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Post by Sukhanwar on Jun 21, 2008 23:06:45 GMT 5
Shikast maan ke taskheer ker liya hai mujhey yeh aik misra hi ghazal k mizaaj aur uthaan ki akaasi karta hay
Bikher gaya tha sar-e-shehr-e-na-shanasaaN maiN Kisi ke rabt ne ta-meer ker liya hai mujhey
aur phir yeh shair
Nikal ke jaoN kahaN main hisar-e-gardish se Safar ne paoN mein zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
saeed bhai kis kis shair ko nazar andaz karoon boht khushi hota hy aysi umda shairi parh kar boht see daad aap k liay aur boht see muhabatain bhi thanx razi
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Post by saeed on Jun 26, 2008 4:37:29 GMT 5
Shikast maan ke taskheer ker liya hai mujhey yeh aik misra hi ghazal k mizaaj aur uthaan ki akaasi karta hay Bikher gaya tha sar-e-shehr-e-na-shanasaaN maiN Kisi ke rabt ne ta-meer ker liya hai mujhey aur phir yeh shair Nikal ke jaoN kahaN main hisar-e-gardish se Safar ne paoN mein zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey saeed bhai kis kis shair ko nazar andaz karoon boht khushi hota hy aysi umda shairi parh kar boht see daad aap k liay aur boht see muhabatain bhi thanx razi Razi bhai, Buhut nawazish aapki daad aur muhabbatoN keliye. Saeed
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Post by tashiezaheer on Jul 4, 2008 11:18:36 GMT 5
Back from holidays....eik taza kavish dostoN ki nazr.... Shikast maan ke taskheer ker liya hai mujhey Ghazaal-e-dasht ne zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN muntashir tha kisi aks-e-rayegaaN ki tarah Nigah-e-shauq ne tasveer ker liya hai mujhey
Bikher gaya tha sar-e-shehr-e-na-shanasaaN maiN Kisi ke rabt ne ta-meer ker liya hai mujhey
Nikal ke jaoN kahaN main hisar-e-gardish se Safar ne paoN mein zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
merey januN pe kabhi harf aa naheN sakta Hawa ne ret pe tehreer ker liya hai mujhey
Sakoot-e-gham se badan khaak ho chala tha mera Kisi ke lams ne akseer ker liya hai mujhey
Merey sukhan meiN samaa ker kitaab-ru ne meri Khud apney husn ki tafseer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN ek khayal-e-sar-e-rehguzaar-e-shab tha Saeed Kisi ke khwab ne ta-beer ker liya hai mujhey Saeed Bahi, Umda Ghazal inyat farmaee hey aap ney. Aap ka ye sher MeiN muntashir tha kisi aks-e-rayegaaN ki tarah Nigah-e-shauq ne tasveer ker liya hai mujhey meN ne baar baar paRha aur har baar lutf andoz hooa. Bohat Shukria. Tashie
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Post by saeed on Jul 15, 2008 8:55:14 GMT 5
Back from holidays....eik taza kavish dostoN ki nazr.... Shikast maan ke taskheer ker liya hai mujhey Ghazaal-e-dasht ne zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN muntashir tha kisi aks-e-rayegaaN ki tarah Nigah-e-shauq ne tasveer ker liya hai mujhey
Bikher gaya tha sar-e-shehr-e-na-shanasaaN maiN Kisi ke rabt ne ta-meer ker liya hai mujhey
Nikal ke jaoN kahaN main hisar-e-gardish se Safar ne paoN mein zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
merey januN pe kabhi harf aa naheN sakta Hawa ne ret pe tehreer ker liya hai mujhey
Sakoot-e-gham se badan khaak ho chala tha mera Kisi ke lams ne akseer ker liya hai mujhey
Merey sukhan meiN samaa ker kitaab-ru ne meri Khud apney husn ki tafseer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN ek khayal-e-sar-e-rehguzaar-e-shab tha Saeed Kisi ke khwab ne ta-beer ker liya hai mujhey Saeed Bahi, Umda Ghazal inyat farmaee hey aap ney. Aap ka ye sher MeiN muntashir tha kisi aks-e-rayegaaN ki tarah Nigah-e-shauq ne tasveer ker liya hai mujhey meN ne baar baar paRha aur har baar lutf andoz hooa. Bohat Shukria. Tashie Tashie bhai, Aapka buhut shukriya is pzeerayi keliye. aadab, Saeed
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