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Post by neha on Jul 21, 2008 21:51:44 GMT 5
Shikwa koi bhi un say shikayat fuzool hai. Ye bhool aaj ki nahin barso'n ki bhool hai. Jis nay muhabbato'n ko bhi aalooda kar dia. Gard-e-khiza'n nahi ye zamanay ki dhool hai. Jhuk kar miloo'n mein sahib-e-ilm-o kamal se. Aadat hi bas nahin ye .........mera usool hai. Meri riyazato'n ka agar...............hai yehi sila. Jeena nahin hai phir mujhay,marna qubool hai. Jo apni diary main hai mein nay rakha hua. Qismat main mere aik... faqat wohi phool hai. Neha kiun pal firaaq kay... sadyo'n se hogaye? Kiun intizar-e-wasl .............bhala itna tool hai?
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 22, 2008 2:10:03 GMT 5
wahhh Jis nay muhabbato'n ko bhi aalooda kar dia. Gard-e-khiza'n nahi ye zamanay ki dhool hai
Jo apni diary main hai mein nay rakha hua. Qismat main mere aik... faqat wohi phool hai.
Khoobsoorat ghazal neha ji magar maqatay main Neha kiun pal firaaq kay... sadyo'n se hogaye? Kiun intizar-e-wisl .............bhala itna tool hai?
lafz wisl istemaal kia aap nay yeh lafz wasl hota hay
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Post by saeed on Jul 22, 2008 4:11:47 GMT 5
Ye bhool aaj ki nahin barso'n ki bhool hai.
khub Neha saheba.
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 22, 2008 8:11:26 GMT 5
Shikwa koi bhi un say shikayat fuzool hai. Ye bhool aaj ki nahin barso'n ki bhool hai. Jis nay muhabbato'n ko bhi aalooda kar dia. Gard-e-khiza'n nahi ye zamanay ki dhool hai. Jhuk kar miloo'n mein sahib-e-ilm-o kamal se. Aadat hi bas nahin ye .........mera usool hai. Meri riyazato'n ka agar...............hai yehi sila. Jeena nahin hai phir mujhay,marna qubool hai. Jo apni diary main hai mein nay rakha hua. Qismat main mere aik... faqat wohi phool hai. Neha kiun pal firaaq kay... sadyo'n se hogaye? Kiun intizar-e-wisl .............bhala itna tool hai? neha sahiba boht muddat k baad k aap forum par aain kia khoob ghazal hy yeh tamaam ashaar pasand aay isi tara apna shairi safar jaari rakhiay thanx razi
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Post by neha on Jul 22, 2008 16:34:53 GMT 5
Salam Rafi Sahab, Thanx 4 appreciating me .Aaap nay sahi farmiya spell mistake hogai thi mujh se,bohut bohut thanx tashee karnay ka.bas ap sab ki hosla afzai aur rehnumai ki zaroorat hai.thanx again
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Post by neha on Jul 22, 2008 16:36:20 GMT 5
Salam Razi bhai, Ghazal ki pasandeedgi ka bohut bohut shukriya.
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Post by neha on Jul 22, 2008 16:36:57 GMT 5
Thanx Saeed sahab
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Post by rooh on Jul 22, 2008 16:43:36 GMT 5
Nehaji
khoobsurat ghazal hai.....
daad qabool kijiye...
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Post by neha on Jul 22, 2008 18:07:28 GMT 5
Thanx a lot Rooh ji
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