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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 24, 2008 18:42:13 GMT 5
yehi naheN keh dil o deeda ko bujha dia jaeay tumhari yaad meiN jo hay, usay bhula dia jaeay
koe wujood tumhara na ho khuda e wisaal gham e firaaq say parda agar utha dia jaeay
ham apnay ap say agay nikal gaey heiN bahut ye kia baeed hameiN khud say ab milaa dia jaeay
milaa hay izn hamein aaj, raushni kay khilaaf hawa chalay tu charaghon ko hoslaa dia jaeay
ajab naheN ke falak say nageeN barasnay lageiN agar ye silsala e maa o too mita dia jaeay
koe bhi ishq ki lazat say ashna na rahay hamray sath hamara junooN jalaa dia jeay
gham e jahaN gham e janaN baham say ho gaey heiN hamein ye dard khudaya juda juda dia jaeay
ye wehshat e gul e mehtaab khatm ho ke na ho zameen e shab meiN sitara koe khila dia jaeay
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 24, 2008 19:28:02 GMT 5
hamaysh ki tara aik khoobsoorat ghazal parhnay ko mili is main mujhy shair ka tehkumana lehja boht acha laga boht khoobsoort zameen aur umda mazameen hain
ham apnay ap say agay nikal gaey heiN bahut ye kia baeed hameiN khud say ab milaa dia jaeay
ya phir is k baad wala shair charaaghon ko hosla dia jaay boht khoob aqeel thanx razi
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Post by saeedsaeed on Jul 24, 2008 19:50:01 GMT 5
aoa yar aqeel khoob bohot khoob hameesha ki trah taza aur jadeed share kaheen tum ny sada jeety rahoo yar kis kis share par dad doon, har share hy dadd sy aagy ki bat karta hy zinda rahoo hameesha rahoo wah wah wah
thumara Mubashir saeed
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 28, 2008 18:10:21 GMT 5
Razi Sahab Ap ka shukria
aqeel
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 28, 2008 18:10:52 GMT 5
Saeed Mian!
ap ki mahabat ka bay had shukr guzar hoN
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Post by Zagham Abidi on Jul 28, 2008 18:32:30 GMT 5
aqeel sahab rivayat ur jiddat ko milaty hoay bohot achhi ghazal kahi aap nay. kia waja hay aaj kal aap forum per kum kum nazar atay hain
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 29, 2008 18:55:31 GMT 5
dr sahab ap ka shukria bas masroofiat aisi hay ke ana nahi hota aur dosri waja ye hay k mujhy net kafe jana parta hay so is waja say bhi dair hojati hay ap nay ghazal parhi ap ko achi lagi ap ka shukria
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Post by tmasood on Jul 30, 2008 19:32:04 GMT 5
janaab is khoobSurat ghazal per daad qabuul fermaaiN
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 30, 2008 19:52:50 GMT 5
Bilashuba aik maNjhi huwi aur napi tuli shaeri paish ki hai aap nay. Daad qabool kijiay, Malik Sahib!
