sahil
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by sahil on Jul 20, 2008 18:09:35 GMT 5
Dekh ker jin ko lerztay thay kbhi aghiyaar bhi Gir peray hen azmatoon kay aaj wo minar bhi
Din ka jo ders detay thay gheraib shehr ko Larkharay kis liay wo sahib-e-kerdar bhi
Sochta hoon keoon khara hoon me qalam thamay nhoay Jb nahi is shehr main akhlaq ka meyaar bhi
Justajoo main saye ki Ik umer tk phhirtay rahay "Hum jo bethay zer-e-sayea chl peri devaar bhi"
Kl tlk thay mashriq o maghrib kay hum bhi hukamraan Ab mger apnay nahi miltay humain aasar bhi
Jonhi faqoon nay barhai mujh say Sahil dosti lag gay nazrain churanay mujh say meray yaar bhi
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 20, 2008 23:06:11 GMT 5
jamshaid sahab aap ki ghazal parhnay ka moqa mila khushi hui k aap ny ani poetry sukhanwar forum par bhayjna shuroo kar dee hy khoobsorat ghazal hy tarah misra par aap nay girah bhi khoob lagaai hy daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 21, 2008 21:56:29 GMT 5
Bahut hi napi yuli shaeri hai Sahil Bhai! Bahut si daad hazir hai. Khaas taur per girah per tau bay-sakhta daad denay ko dil karta hai. SO dili khwahish poori kartay huway uss per bhi daad qabool kijiay.
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jul 22, 2008 2:07:59 GMT 5
wahhhhhhhh Dekh ker jin ko lerztay thay kbhi aghiyaar bhi Gir peray hen azmatoon kay aaj wo minar bhi
Din ka jo ders detay thay gheraib shehr ko Larkharay kis liay wo sahib-e-kerdar bhi
Sochta hoon keoon khara hoon me qalam thamay nhoay Jb nahi is shehr main akhlaq ka meyaar bhi
Justajoo main saye ki Ik umer tk phhirtay rahay "Hum jo bethay zer-e-sayea chl peri devaar bhi"
Kl tlk thay mashriq o maghrib kay hum bhi hukamraan Ab mger apnay nahi miltay humain aasar bhi
Jonhi faqoon nay barhai mujh say Sahil dosti lag gay nazrain churanay mujh say meray yaar bhi sari ghazal khoobsoorat daad hazir hay sahil sahib
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Post by saeed on Jul 22, 2008 4:03:35 GMT 5
Sahil sb, achi kavish hai....
Justajoo main saye ki Ik umer tk phhirtay rahay "Hum jo bethay zer-e-sayea chl peri devaar bhi"
Waahh Saeed
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jooni
sukhanshanas
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Post by jooni on Jul 23, 2008 4:38:38 GMT 5
Sahil Sahib, Bahut khoob ghazal hai. Khushi hui k ap nazm k saath saath ghazal per bhi tawajjoh de rahay hain. "SUKHANWAR" ke forum per meri pehli haazri hai. Tamam ahbab ko "SALAM" aur "ADAAB" arz karta hun. Razi Sahib, Atif Mirza Sahib, Rafi Sahib aur doosray doston ko "MUBARAKBAD" paish karta hun. Umeed karta hun k meri bila-ejazat hazri SUKHANWAR k doston per giran nhi guzray gi. SAhil, ap ka shukriya keh ap ne SUKHANWAR ka mujh se ta'aruf karaya. Sub doston ki khidmat main aik bar phir ADAAB.
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sahil
ibtidaai rukn
Posts: 66
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Post by sahil on Jul 23, 2008 7:43:08 GMT 5
Aap Sub Logoon ki Mohabtain me Kabhi na Bhola Paoon ga. "Sukhanwar" ki Mehfil Hum Tmam Dostoon say Abad rhay gi. Razi Bahi ki Un thak Koshishoon ka Summer hay kh Aaj Hum Apnay Hony ka Aelaan kar rahi hen.....Bharpor Aelaan-e-Muhabat sub kay liay.....Jooni ! "Sukhanwar" main Khosh Amdeed. Jamshaid Sahil
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jul 23, 2008 8:38:36 GMT 5
Sahil Sahib, Bahut khoob ghazal hai. Khushi hui k ap nazm k saath saath ghazal per bhi tawajjoh de rahay hain. "SUKHANWAR" ke forum per meri pehli haazri hai. Tamam ahbab ko "SALAM" aur "ADAAB" arz karta hun. Razi Sahib, Atif Mirza Sahib, Rafi Sahib aur doosray doston ko "MUBARAKBAD" paish karta hun. Umeed karta hun k meri bila-ejazat hazri SUKHANWAR k doston per giran nhi guzray gi. SAhil, ap ka shukriya keh ap ne SUKHANWAR ka mujh se ta'aruf karaya. Sub doston ki khidmat main aik bar phir ADAAB. jooni sahab aap ko hum yahan khush aamdeed kehtay hain aap k liay aik alag thread mehfil main bana raha hoon wahan hum aap k baaray main mazeed jaan sakain gy
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Post by rooh on Jul 23, 2008 16:10:56 GMT 5
Sahil sahab adaab
bahot khoobsurat ghazal hai...
Dekh ker jin ko lerztay thay kbhi aghiyaar bhi Gir peray hen azmatoon kay aaj wo minar bhi
bahot khoob
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