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Post by Atif Mirza on Sept 25, 2007 23:06:11 GMT 5
[shadow=Red,left,300]Ghazal[/shadow] Kia bujhatay piyas tootay, bikhray paimanay say hum Tashna lub lay kar chalay aaey haiN maikhanay say hum
Chand hi lamhay agar khushiyoN kay mil jaaeiN haumaiN Yeh bhi dekha hai keh ho jatay haiN diwanay say hum
Jiss maiN hero, heroin bichhRaiN hamaisha kay liay KiyooN na janay khauf khatay haiN uss afsanay say hum
Halat-e-Shehr-e-Muhabbat ko na janay kia huwa? Daikh kar lagta hai jesay guzray weeranay say hum
QurbataiN Atif humaray darmiaN bay-sood haiN Aaj bhi woh ajnabi haiN aur bay-ganay say hum
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Post by waqaar on Sept 26, 2007 16:55:36 GMT 5
Atif SaaHeb, khoobSoorat aur saada sii ghazal hay aapki. pasand aa,ii. daad qubool kee jiYay aur apnay kalaam say meHfil ko furozaaN rakh~Yay. Shukriah! waQaar
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Sept 26, 2007 22:22:08 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Atif Mirza Sahib daad qabool kejiay
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Post by Atif Mirza on Sept 27, 2007 15:04:12 GMT 5
Tasleemaat, Adaab! Shukriya
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 23:26:47 GMT 5
Atif SaaHeb, khoobSoorat aur saada sii ghazal hay aapki. pasand aa,ii. daad qubool kee jiYay aur apnay kalaam say meHfil ko furozaaN rakh~Yay. Shukriah! waQaar WaQaar bhai saada insaan hooN is liay saadaa si ghazal keh raha hooN
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 23:27:32 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Atif Mirza Sahib daad qabool kejiay THanx
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 28, 2008 10:21:17 GMT 5
Chand hi lamhay agar khushiyoN kay mil jaaeiN haumaiN Yeh bhi dekha hai keh ho jatay haiN diwanay say hum
umda ghazal hay tamaam ashaar achay hain bus mujhy hero heroin wala shair pasand nahi aaya k us main shairana husn nahi hy thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 28, 2008 20:18:53 GMT 5
Chand hi lamhay agar khushiyoN kay mil jaaeiN haumaiN Yeh bhi dekha hai keh ho jatay haiN diwanay say hum umda ghazal hay tamaam ashaar achay hain bus mujhy hero heroin wala shair pasand nahi aaya k us main shairana husn nahi hy thanx razi Razi Bhai! Taareef ka shukriya! Hero HeroiN walay sher maiN aik haqeeqat hai. Bahar issay aap kay hukm kay mutabiq shaeranaa bhatti say pakaa kar paish karnay ki bharpoor koshish karooN ga.
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 29, 2008 19:00:53 GMT 5
umda ghaazal hay dad qabool kejeay
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 30, 2008 16:09:14 GMT 5
umda ghaazal hay dad qabool kejeay DAad qabool ast, shukriya baraay tareef.
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 30, 2008 19:31:07 GMT 5
aatif sahab acchi ghazal kahi aap nay. lutf aa gaya.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 30, 2008 20:16:15 GMT 5
Atif sahab acchi ghazal kahi aap nay. lutf aa gaya. Dr Sb! Taareef ka bahut shukriya. Aik shehr maiN hotay huway bhi hum aik doosray ki shaeri per raay net per day rahay haiN. Dr Saheb iss baat per ghaur kijiay ga!
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Post by ramishjaan on Jul 31, 2008 17:27:14 GMT 5
AOA Atif bhai bohat khoob
Kia bujhatay piyas tootay, bikhray paimanay say hum Tashna lub lay kar chalay aaey haiN maikhanay say hum
umda kheyal par mabni sher he
Halat-e-Shehr-e-Muhabbat ko na janay kia huwa? Daikh kar lagta hai jesay guzray weeranay say hum
hazoor har taraf yehi halat hai,n
Atif bhai bohat sari dad qabol ki jiye is khobsorat Ghazal ke liye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 31, 2008 18:16:10 GMT 5
Ramish bhai daad aur hosla baRhaanay ka bahut shukriya! Mamnoon hooN keh aap nay mujh naacheez ki ghazal per nazr-e-karam ki! Daad qabool ki!
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Post by zaki on Sept 22, 2008 14:23:03 GMT 5
Salam Atif Bhai..... Ap ne aik bahut he umdah ghazal parhne ko di..... Bahut achi lagi apki Ghazal...... Meri taraf se bhi baht sari daad app k leay.... sada khush raheay.....
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