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Post by tashiezaheer on Jun 30, 2008 2:05:55 GMT 5
GHAZAL
Usey to khaab kisi aur ke suhaney lagey Hamarey dil se nikaltey jisey zamaney lagey
Hamarey dl meN naey khauf sar uThaney lagey Parindey jab bhi kaheeN ghonsley bananey lagey
JinheN panah di ham ne, wohi bacha ke nazar hamrey ghar meN naey raastey bananey lagey
Har ek chehra khila hey gulab ki soorat Ye kaisey rang naey baarishoN meN aaney lagey
Hamri kam nagahi pe wo khud bhi hairaN tha Ham apna jaan ke jisko galey laganey lagey
ham uski baat ka kaisey bhala yaqeen kareN Khud apni zaat ko apney se jo chupaney lagey
Wo jin ke naam se pehchaan ek ehd ki thi Charagh, Tashie, dam e sehr wo Thikaney lagey
Tashie Zaheer, Chairman Urdu Academy of North America, California, USA
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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 30, 2008 23:01:00 GMT 5
tashi sahab boht khushi hui boht din baad aap ko sukhanwar par daykh kar is doran aap ki alaalat ki tashweeshnak khabrain bhi sunin takhliq aur azhar javaid hamaray darmyan raabtay ka wahid zaria thay aaj aap ki ghazal parhi lutf aa gia hamaysha ki tara riwayat k saath jurri hui jadeed ghazal hamaray haan aaj kul urdu ghazal main jadeediat k naam par ibhaam ki jo kayfiat hay aap jaysay log ghaneemat hain jo is main apni alag shanaakht rakhtay hain yeh shair main nay baar baar parha aur lutf haasil kia Hamarey dl meN naey khauf sar uThaney lagey Parindey jab bhi kaheeN ghonsley bananey lagey boht see daad aur dhairon muhabtain thanx razi
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 30, 2008 23:49:32 GMT 5
GHAZAL Usey to khaab kisi aur ke suhaney lagey Hamarey dil se nikaltey jisey zamaney lagey Hamarey dl meN naey khauf sar uThaney lagey Parindey jab bhi kaheeN ghonsley bananey lagey JinheN panah di ham ne, wohi bacha ke nazar hamrey ghar meN naey raastey bananey lagey Har ek chehra khila hey gulab ki soorat Ye kaisey rang naey baarishoN meN aaney lagey Hamri kam nagahi pe wo khud bhi hairaN tha Ham apna jaan ke jisko galey laganey lagey ham uski baat ka kaisey bhala yaqeen kareN Khud apni zaat ko apney se jo chupaney lagey Wo jin ke naam se pehchaan ek ehd ki thi Charagh, Tashie, dam e sehr wo Thikaney lagey Tashie Zaheer, Chairman Urdu Academy of North America, California, USA Khoob Soorat ghazal Zaheer bhai
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Post by Atif Mirza on Jul 1, 2008 0:01:16 GMT 5
Tashie Zaheer Sahib! Aik nihayat khushgawar ehsaas ataa kia hai aap ki iss ghazal nay, riwayat aur jadeediyat ka haseen imtizaj. Alfaaz saada magar pur asar, bayaan suljha huwa, behr rawaN gharzaikeh her tarah say umda shaeri. Daad hazir hai!
