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Post by neelofar on May 17, 2008 22:05:07 GMT 5
GHAZAL ******* tum se ger dosti rahi momkin zandagi bhi ho zindagi momkin
aor kuch deer ger woh ruk jatey hoti kuch aor roshni momkin
tum na aatey to waqtt themm jata jo tuu moujood shyrri momkin
woh bhi shayed mujhe btata kuch ankahi hoti phir kahii momkin
uss ne poocha nhi yehi ghum hai thii yehii akhrii khushi momkin
mujh se maaNgi to hoti jaan merii de na detii na thaa kbhi momkin .........................................................
suneeta bahan! eik taza koshish hazir hai...bas yunhi baithe baithe qalam chal para..... tanqeed aor tareef ka intezaar rahe ga...mohtaj e dua....
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on May 18, 2008 2:03:02 GMT 5
wahhhh
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Post by Sukhanwar on May 18, 2008 12:50:24 GMT 5
aor kuch deer ger woh ruk jatey hoti kuch aor roshni momkin khoobsoorat ghazal hy neelofar sahiba aur sunita ji aap bhi to is ghazal par raay dijiay neelofar sahiba ny khaas taur par aap ko mukhatib bhi kia hy thanx razi
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Post by waqaar on May 19, 2008 16:15:39 GMT 5
Mohtarmah neelofar SaaHebah, bahut hii khoobSoorat aur saadah ghazal hay aapki. pasand aa,ii. dilii daad qubooliYay! waQaar
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 20, 2008 0:29:54 GMT 5
Waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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Post by neelofar on May 20, 2008 11:52:06 GMT 5
Aziz bhaio!!! Rafi, Razi ,Waqar, & Atif....Assalam O Allaikum aap sab ki mehrbaanna tawaajo ka shukrea Allah bless u all...(aamin) b
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 2:07:03 GMT 5
Aik khubsoorat ghazl par dheroN daad ke phooL aapki nazR ,...
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