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Aug 9, 2008 21:30:50 GMT 5
yehi naheN keh dil o deeda ko bujha dia jaeay tumhari yaad meiN jo hay, usay bhula dia jaeay
koe wujood tumhara na ho khuda e wisaal gham e firaaq say parda agar utha dia jaeay
ham apnay ap say agay nikal gaey heiN bahut ye kia baeed hameiN khud say ab milaa dia jaeay
milaa hay izn hamein aaj, raushni kay khilaaf hawa chalay tu charaghon ko hoslaa dia jaeay
ajab naheN ke falak say nageeN barasnay lageiN agar ye silsala e maa o too mita dia jaeay
koe bhi ishq ki lazat say ashna na rahay hamray sath hamara junooN jalaa dia jeay
gham e jahaN gham e janaN baham say ho gaey heiN hamein ye dard khudaya juda juda dia jaeay
ye wehshat e gul e mehtaab khatm ho ke na ho zameen e shab meiN sitara koe khila dia jaeay Khoobsoorat ghazal Malik sahib dar asl jab say by name boards banay haiN har board par jana aik mas,ala sa lagta hay isi liay is ghazal par paunhchanay maiN taakheer hui ma,azrat
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Post by ramishjaan on Aug 10, 2008 0:41:59 GMT 5
AOA Malik sahib yaqeen janiye ungliya,n danto tale le li wohi muhawra pora hota he ap ki yeh shandar ghazal parh kar ke dad dene ke liye alfaz ka chunao karna mumkin nahi raha malik sahib chamane qalb se dad ke be tahasha phool aki Ghazl ki nazr waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Post by suhailabbaskhan on Aug 10, 2008 8:43:16 GMT 5
main amooman roman or photo copy wali shairy naheen perh sakta.iss say mera zooq majrooh hota hay.lakin Zaalim top 20 post main jab tumhara pehla misra perha tu pori ghazal perhnay per majboor ho gia.main hamasha shchii dad dayta hoon.tumhari ghazal ki yahi dad hay keh main nay apni aadat toor dii.ager ho sakay tu aap apna kalam urdu image main bhii post ker dain.isay kyaal kehtay hain jo aap nay bandhay hain.werna tu iss forum main ziaada ter sirf bawazan shairy he pernay ko mila.razi bayshak meri iss baat say naraz ho jaiy.wah wah wah......................................................................................................................................
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Post by saeed on Aug 18, 2008 7:04:57 GMT 5
yehi naheN keh dil o deeda ko bujha dia jaeay tumhari yaad meiN jo hay, usay bhula dia jaeay
koe wujood tumhara na ho khuda e wisaal gham e firaaq say parda agar utha dia jaeay
ham apnay ap say agay nikal gaey heiN bahut ye kia baeed hameiN khud say ab milaa dia jaeay
milaa hay izn hamein aaj, raushni kay khilaaf hawa chalay tu charaghon ko hoslaa dia jaeay
ajab naheN ke falak say nageeN barasnay lageiN agar ye silsala e maa o too mita dia jaeay
koe bhi ishq ki lazat say ashna na rahay hamray sath hamara junooN jalaa dia jeay
gham e jahaN gham e janaN baham say ho gaey heiN hamein ye dard khudaya juda juda dia jaeay
ye wehshat e gul e mehtaab khatm ho ke na ho zameen e shab meiN sitara koe khila dia jaeay Malik sb, der se feedback keliye mazrat- shayad hamein apni takhleeqat pehly "andaz-e-bayan" ke general section mein post karni chahiyen ta keh sab ko dekhney aasani ho. mashallah buhut zabardast ghazal hai aapki. Behr bhi buhut rawan hai aur aapka lehja bhi tazgi se bharpoor.... mujhey bil-khasoos matla aur doosra sher pasand aaya... yehi naheN keh dil o deeda ko bujha dia jaeay tumhari yaad meiN jo hay, usay bhula dia jaeay koe wujood tumhara na ho khuda e wisaal gham e firaaq say parda agar utha dia jaeay meri observation hai keh aapki is ghazal ke taqreeban her sher mein aapka misra-e-oola doosrey misrey se qadrey ziadeh mazboot aur chust hai. ajab naheN ke falak say nageeN barasnay lageiN waahhh Ek khubsoorat kavish pe meri taraf se dili daad. saeed
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Post by zaki on Sept 15, 2008 11:22:44 GMT 5
Bahut Khoob Aqeel Sahib....... Sada Khush raheay........
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Sept 28, 2008 11:00:55 GMT 5
AOA Malik sahib yaqeen janiye ungliya,n danto tale le li wohi muhawra pora hota he ap ki yeh shandar ghazal parh kar ke dad dene ke liye alfaz ka chunao karna mumkin nahi raha malik sahib chamane qalb se dad ke be tahasha phool aki Ghazl ki nazr waslam mukhlis ramishjaan ap ki mahabt hay warna banda kis kam ka
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