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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 14, 2008 2:08:58 GMT 5
AOA ehle bazm ek mudat ke bad ap ki khidmat me ek shikasta si tehreer le kar hazar hon umeed he ap ki bisrato ko nazm pasand aye gi ap ki qeemti araa ka muntazir ap ka ramishjaan be basi tum husne zarf ko apne meeyar se girne mat dena apne shayer ko bewafa likhne se pehle us ke chehre pe likhi be basi ki har tehreer parh lena
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Post by kanwal on Jan 14, 2008 3:47:18 GMT 5
ramish jee ,...
Arse baad aap iss bazM meiN aaye dekh kar khushi hui, aapki tehreer meiN ab bhi wohi khasiyat hai ke seedhi aankhoN ke raste dil meiN utarti hui mehsoos hoti hai ,...
Iss mukhtasir aur pur assar tehreer par humari tarf se dheroN daad ke guL aapki nazR ,.....
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Jan 14, 2008 11:19:21 GMT 5
Post by zehrab on Jan 14, 2008 11:19:21 GMT 5
Ramish ji
as usual ek pur acer aur dil mein uter janey wali tehreer ke liye dheron daad.
Kher andesh
Qamar
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Jan 14, 2008 14:54:52 GMT 5
Post by Sukhanwar on Jan 14, 2008 14:54:52 GMT 5
ramish ji aaj muddat baad aap ki nazm parhnay ko mili ap ka pm bhi parha haalaat sy agahi hui dua hy aap ki mushkilaat khatm hon zindagi ki bayrehmi nay aik achay shair ko uljhaya hua hy humain aap ki bohat saari khoobsoorat shairi ki zaroorat hay thanx razi
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Jan 14, 2008 20:40:58 GMT 5
Post by khalid on Jan 14, 2008 20:40:58 GMT 5
raamish bhaii aadab!
aik arsey baad aapko aapki (hesb e rivaayat) khoobsoorat tehreer k zerye deikha! intehaii khushi huii! um'meed hai k ab aap baqaaedgi se tashreef laaya kareN gey.
khaalid.
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Jan 14, 2008 22:57:25 GMT 5
Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jan 14, 2008 22:57:25 GMT 5
Bohat Khoob
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Jan 15, 2008 14:30:45 GMT 5
Post by ramishjaan on Jan 15, 2008 14:30:45 GMT 5
AOA kanwal jee shukriya ap ki pur khlos dad ka bas apni doauon me yad rakha ki jie ke ALLHA kuch esa likhte rehne ki toufeeq deta ahe jo ap logo ki bisarto our dilo ko choota rahe ameen waslam ramishjaan
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Jan 15, 2008 14:32:08 GMT 5
Post by ramishjaan on Jan 15, 2008 14:32:08 GMT 5
AOA zehrab jee shukriya ap ki pur khlso dad ke liye waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Jan 15, 2008 14:36:43 GMT 5
Post by ramishjaan on Jan 15, 2008 14:36:43 GMT 5
AOA muhtram razi bhai nawazish jo ap ne is tifle maktab ki kami ko bazm me gahe gahe mehsos kiya our khaksar ko yeh yad bhi dilwate rahe ke me bazm m ewapis ao bas razi bhai halat ne kuch esi karwat li ke me sanbhal hi nahi paya bas duaa kare ke ALLHA mujhe himat our hosla atta kare ameen bas apni qeemti doauon me yad rakhiye .. razi bhai me to qalm bilkul hi chor chuka tha yeh to kanwal jee ne bohat himat delai our hosla diya ke kuch likhne ke qabil ho saka ALLHA unhe jaza atta farmye ameen shukriya razi bhai waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Jan 15, 2008 14:39:28 GMT 5
Post by ramishjaan on Jan 15, 2008 14:39:28 GMT 5
AOA muhtram khalid bhai ap ke mohabat se bhar por yeh jumle parh kar ankhe num nak ho gai ALLHA ka fazal he ke is bazm ne ap jese mukhlis our mohabat karne wale dost siye hain khalid bhai bas kuch majboriya esi aa gai thi ke me qalam kitab se door ho geya tha INSHALLA koshish karo ga ke aenda bhi ap ki bisarto ke liye kuch na kuch pesh karta rahon nawazish khalid bhai waslam mukhlis ramishjaan[/color]
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Jan 15, 2008 14:40:39 GMT 5
Post by ramishjaan on Jan 15, 2008 14:40:39 GMT 5
AOA qable ehtram dr sahib mamnon hon ke ap tashreef laye our hosla barhya dr sahib apni neem shabi doauon me yad rakhiye waslam ramishjaan[/color]
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Jan 15, 2008 20:22:38 GMT 5
Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 15, 2008 20:22:38 GMT 5
Ramish bhai! Nasri kalam per tabsara nahiN kar sakta magar kalaam ka mutabiq tasweer ka intekhaab pasand aya, daad hazir hai!
