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Post by Atif Mirza on Sept 20, 2007 18:55:08 GMT 5
[shadow=Green,down,300]GHAZAL[/shadow] ZabanoN per bhi talay lug rahay haiN Mujhay qanoon kalay lug rahay haiN Dareecha soach ka tareek hai ab Khafaa mujh ko ujalay lug rahay haiN Hukoomat jhoot ki ab aa gaie hai Keh such kay dur peh talay lug rahay haiN Asar kaisa jawani nay dikhaya! Zamanay say niralay lug rahay haiN Kabhi miZgaN jinhaiN kehti thi dunya Wuhi ab naizay bhalay lug rahay haiN NahiN ma'loom asar kaisa ho Atif? KahaN peh jaa kay naalay lug rahay haiN? [glow=Green,2,300] Atif Mirza[/glow]
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Post by Atif Mirza on Sept 20, 2007 18:56:44 GMT 5
Taza Ghazal tau nahin laikin pehli bar kisi forum per paish kar raha hooN! Shanwaie ki umeed kay saath.
Atif Mirza
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Post by khalid on Sept 20, 2007 23:29:58 GMT 5
[shadow=Green,down,300]GHAZAL[/shadow] ZabanoN per bhi talay lug rahay haiN Mujhay qanoon kalay lug rahay haiN Dareecha soach ka tareek hai ab Mujhay naraz ujalay lug rahay haiN Hukoomat jhoot ki ab aa gaie hai Keh such kay dur peh talay lug rahay haiN Asar kaisa jawani nay dikhaya! Zamanay say niralay lug rahay haiN Kabhi miZgaN jinhaiN kehti thi dunya Wuhi ab naizay bhalay lug rahay haiN NahiN ma'loom asar kaisa ho Atif? KahaN peh jaa kay naalay lug rahay haiN? [glow=Green,2,300] Atif Mirza[/glow] bohot khoob mohtaram!
her aik sheir khoob soorat hai! aap ne fermaaya ke ghazal taaza nahiN hai! meirey bhaii is mulk meiN to bad qismati se halaat e haazera aik se rehte haiN. is liye aapki ghazal aaj bhi hesb e haal hai.
phir bhi ager aap ko kuch taaza tareen chaahiye, to maiN ne aapki zmeen maiN hi aik sheir kaha hai, peish e khimet hai.......... dil unka din ba din ujlaa raha hai ye jin k kot kaaley lag rahey haiN
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Sept 21, 2007 0:59:01 GMT 5
ZabanoN per bhi talay lug rahay haiN Mujhay qanoon kalay lug rahay haiN
Asar kaisa jawani nay dikhaya! Zamanay say niralay lug rahay haiN
Bohat khoob aatif sahib
Dareecha soach ka tareek hai ab Mujhay naraz ujalay lug rahay haiN
is shaer kay doosray misray par zra daubara ghaur farma lejiay ga
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Post by Sukhanwar on Sept 21, 2007 10:13:24 GMT 5
Hukoomat jhoot ki ab aa gaie hai Keh such kay dur peh talay lug rahay haiN
aatif sahib main aap ka mamnoon hoon k aap ny saukhanwar ko apni khoobsoorat ghazal sy nawaza bohat umda ashaar hain munfarid andaz hy doston ko aatif sahib ka taaruf karwata chaloon atif sahib ka taaluk sargodha sy hay khoobsoorat shair kehtay hain aaj kul multan main muqeem hain thanx razi
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Post by Atif Mirza on Sept 21, 2007 14:36:09 GMT 5
Khalid Shaib! Pehlay aap ka shukria keh aap nay shnwaie farmaie. Aap nay jawab aan she'r bhi khoob kaha hai. Thanx.
Rafi sahib! aap ka bhi az-hudd shukria. Khas taur per rehnumai karnay ka aur "Mujhay naraz ujalay lug rahay haiN" iss misray per ghaur ki da'wat denay ka.
Razi Sahib! Mujhay mutaarif karanay ka sehra aap ki email hai. Jiss maiN SUKHANWAR ka URL click kar kay main apni hi dunya main aa gaya. Qasam say mujhay apnaeyat ka ehsaas huwa. Credit goes to you. Thank you very much.
