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Post by saeed on Feb 29, 2008 3:45:35 GMT 5
Zarf-e-dushman na dam-e-yaar ne zinda rakha Mujh ko ab tak merey pindaar ne zinda rakha
Nabz chalti he nahen zarb-e-mohabbat ke seva Ishq! Mojhko terey aazaar ne zinda rakha
Ek fasana! jisey her peich ne pamaal kiya Ek kahani! jisey kirdaar ne zinda rakha
Wo tamasha tha jisey ehl-e-nazar bhool gaye Wo khaber hai jisey akhbaar ne zinda rakha
Chorh ker mujhko kahen ka bhi na chorha usney Maar ker mujhko merey yaar ne zinda rakha
Saans leta hoon mein seeney mein sumander ke Saeed Kab mujhey sahil-e-beemaar ne zinda rakha
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Feb 29, 2008 23:31:38 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Saeed sahib munfarid qafia radeef kay saath aik khoobsoorat ghazal
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Post by Sukhanwar on Mar 2, 2008 0:26:21 GMT 5
saeed sahib aap muddat k baad aatay hain aur hamaysha koi chonkaa daynay waali ghazal laatayhain achootay khayaal aur achooti zameen baysaakhta daad dee hum nay ap k kalaam par
Chorh ker mujhko kahen ka bhi na chorha usney Maar ker mujhko merey yaar ne zinda rakha
waah waah waah zabardust saeed sahib daad qabool kijiay thanx razi
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Post by naheedv on Mar 3, 2008 0:50:18 GMT 5
Saeed jee achi ghazal hai. daad qubool kijiye!
Naheed
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Post by saeed on Mar 3, 2008 2:45:21 GMT 5
Bohat khoob Saeed sahib munfarid qafia radeef kay saath aik khoobsoorat ghazal Rafi bhai, Buhut shukriya himmat afzai ka. apki sehat keliye duago. saeed
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Post by khalid on Mar 3, 2008 2:54:00 GMT 5
bohot umda!! saeed sb daad haazir hai!!!
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Post by saeed on Mar 3, 2008 2:54:16 GMT 5
saeed sahib aap muddat k baad aatay hain aur hamaysha koi chonkaa daynay waali ghazal laatayhain achootay khayaal aur achooti zameen baysaakhta daad dee hum nay ap k kalaam par Chorh ker mujhko kahen ka bhi na chorha usney Maar ker mujhko merey yaar ne zinda rakha waah waah waah zabardust saeed sahib daad qabool kijiay thanx razi Razi bhai, aapki mohabbat bhari daad aur hosla afzai keliye buhut mashkoor hoon.... zindagi buhut masroof hai... lekin shairi apna rasteh khud banati hai....aur sukhanwar ke doston se naya kalam share kerna chha lagta hai. aadaab. saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 3, 2008 2:55:10 GMT 5
khoobsoorat ghazal par daad meri aur se. buhut nawazish Sunita jee. saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 3, 2008 3:02:56 GMT 5
Saeed jee achi ghazal hai. daad qubool kijiye! Naheed Thanks Naheed for your kind words! saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 3, 2008 3:04:16 GMT 5
bohot umda!! saeed sb daad haazir hai!!! nawazish Khalid saab! saeed
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Post by Tanweer on Mar 3, 2008 11:36:28 GMT 5
Saeed Sahib!
Bohat khoobsurat janab, bohat he omdah.
Daad k phool hazir-e-khidam hain.
Tanweer
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Post by sumanshah on Mar 3, 2008 12:07:42 GMT 5
Adaaab saeed sahab
Pehli bar apka kalam nazar sey guzra tabiyaat khush ho giyi bohat umda likha apnay daad qabool kijyee.
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Mar 3, 2008 16:42:00 GMT 5
Saeed Sahab pehli bar ap ki ghazal ka matalia kia aur phir sharmsari say kuch ban nahi paya siwa is ke mein kahon ke mein ap ko pehlay kiun nahi parh paaya bahut kam aisa hoa hay ke yahan koe fresh aur maujoda zuban o ahang ko leay hoey saleeqay ki ghazal parhnay ko mili ho ap ka han masrooN ki rawani aur chusti qabl e dad hay aur ye sher bahut acha laga
Nabz chalti he nahen zarb-e-mohabbat ke seva Ishq! Mojhko terey aazaar ne zinda rakha
this is what we call freshness and poetification. mayray samait versifire bahut hein koe hota hay jisay sher kehnay ka saleeqa ata hay dhairon dad
aqeel
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Post by saeed on Mar 4, 2008 2:45:36 GMT 5
Saeed Sahib! Bohat khoobsurat janab, bohat he omdah. Daad k phool hazir-e-khidam hain. TanweerBhuhut nawazish Tanveer sahab. saeed
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Post by saeed on Mar 4, 2008 2:46:29 GMT 5
Adaaab saeed sahab Pehli bar apka kalam nazar sey guzra tabiyaat khush ho giyi bohat umda likha apnay daad qabool kijyee. Buhut shukriya Sumanshah jee. saeed
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