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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jun 15, 2008 10:02:54 GMT 5
achay radeef qafia ka sath bhar poor ghazal hay dad hazir hay
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 16, 2008 13:23:37 GMT 5
achay radeef qafia ka sath bhar poor ghazal hay dad hazir hay Aqeel Malik Sb aap ka bahut shukriya keh aap nay pazeeraee ki.
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Post by saeedsaeed on Jun 16, 2008 21:14:18 GMT 5
AOA ATIF SHAB DADD HAEER HY
DUWA GOO Mubashir
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 16, 2008 21:20:00 GMT 5
AOA ATIF SHAB DADD HAEER HY DUWA GOO Mubashir Bahut shukriya Mubashar ji!
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jun 20, 2008 18:22:22 GMT 5
aatif sahib bohot acchi ghazal kahi aap nay. jazbay ki shiddat her shair main jhalakti hay. sirf aik arz hay jis shair main aap nay girah lagai hay wahan shaid aap kuch jald bazi ker gae.jis misray per girah lagai jati hah to parnay wala ye tawqo ker raha hota hay k koi aisa misra samnay aaie ga jo chonka de gay aur original shair say bhi ziada lutf day ga.magar mazarat k sath is gazal main aap k han aisa nahin ho saka. baqi gazal dad ki mustahiq hay.
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jun 20, 2008 23:15:17 GMT 5
aatif sahib bohot acchi ghazal kahi aap nay. jazbay ki shiddat her shair main jhalakti hay. sirf aik arz hay jis shair main aap nay girah lagai hay wahan shaid aap kuch jald bazi ker gae.jis misray per girah lagai jati hah to parnay wala ye tawqo ker raha hota hay k koi aisa misra samnay aaie ga jo chonka de gay aur original shair say bhi ziada lutf day ga.magar mazarat k sath is gazal main aap k han aisa nahin ho saka. baqi gazal dad ki mustahiq hay. Zagham Ji! Aap ki tawajjah aur pazeeraaee kay liay mamnoon hooN. Aap kay e'traz ko madd-e-nazar rakhtay huway arz hai keh yeh misraa Sahir Ludhyanvi ki aik Nazm "Kisi Ko Udaas Daikh Kar" say hai! Kisi hadd tak aap ki baat tasleem karta hooN aur koshish karooN ga keh isay mazeed behtar kar kay paish karooN, uss waqt tak aap issi girah ko bardash kijiay. Baqi Ghazal kay liay daad denay ka bahut shukriya.
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Post by zaki on Sept 27, 2008 14:42:16 GMT 5
Wah Atif Sahib....... Bahut Khoob.... Dil ki gah'raaron se daad qabool farmaeay............
Sada Khush raheay.....
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 26, 2009 17:27:00 GMT 5
Wah Atif Sahib....... Bahut Khoob.... Dil ki gah'raaron se daad qabool farmaeay............ Sada Khush raheay..... Shukriya Zaki Bhai!
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Post by jooni on Jan 26, 2009 23:27:24 GMT 5
Boht hi umdah aur piyari ghazal.
DaaD hazir hai Atif Bhai.
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