anmol
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Post by anmol on Mar 7, 2008 12:58:51 GMT 5
Aadaab!
aik ghazal jo maiNe kaafi arse pehle kahi thi, lekin shaayad is forum meiN post nahiiN ki, aaj aap sab se share kar rahi huuN.
Ghazal:
mire dil pe Hasrat barastii rahe gi yooNhii zindagii mujh pe haNstii rahe gi!
liye raaKh KhwaaboN ki apnii nazar meiN yeh laRkii Khushi ko tarastii rahe gi
yeh aaNsoo mire yooN hi behte raheN ge magar teri aaNkhoN meiN mastii rahe gi
miree her Khataa yaad rakhe gi dunyaa her ik ki nazar ta'na kastii rahe gi
maiN jab tak bhi zindaa hooN Anmol, us ki kamee naag ban ban ke Dastii rahe gi
by, Ayesha :Anmol:
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Post by riaz ahmed saraa on Mar 8, 2008 0:05:09 GMT 5
bohat khoob
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Mar 8, 2008 0:20:07 GMT 5
wahhhhh
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 8, 2008 0:49:01 GMT 5
anmolji aap muddat baad is bazm main aain is ghazal k jis misray ko aap ny thread ka unwaan banaya wo is ghazal k majmooi aahang ki akaasi karta hy khushi hui aap ki ghazal parh kar yeh shair khaas taur par pasand aay a
mire dil pe Hasrat barastii rahe gi yooNhii zindagii mujh pe haNstii rahe gi!
daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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anmol
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Post by anmol on Mar 12, 2008 20:42:21 GMT 5
Riaz SaaHib,
ghazal pasand karne ka behad shukria!
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anmol
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Post by anmol on Mar 12, 2008 20:43:58 GMT 5
Rafi SaaHib!
Umeed hai k ab aap ki tabiyat bilkul Theek hogi.
ghazal ki pazeerayi ke liye mamnoon huuN.
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anmol
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Post by anmol on Mar 12, 2008 20:51:04 GMT 5
anmolji aap muddat baad is bazm main aain is ghazal k jis misray ko aap ny thread ka unwaan banaya wo is ghazal k majmooi aahang ki akaasi karta hy khushi hui aap ki ghazal parh kar yeh shair khaas taur par pasand aay a mire dil pe Hasrat barastii rahe gi yooNhii zindagii mujh pe haNstii rahe gi! daad qabool kijiay thanx razi Razi SaaHib, aadaab! ye ghazal waqai aik makhsoos ehsaas ke tehet kahi gayi hai, is liye aik misra poori ghazal ki kaifiyat bayaan kar raha hai. aap ko ghazal pasand aayi, mujhe achchha laga. bahut shukria!
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anmol
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Post by anmol on Mar 12, 2008 20:52:44 GMT 5
Sunita ji,
ghazal ki pasandeedgi k liye aap ki mamnoon huuN.
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Post by kanwal on Mar 14, 2008 3:00:49 GMT 5
Bohat khoo Anmol jee ,... Aik Anmol si ghazl par humari tarf se Anmol se daad ke phooL,...
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anmol
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Post by anmol on Mar 14, 2008 21:37:39 GMT 5
Dear Kanwal,in anmol daad ke phooloN ke liye behad shukria. aap ka daad dene ka andaaz bahut munfarid hai aur mujhe hamesha se pasand hai. ghazal ki pazeerayi ke liye aap ki mamnoon huuN.
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ham pe guzrey hain khizaN ke sadmey--Ham sey poochey koi afsaana-e gul
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Post by zehrab on Mar 15, 2008 11:42:12 GMT 5
Aadaab! aik ghazal jo maiNe kaafi arse pehle kahi thi, lekin shaayad is forum meiN post nahiiN ki, aaj aap sab se share kar rahi huuN. Ghazal: mire dil pe Hasrat barastii rahe gi yooNhii zindagii mujh pe haNstii rahe gi! liye raaKh KhwaaboN ki apnii nazar meiN yeh laRkii Khushi ko tarastii rahe gi yeh aaNsoo mire yooN hi behte raheN ge magar teri aaNkhoN meiN mastii rahe gi miree her Khataa yaad rakhe gi dunyaa her ik ki nazar ta'na kastii rahe gi maiN jab tak bhi zindaa hooN Anmol, us ki kamee naag ban ban ke Dastii rahe gi by, Ayesha :Anmol: Ayesha itni choti umr mein itna derd...arey abhi tow tumharey khailney ke din hein khushiyan sametney aur bakherney ke din hein..... bohat dil ki gehraaiyon ko chu leney wali ghazal kahi tum ney.......meri janib sey dheron daad.......sada muskarati raho, khush raho aur dukh aur gham tum sey bohat duur rahen...aameen kher andesh Qamar
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Post by anmol on Mar 16, 2008 0:26:14 GMT 5
Ayesha itni choti umr mein itna derd...arey abhi tow tumharey khailney ke din hein khushiyan sametney aur bakherney ke din hein..... bohat dil ki gehraaiyon ko chu leney wali ghazal kahi tum ney.......meri janib sey dheron daad.......sada muskarati raho, khush raho aur dukh aur gham tum sey bohat duur rahen...aameen kher andesh Qamar Qamar SaaHib, aadaab! bus dua karte rahiyye k KhushyaaN sameTne aur muskuraane ke din bahut jald aayeN. aap ko ghazal pasand aayi, jaan kar achchha laga. waise aap ka kalaam kaafi arse se nazar nahiiN aaya. intizaar hai! Anmol
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Post by dnangrani on Apr 3, 2008 21:16:41 GMT 5
Anmollji
ati sunder gazal ko pesh kiya hai. bahut hi sajwat se buni hui
miree her Khataa yaad rakhe gi dunyaa her ik ki nazar ta'na kastii rahe gi
yehi to hai karti rahi hai sada se yahi duniyaan aage bhi karti rahegi.
Devi
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Post by dnangrani on Jul 14, 2008 13:19:21 GMT 5
mire dil pe Hasrat barastii rahe gi yooNhii zindagii mujh pe haNstii rahe gi!
Liye tishanagi umr bar jo chale hain Sada pyaas aise hi badti rahegi
bahut achi lagi aapki gazal Anmol ji Devi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 21, 2008 13:47:59 GMT 5
Anmol ji! Bahut umda asloob aur achhchhay mazameen kay saath aik piyari ghazal hai! Khasoosi daad qabool kijiay.
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