Insha Allah meri nigarishaat aap kay samnay aati rahin gi. Mian SUKHANWAR ki membership main izafay ki koshish ka aaghaz bhi kar chuka hooN. Insha Allah ziyada dost iss kay members banaiN gaiy.
Fi Amanillah Atif Mirza
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Post by uzair143 on Sept 22, 2007 1:30:46 GMT 5
ATIF SB BOUT HI KHOOBSURAT GAZEL LIKHI HAI APP NE MAZEED KA INTAZAR RAHE GA UZAIR
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Post by Atif Mirza on Sept 22, 2007 17:25:11 GMT 5
MAZEED HAZIR AST, uzair jee
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Post by HASIB RANA on Sept 30, 2007 22:31:00 GMT 5
[shadow=Green,down,300]GHAZAL[/shadow] ZabanoN per bhi talay lug rahay haiN Mujhay qanoon kalay lug rahay haiN Dareecha soach ka tareek hai ab Mujhay naraz ujalay lug rahay haiN Hukoomat jhoot ki ab aa gaie hai Keh such kay dur peh talay lug rahay haiN Asar kaisa jawani nay dikhaya! Zamanay say niralay lug rahay haiN Kabhi miZgaN jinhaiN kehti thi dunya Wuhi ab naizay bhalay lug rahay haiN NahiN ma'loom asar kaisa ho Atif? KahaN peh jaa kay naalay lug rahay haiN? [glow=Green,2,300] Atif Mirza[/glow] DEAR ATIF ASALAM-O-ALEKUM ... GHAZAL TU ACH'HE KAHE HAY AaP NAY . LFAZI B KHOOB HAY AoR TAKHUAL B .......... LAKIN BHER MAIN PORE NAHEEN HAY ..........
NAZRE SANI KI ZARRAT HAY ...... BHER KI TAQTEE KER RAHA HOON ..... AGAR AaP KO BURA NA LAGY TU ......... ZABA .. Non-Per *** Bhi Ta .. Lay-Lag *** Rahay.. Hain MAFA .. E'"Nothing" *** MAFA .. E'"Nothing" *** FA'O .. "Nothing"
MUJHEY .. NaRa ( Z ) IZAFI HAY ...... UJA .. Lay-Lag *** RAHAY HAIN IS MISRY KO YOUN KER DAIN TU WAZAN AoR BHER THEK HO JAYIN GAY KHAFA MUJH KO ** UJALAY LAG **RAHAY HAIN MAFA .. E'"Nothing" ** MAFA E'"Nothing" **FA'O .. "Nothing"
WISH U ALL THE BEST MAY ALLAH BLESS U
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Post by Atif Mirza on Oct 3, 2007 0:53:30 GMT 5
[shadow=Green,down,300]GHAZAL[/shadow] ZabanoN per bhi talay lug rahay haiN Mujhay qanoon kalay lug rahay haiN Dareecha soach ka tareek hai ab Mujhay naraz ujalay lug rahay haiN Hukoomat jhoot ki ab aa gaie hai Keh such kay dur peh talay lug rahay haiN Asar kaisa jawani nay dikhaya! Zamanay say niralay lug rahay haiN Kabhi miZgaN jinhaiN kehti thi dunya Wuhi ab naizay bhalay lug rahay haiN NahiN ma'loom asar kaisa ho Atif? KahaN peh jaa kay naalay lug rahay haiN? [glow=Green,2,300] Atif Mirza[/glow] DEAR ATIF ASALAM-O-ALEKUM ... GHAZAL TU ACH'HE KAHE HAY AaP NAY . LFAZI B KHOOB HAY AoR TAKHUAL B .......... LAKIN BHER MAIN PORE NAHEEN HAY ..........
