhabha Sahab, Khushamdeed!
aap kay mashwaray baja lekin kiya karon sab say hai juda mera ishq
Bahot Khoob
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Post by nadeem on Apr 2, 2008 0:19:01 GMT 5
Muhtarma Sunita Adaab aik mast insaan hoon jab dil karta hai duniya say kat jata hoon aur jab dil karta hai is jaal (net) maen phir phans jata hoon ab aap naen shart bandhi hai keh meray ghaib honay say aap pakistan tashreef laen gi to mujhay dubara ghaib hona paray ga............ ghazal ko pasand karnay ka bahut shukriya aur by the way mera ghaib hona to aik gila hai lekin ghaib honay maen pehl aap naen ki thi aap ki post daikh kar ji bahut khush howa Dua go Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by nadeem on Apr 2, 2008 0:21:56 GMT 5
muhtarma rooh Adaab guman hai keh aap ka taluq us sinf say ho ga jis ki tareef maen shair ghazlaen likha kartay haen agar aisa nahen to muhtram rooh aap naen ghazal ko pasand kiya meray liey aizaaz ki baat hai Allah Saeen aap ko khush rakhay dua go Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by nadeem on Apr 2, 2008 0:23:30 GMT 5
janab T Masood Adaab bas koshish ki thi jo aap ko achi lagi dua go Nadeem Bhabha
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Post by saeed on Apr 3, 2008 3:46:09 GMT 5
Nadeem saheb,
Sukhanwar mein khus-aamdeed.
Apki Ghazal achi lagi aur khas ker matla...
hai meray wastay dua mera ishq mujh ko zarkhez kar gaya mera ishq
aur ye sher bhi dil ko laga...
is qadar baywafai jaiz hai mayri khatir nahen mara mera ishq
khush rahen. saeed
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Post by Atif Mirza on Apr 3, 2008 18:45:13 GMT 5
Aray Wah Nadeem Bhai! Lutf aa gaya aap ki ghazal paRh kar. Her sher qabil-e-daad hai. aur khaaS taur per yeh sher tau laa-jawaab hai: -
Sub nay apni salamti mangi MaiN pukara keh aey Khuda mera ishq
Insha Allah aap say iss forum per tau mulaaqaat hoti rahay gi magar bilmushafa mulaaqat ko aik baras say ziyada beet gaya hai. Yeh farmaiey keh aap ko agar invite karaiN tau kia tashreef lay aaiaN gay aap ya INKAAR kar daiN gay?
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 3, 2008 21:25:04 GMT 5
Nadeem ji
aap khush naseeb hai
tujh ko hi mangna nahen aaya mayri jholi to bhar chuka mera ishq
aata hai maangna sabhi ko par chedi jholi bhare to kaise koi.
Daad ke saath
Devi nangrani
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Post by ramishjaan on Apr 3, 2008 23:43:16 GMT 5
AOA nadeem sahib bazm ki raho,n par pehli mulaqat hain magar INSHALLA mazeed mulaqate jari rahe gi pehle to bazm par amad ka shukriya ap ka ............................ aur phir pehli bar me hi itni shandar ghazal atta ki he ke dil o damgah ke sath sath rooh bhi seerab si ho gai wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bisarto ke raste sidhi dil ke patal ko choo gai ap ki yeh ghazal nadeem sahib chamane qalb se dad ke bohat sare phool ap ke husne klam ki nazr waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by saeedsaeed on Apr 4, 2008 20:36:39 GMT 5
salam arz hy NADEEM SHAB I hope u will be very best ,dear ap ki ghazal bohot acchy lagi, yar main ny ap ki website bhi visit ki hay,acchy lagy, ap ki awaz mein ap ki nazmeen acchy lageen, sir meyra ap ky brother Khizar shab sy rabta tha jab main pakistan tha, ab france mein hoon, plz agar ap mind na karen to khizar shab ka mobile phone number to mail kar dain at...mubashir_vvip@hotmail.com..........i will wait for urs response.
ap ki ghazal kamal hy, take care and remember me in urs prayers Mubashir Saeed france
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