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 18, 2008 1:07:03 GMT 5
Ramish bhai! Nasri kalam per tabsara nahiN kar sakta magar kalaam ka mutabiq tasweer ka intekhaab pasand aya, daad hazir hai! AOA muhtram atif sahib bazm ki rahoN par pehli ap se mukhatib hona ka sharf hasil kar raha hon hazoor ap thred par tashreef laye khushi hoi ap ko tasweer mazmoon ke sath match karti dikahei di ap ne dil se da ddi us ke liye mamnon hon me ap ka ........ atif sahib ek bat ki wazhat our karte chale jate ap apni tehreer me ke nasri nazm par ap raye de nahi skate ja dena nahi chahte dosra mujhe taqreban ardhei sal ka arsa ho geya he is bazm par balke me khushnaseeb samjhta hon ke is bazm ke ibtadaei mimbran me khaksar ka name bhi shamil he atif bhai aj tak is bazm ke qawaneen me kahin yeh nahi likha geya ke agar ap kisi tehrre par raye dena nahi chahte ja de nahi skate to ap lazmi wahan kuch na kuch zaror likhe . bahr hal ap ki tashreef awari ka shukriya agar meri koi bat gher muhazab ja gran guzre to maazrat chahta hon waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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Jan 18, 2008 16:47:45 GMT 5
Post by Atif Mirza on Jan 18, 2008 16:47:45 GMT 5
Ramish Bhai! Aadab! Kia karooN aap ko dost samjha tau jo dil maiN aya mann-o-ann likh diya. Aap ko shayad bura laga jis kay liya maiN az hadd mazrat khwah hooN. Nasri Nazm mujhay achi nahiN lagti lihaza maiN nay yeh likha. Mujhay aap ka tasweer ka intekhab acha laga tha lhaza daad day dali. Main kia karooN iss baat ka keh maiN kissi ko adhairay maiN nahiN rakh sakta aur sachi baat keh deta hooN. Bahar Haal az-hadd maazrat. UmaiN hai keh aap dur-guzar karaiN gay.
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Post by ramishjaan on Jan 19, 2008 1:13:39 GMT 5
Ramish Bhai! Aadab! Kia karooN aap ko dost samjha tau jo dil maiN aya mann-o-ann likh diya. Aap ko shayad bura laga jis kay liya maiN az hadd mazrat khwah hooN. Nasri Nazm mujhay achi nahiN lagti lihaza maiN nay yeh likha. Mujhay aap ka tasweer ka intekhab acha laga tha lhaza daad day dali. Main kia karooN iss baat ka keh maiN kissi ko adhairay maiN nahiN rakh sakta aur sachi baat keh deta hooN. Bahar Haal az-hadd maazrat. UmaiN hai keh aap dur-guzar karaiN gay. AOA muhtram atif sahib sir mujhe ap ki koi bat bhi nagwar nahi guzri thi bas ap ke lehje me kuch talkhi mehsos hoi thi to jese ap ne maan o aan likh diya jo ap ke dil me aya wese hi me ne bhi ap ki threer parhte ho jo dil me aya maan o aan likh diya khushi hoi ke ap ko meri guzarshat buri nahi lagi atif sahib mere liye yeh mahaz ek form ja ek mehfal e sukhan nahi he mere liye yeh ek ghar ki manad he our me ibtadei mimber hone ki hesiyat me khud ko is ghar ka ek esa juzw samjhta hon jis ka farz he ke agar kisi mimber ki tehreer ja kisi bhi rawiye se yeh ehsas guzre ke kuch ghalat he to me razi bhai our dr rafi sahib ke bad apna farz samjhta hon ke munasib alfaz me us ki nishandahi karo umeed he ap bhi khule dil se meri guzarshat ko smajhe ge INSHALLA is bazm me hum akhthe hain mulaqat hoti rahe gi ALLHA kare aenda har mulaqat bohat hi khushgawar mahol me rahe ameen waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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