NAZRE SANI KI ZARRAT HAY ...... BHER KI TAQTEE KER RAHA HOON ..... AGAR AaP KO BURA NA LAGY TU ......... ZABA .. Non-Per *** Bhi Ta .. Lay-Lag *** Rahay.. Hain MAFA .. E'"Nothing" *** MAFA .. E'"Nothing" *** FA'O .. "Nothing"
MUJHEY .. NaRa ( Z ) IZAFI HAY ...... UJA .. Lay-Lag *** RAHAY HAIN IS MISRY KO YOUN KER DAIN TU WAZAN AoR BHER THEK HO JAYIN GAY KHAFA MUJH KO ** UJALAY LAG **RAHAY HAIN MAFA .. E'"Nothing" ** MAFA E'"Nothing" **FA'O .. "Nothing"
WISH U ALL THE BEST MAY ALLAH BLESS U
Hasib Bhai! Wa Alaikum-us-Salam! Shukriya. Mujhay ma'loom tah kay iss per e'taraz ho ga. YahaN asl main Zaad aur Alif ka idgham hai jo keh asaatiza kay haaN jaez hai. Bahar haal ka mashwara qabool kartay huway aap ka durust karda misra istemaal kia jaeay ga. Thanx Atif Mirza
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Post by HASIB RANA on Oct 6, 2007 21:30:32 GMT 5
DEAR ATIF ASALAM-O-ALEKUM ... GHAZAL TU ACH'HE KAHE HAY AaP NAY . LFAZI B KHOOB HAY AoR TAKHUAL B .......... LAKIN BHER MAIN PORE NAHEEN HAY ..........
NAZRE SANI KI ZARRAT HAY ...... BHER KI TAQTEE KER RAHA HOON ..... AGAR AaP KO BURA NA LAGY TU ......... ZABA .. Non-Per *** Bhi Ta .. Lay-Lag *** Rahay.. Hain MAFA .. E'"Nothing" *** MAFA .. E'"Nothing" *** FA'O .. "Nothing"
MUJHEY .. NaRa ( Z ) IZAFI HAY ...... UJA .. Lay-Lag *** RAHAY HAIN IS MISRY KO YOUN KER DAIN TU WAZAN AoR BHER THEK HO JAYIN GAY KHAFA MUJH KO ** UJALAY LAG **RAHAY HAIN MAFA .. E'"Nothing" ** MAFA E'"Nothing" **FA'O .. "Nothing"
WISH U ALL THE BEST MAY ALLAH BLESS U
Hasib Bhai! Wa Alaikum-us-Salam! Shukriya. Mujhay ma'loom tah kay iss per e'taraz ho ga. YahaN asl main Zaad aur Alif ka idgham hai jo keh asaatiza kay haaN jaez hai. Bahar haal ka mashwara qabool kartay huway aap ka durust karda misra istemaal kia jaeay ga. Thanx Atif Mirza ASALAM-O-ALEKUM DEAR KESEY HO AaP . JEE ... DEAR MERY ILUM K MUTABIQ . ZAAD HAROF-E-ATTF MAIN NAHEN AaTA JO AaP MUNASAB SUMJHAIN . Aor RAHE ASATZAH KI BAT TU WO ASATZAH HAYIN HUM NAI ........ AESY TU Dr IQBAL NAY AIK JAGAH PER KHURSHEED KO ( SORAJ ) KHUR LIKHA HAY ..... GHALIB .. TAQI ...... ANEES ... SODA TU YEH KER SEKTY HAYIN LAKIN HUM US MANZAL PER NAI HAYIN .......... JAHAN WO LOG THEY Aor AaJ TAK HAYIN ............. AB AaP Aor MAIN YA ASR-E-HAZER K SHORAA KHURSHEED KO KHUR .PERBAT KO PERB NAI LIKH SEKTEY ........... AaP K IS SHER MAIN UJALEY KA ( ALIF) APNA MOQAM REKHTA HAY .. Aor APNI AaWAZ ...... IS KO KABHI( NARA ... ZAJALEY ) KABHI NAI PERH SEKTY . IS KO UJALEY HE PERHAIN GAY .......... KOI GHUSTAKHE HO GAI HO TO LAEQ-E-SAZAWAR HOON ....... BE HAPPY ALL THE BEST
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 23:39:51 GMT 5
Aray ranaa sahib maan li aap ki baat aur kar diay ussay:-
Khafaa mujhko ujaalay lag rahay haiN
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