jooni
sukhanshanas
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Post by jooni on Jul 27, 2008 4:58:42 GMT 5
Sukhanwar Dosto, Adaab. Aik mukhtasar si nazm hazir hai. Ye nazm main "Atif Mirza Bhaii" kay naam kerta hoon. Ap ki aaraa ka intezaar rahay ga.
"KAASH"
Koii to hota Jo mairi khaatir Rat-jagon kay azaab sehta!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 28, 2008 2:16:50 GMT 5
ahaaaaaaa maiN hooN naa jooni sahib
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Post by kanwal on Jul 30, 2008 1:02:29 GMT 5
Sukhanwar Dosto, Adaab. Aik mukhtasar si nazm hazir hai. Ye nazm main "Atif Mirza Bhaii" kay naam kerta hoon. Ap ki aaraa ka intezaar rahay ga. "KAASH" Koii to hota Jo mairi khaatir Rat-jagon kay azaab sehta! Choti magar dil ki taroN ki chhooti hui nazM ,...
Daad ke phooL Aapki nazR ,...
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 30, 2008 10:40:54 GMT 5
boht mukhtasir magar mukamal baat laykin yeh to bataain aap k jaagnay sy aatif sahab ka kia taaluk hy thanx razi
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Post by tmasood on Jul 30, 2008 19:06:33 GMT 5
achee hai
reh haiko hai?
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Post by ramishjaan on Aug 10, 2008 0:44:34 GMT 5
AOA jooni bhai wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kash koi hota kashhhhhhhhhhhhhh bohat sari dad ap ki is mukhtasir si magar waseeul maani nazm ki nazr waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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meena
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by meena on Aug 10, 2008 22:49:40 GMT 5
Sukhanwar Dosto, Adaab. Aik mukhtasar si nazm hazir hai. Ye nazm main "Atif Mirza Bhaii" kay naam kerta hoon. Ap ki aaraa ka intezaar rahay ga. "KAASH" Koii to hota Jo mairi khaatir Rat-jagon kay azaab sehta! mukhtasir...............aor mukamal..........! bohut khoob.......!! faqat meena
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Post by tmasood on Aug 14, 2008 23:52:54 GMT 5
khoob!
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Post by Atif Mirza on Aug 25, 2008 21:44:49 GMT 5
Aray JunaiD Bhaiyya! Kamal ki nazm kahi hai aap nay! Aur zarra nawazi hai aap ki keh aap apni kaavish meray naam kar rahay hai! Razi bhai kay sawal kay jawab say mujhay bhi dilchaspi hai! Jawab zaroor inaayat kijiay ga!
Wah! Bahut si daad!
"KAASH"
Koii to hota Jo mairi khaatir Rat-jagon kay azaab sehta!
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 28, 2008 11:58:05 GMT 5
Sukhanwar Dosto, Adaab. Aik mukhtasar si nazm hazir hai. Ye nazm main "Atif Mirza Bhaii" kay naam kerta hoon. Ap ki aaraa ka intezaar rahay ga. "KAASH" Koii to hota Jo mairi khaatir Rat-jagon kay azaab sehta! Koi to hota jo apnepan ke rishton ka kuch hissab rakhta Bahut subnder bhav poorna soch ka unwaan Devi
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jooni
sukhanshanas
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Post by jooni on Oct 9, 2008 2:33:46 GMT 5
Adaab, Sub sukhanwar doston ka mamnoon hoon jinhon ne nazm pasand ki aur meri himmat barhaii. Lambi ghair-hazri ki wajah se fardann fardann shukriya bar-waqt na ker saka, ma'azrat chahta hoon. jahan takk Razi Bhai kay sawal ka ta'alluq hai to sirf itna kahoon ga keh Atif Bhai boht apnay apnay se lagtay hain. Sub doston ka boht shukriya.
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zehrab
rukn
ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Oct 16, 2008 11:25:04 GMT 5
Jooni ji
aap ney tow deriya ko koozey mein band ker diya
aur is jin ko phir Atif bhai ki jholi mein daal diya
kya andaz hay janab aap ka.
ek choti si magar bohat taweel ma'ani wali nazm ke liye
ye choti si daad
khaksar
Qamar
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neha
rukn
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Post by neha on Oct 16, 2008 20:20:33 GMT 5
Sukhanwar Dosto, Adaab. Aik mukhtasar si nazm hazir hai. Ye nazm main "Atif Mirza Bhaii" kay naam kerta hoon. Ap ki aaraa ka intezaar rahay ga. "KAASH" Koii to hota Jo mairi khaatir Rat-jagon kay azaab sehta! Wah junaid sahab...itny mukhtasar nazm main itny mukammal baat...bht acchi lagi aap ki nazm
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jooni
sukhanshanas
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Post by jooni on Oct 16, 2008 21:26:55 GMT 5
Qamar Sahib, Adaab. Nazm pasand kernay ka boht shukriya. Ye aap ki zarra nawazi hai verna hum agar darya ko darya ki hudood main hi rakh sakain to boht barhi baat hai. Boht shukriya.
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