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Post by tashiezaheer on Jul 1, 2008 6:46:12 GMT 5
tashi sahab boht khushi hui boht din baad aap ko sukhanwar par daykh kar is doran aap ki alaalat ki tashweeshnak khabrain bhi sunin takhliq aur azhar javaid hamaray darmyan raabtay ka wahid zaria thay aaj aap ki ghazal parhi lutf aa gia hamaysha ki tara riwayat k saath jurri hui jadeed ghazal hamaray haan aaj kul urdu ghazal main jadeediat k naam par ibhaam ki jo kayfiat hay aap jaysay log ghaneemat hain jo is main apni alag shanaakht rakhtay hain yeh shair main nay baar baar parha aur lutf haasil kia Hamarey dl meN naey khauf sar uThaney lagey Parindey jab bhi kaheeN ghonsley bananey lagey boht see daad aur dhairon muhabtain thanx razi Biradaram Razi Saheb, Aap ko ghazal pasand aaie. MeN tahe dil sey Shukrguzaar hooN. Pakistan se wapsi ke baad se hi beemari ne aan ghera. Do adad heart attacks (minor, Thank God for that) aur Pneuomina. Allah ki rehmat se ab maukammal taur pe sehatyaab hoN. Jadeediat ke naam pe taqreeban wohi kuch ho raha hey jo kaheeN kaheeN taraqqi pasandi ke naam pe pehley bhi ho chuka hey. Aap aur aap ke saath Tabassum Sahenb aur Atif Mirza Sahibaan jo kaam kar rahey heN wo laiq e tehseen hey. Ham log to apney safar ki aakhiri tehaaie meN heN. Aap logoN se bohat si ummeedeN wabasta heN. Aap jis lagan aur jaN fishani ke saath kaam kar rahey heN, hamarey dil se du'aeeN nikalti heN. Shaad o Abaad rahey. Tashie Zaheer
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Post by tashiezaheer on Jul 1, 2008 6:50:08 GMT 5
GHAZAL Usey to khaab kisi aur ke suhaney lagey Hamarey dil se nikaltey jisey zamaney lagey Hamarey dl meN naey khauf sar uThaney lagey Parindey jab bhi kaheeN ghonsley bananey lagey JinheN panah di ham ne, wohi bacha ke nazar hamrey ghar meN naey raastey bananey lagey Har ek chehra khila hey gulab ki soorat Ye kaisey rang naey baarishoN meN aaney lagey Hamri kam nagahi pe wo khud bhi hairaN tha Ham apna jaan ke jisko galey laganey lagey ham uski baat ka kaisey bhala yaqeen kareN Khud apni zaat ko apney se jo chupaney lagey Wo jin ke naam se pehchaan ek ehd ki thi Charagh, Tashie, dam e sehr wo Thikaney lagey Tashie Zaheer, Chairman Urdu Academy of North America, California, USA Khoob Soorat ghazal Zaheer bhai Tabassum Bhai, Aap ka husn e nazar hey aur meri khush qismati. Allah karey, beemarioN sey ab kuch arsa bachat ho jaey, phir December meN aap se mulaqaat hogi insha Allah. Bohat shukria Aapka, Tashie Zaheer
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Post by tashiezaheer on Jul 1, 2008 6:56:47 GMT 5
Tashie Zaheer Sahib! Aik nihayat khushgawar ehsaas ataa kia hai aap ki iss ghazal nay, riwayat aur jadeediyat ka haseen imtizaj. Alfaaz saada magar pur asar, bayaan suljha huwa, behr rawaN gharzaikeh her tarah say umda shaeri. Daad hazir hai!
Azizi Atif Mirza Saheb, Aapk note paRh ke Mujhey bayhad khushi hooie. Ghazal ke silsiley meN riwayat se alehdagi kam az kam merey liey qadrey mushkil hoti hey. MeN khush hooN ke aap dostoN ne meri kaqish ko pasand kiya. Men Aap sab ka bohat shukr guzaar hooN. Aap jo umda kaam kar rahey heN, uskey liey bhi meN du'ago hooN. AAp ki kamyabiyoN ke liey nek khwhishat ke saath, Tashie Zaheer
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Post by saeed on Jul 2, 2008 6:17:12 GMT 5
Tashie Bhai,
Pehley to Khushamdeed!
Mashallah buhut achi entry mari hai aapney.... aur is ghazal mein buhut se khubsurat ashaar hain .
Mujhey bil-khasoos ye sher buhut acha laga...
Har ek chehra khila hey gulab ki soorat Ye kaisey rang naey baarishoN meN aaney lagey
waaahhh Daad hazir hai.
