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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:03:11 GMT 5
main amooman roman or photo copy wali shairy naheen perh sakta.iss say mera zooq majrooh hota hay.lakin Zaalim top 20 post main jab tumhara pehla misra perha tu pori ghazal perhnay per majboor ho gia.main hamasha shchii dad dayta hoon.tumhari ghazal ki yahi dad hay keh main nay apni aadat toor dii.ager ho sakay tu aap apna kalam urdu image main bhii post ker dain.isay kyaal kehtay hain jo aap nay bandhay hain.werna tu iss forum main ziaada ter sirf bawazan shairy he pernay ko mila.razi bayshak meri iss baat say naraz ho jaiy.wah wah wah...................................................................................................................................... Sir ye tu mayray leay ezaaz ki baat hay ke ap nay mujh aisay talibilm ko itna man samaan dia ap ki mahabat hay ap ka sipaaas guzaaar hoN aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:04:19 GMT 5
Saeed sahab ap ki mahabat hay
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:04:38 GMT 5
Zaki sahab ap ka shukria
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zehrab
rukn
ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Sept 29, 2008 11:24:20 GMT 5
Bohat khub Aqeel saheb
aaj pehli bar shayad aap ka kalam parha aur afsos hua apni mehroomi per ke kaisey itney arsey mein aap ke kalam sey ghafil raha,..............
ek bohat achi ghazal ke liye dgeron daad
Khaksar
Qamar
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Nov 23, 2008 13:35:07 GMT 5
Qamar sahab ye tu ap ki mahabat hay warna banda is qabil kahan tha shukria
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