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Post by neelofar on Aug 1, 2007 14:14:08 GMT 5
Barish ke baad saaf bhot aasman tha goya khuda zamiN pe bhot mhreban thaa
baat us ne ki thii aisi na samjhi mai deer tak halaNke ke ham sukhan bhi tha aor hamzban tha
kal jab mila to mujh se koii bat hiii na kiii yaaa woh badal gyaa hai yaa mukjh ko guman tha
uss se bichar ke jeene ki kab aarzoo rahi mere liee to bas wohii sara jahan tha
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Post by khalid on Aug 1, 2007 16:19:28 GMT 5
mohtarema neelofer saaheba, aadaab!
aapki ghazal ke chaaroN ashaar khoob haiN! daad haazir hai! ager aik ya do ash,aar, aur maqta shaamil ho jaatey to ghazal zyaada maza deitee!
khaalid.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Aug 1, 2007 22:41:08 GMT 5
Khoobsoorat ash,aar Neelofer sahiba daad qabool kejiay
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 18:47:58 GMT 5
Khoob Ghazal hai.
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