Saeed
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Post by tashiezaheer on Jul 2, 2008 11:15:08 GMT 5
Tashie Bhai, Pehley to Khushamdeed! Mashallah buhut achi entry mari hai aapney.... aur is ghazal mein buhut se khubsurat ashaar hain . Mujhey bil-khasoos ye sher buhut acha laga... Har ek chehra khila hey gulab ki soorat Ye kaisey rang naey baarishoN meN aaney lagey waaahhh Daad hazir hai. Saeed Biradar e Aziz Saeed saheb, AA Aap ki daad o tehseen key liey bohat mashkoor hooN meN aapka. Yaqeenana, ye meri khush qismati hey aur aap sab ki azmat, baRhaee aur mohabbat ke aap ne meri kawish ko pasand kiya. Aap ki kitab abhi bhi zere mutale'a hey. Bohat umda shaeree hey masha Allah. MeN kitabeN bohat lutf ley ley ke paRhta hooN, is liey kafi waqt lag jata hey. MeN shrmainda hooN ke aap ki nazm ki VIDEO abhi tak merey haat naheeN asaki hey. Noshi ne bhi un sahab ka merey saath saath kafi peecha kiya hey laikin un ke khiyal meN , "Wo wa'ada hi kya jo wafa ho gaya". Sharmindagi ke marey aap ko email bhi na kar saka. Ab socha ke iqbal e jurm kar hi looN. Mu'afi ka khasgaar hooN. Allah SWT un saheb ko hidayat deN, Amin. Tashie
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noshi
ibtidaai rukn
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Post by noshi on Jul 4, 2008 2:55:03 GMT 5
Tashie Bhai,
Bohat achi ghazal hai.Mazeed intezar rahey ga.
Noshi
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Post by tashiezaheer on Jul 4, 2008 10:34:15 GMT 5
Tashie Bhai, Bohat achi ghazal hai.Mazeed intezar rahey ga. Noshi Noshi, Bohat Shukria aapka. Insha Allah, jald hi pesh karooN ga. Aap ne ek taza ghazal ka wada kiya tha, shiddat se intizaar hey uska. Shaad o Abaad rahey, Tashie
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jul 24, 2008 19:17:09 GMT 5
ap jaysay ahle sukhan ka sukhanwar par hona ham naey likhnay waloN kay leay khush aind hay kiun ke ham apnay seniors say lafz ko baratny ki treatment seekhty hein ap ki zair e nazar ghazal bahut umda aur labo lehjay say khoobsorat lagi dad qabooleay
aqeel
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Post by tashiezaheer on Jul 25, 2008 23:42:13 GMT 5
ap jaysay ahle sukhan ka sukhanwar par hona ham naey likhnay waloN kay leay khush aind hay kiun ke ham apnay seniors say lafz ko baratny ki treatment seekhty hein ap ki zair e nazar ghazal bahut umda aur labo lehjay say khoobsorat lagi dad qabooleay aqeel Azizi Aqeel saheb, sab se pehley to aap meri janib se ma'azarat qubool farmaey. Men abhi bhi is platform ke takniki muamlaat se nawaqfiat ka shikaar hooN. Aaap ka paigham agarche purana hey laikin merey liey aaj hi nazar nawaz hooa hey. Aap ki mohabbat aur izzat afzaie ke liey meN aap ka tah e dil se mamnoon hooN aur daad ke liey mashkoor hooN. Allah se du'a go hooN aap ki salamti aur muskurati, gungunati zindagi ke liey. Shhad o abaad rahey, Tashie
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Post by dnangrani on Aug 25, 2008 18:34:40 GMT 5
GHAZAL Usey to khaab kisi aur ke suhaney lagey Hamarey dil se nikaltey jisey zamaney lagey Hamarey dl meN naey khauf sar uThaney lagey Parindey jab bhi kaheeN ghonsley bananey lagey JinheN panah di ham ne, wohi bacha ke nazar hamrey ghar meN naey raastey bananey lagey Har ek chehra khila hey gulab ki soorat Ye kaisey rang naey baarishoN meN aaney lagey Hamri kam nagahi pe wo khud bhi hairaN tha Ham apna jaan ke jisko galey laganey lagey ham uski baat ka kaisey bhala yaqeen kareN Khud apni zaat ko apney se jo chupaney lagey Wo jin ke naam se pehchaan ek ehd ki thi Charagh, Tashie, dam e sehr wo Thikaney lagey Tashie Zaheer, Chairman Urdu Academy of North America, California, USA Bahut khoob!! ham uski baat ka kaisey bhala yaqeen kareN Khud apni zaat ko apney se jo chupaney lagey Lajawaab sher hai Devi Nangrani
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zaki
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Post by zaki on Feb 28, 2009 12:44:37 GMT 5
Wah! Bahut umdah ghazal share ki hai app ne... Ghazal k tammaam asha'ar be'had passand aye... Bahut shukria itni khoobsorat ghazal share karne ka... Sada khush raheay...
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