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Post by saeed on Jun 2, 2008 10:57:48 GMT 5
Back from holidays....eik taza kavish dostoN ki nazr....
Shikast maan ke taskheer ker liya hai mujhey Ghazaal-e-dasht ne zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN muntashir tha kisi aks-e-rayegaaN ki tarah Nigah-e-shauq ne tasveer ker liya hai mujhey
Bikher gaya tha sar-e-shehr-e-na-shanasaaN maiN Kisi ke rabt ne ta-meer ker liya hai mujhey
Nikal ke jaoN kahaN main hisar-e-gardish se Safar ne paoN mein zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
merey januN pe kabhi harf aa naheN sakta Hawa ne ret pe tehreer ker liya hai mujhey
Sakoot-e-gham se badan khaak ho chala tha mera Kisi ke lams ne akseer ker liya hai mujhey
Merey sukhan meiN samaa ker kitaab-ru ne meri Khud apney husn ki tafseer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN ek khayal-e-sar-e-rehguzaar-e-shab tha Saeed Kisi ke khwab ne ta-beer ker liya hai mujhey
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Post by Rafi Tabasum on Jun 4, 2008 0:03:59 GMT 5
Back from holidays....eik taza kavish dostoN ki nazr.... Shikast maan ke taskheer ker liya hai mujhey Ghazaal-e-dasht ne zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN muntashir tha kisi aks-e-rayegaaN ki tarah Nigah-e-shauq ne tasveer ker liya hai mujhey
Bikher gaya tha sar-e-shehr-e-na-shanasaaN maiN Kisi ke rabt ne ta-meer ker liya hai mujhey
Merey sukhan meiN samaa ker kitaab-ru ne meri Khud apney husn ki tafseer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN ek khayal-e-sar-e-rehguzaar-e-shab tha Saeed Kisi ke khwab ne ta-beer ker liya hai mujhey izafa: Nikal ke jaoN kahaN main hisar-e-gardish se Safar ne paoN ki zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey Khoosoorat Ghazal Saeed sahib khoobsoorat izafay kay saath waqaee izafa is ghazal ki khoobsoorti main izafa karta hay
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noshi
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Post by noshi on Jun 4, 2008 23:09:55 GMT 5
[glow=red,2,300][glow=red,2,300]Saeed Khan
Aap ne tu khiyal ke jugnu ikathey ker ke iss ghazal ki hataili per saja diye...
Khub bohat khub!
Noshi Gilani[/glow][/glow]
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Post by kanwal on Jun 5, 2008 0:33:01 GMT 5
Back from holidays....eik taza kavish dostoN ki nazr.... Shikast maan ke taskheer ker liya hai mujhey Ghazaal-e-dasht ne zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN muntashir tha kisi aks-e-rayegaaN ki tarah Nigah-e-shauq ne tasveer ker liya hai mujhey
Bikher gaya tha sar-e-shehr-e-na-shanasaaN maiN Kisi ke rabt ne ta-meer ker liya hai mujhey
Merey sukhan meiN samaa ker kitaab-ru ne meri Khud apney husn ki tafseer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN ek khayal-e-sar-e-rehguzaar-e-shab tha Saeed Kisi ke khwab ne ta-beer ker liya hai mujhey izafa: Nikal ke jaoN kahaN main hisar-e-gardish se Safar ne paoN mein zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
merey januN pe ko-e harf aa naheN sakta Hawa ne ret pe tehreer ker liya hai mujhey
Jab aur kuch na hua dushman-e-haseeN se merey Aseer-e-zulf-e-girah-geer ker liya hai mujhey
Sakoot-e-gham se badan khaak ho chala tha magar Kisi ke lams ne akseer ker liya hai mujhey bohat umdaa ,...
Daad ke gulshan ke sabhi phooL aapki iss
khubsoorat si kaavish ki nazR ,...
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Post by saeed on Jun 5, 2008 6:57:22 GMT 5
Back from holidays....eik taza kavish dostoN ki nazr.... Shikast maan ke taskheer ker liya hai mujhey Ghazaal-e-dasht ne zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN muntashir tha kisi aks-e-rayegaaN ki tarah Nigah-e-shauq ne tasveer ker liya hai mujhey
Bikher gaya tha sar-e-shehr-e-na-shanasaaN maiN Kisi ke rabt ne ta-meer ker liya hai mujhey
Merey sukhan meiN samaa ker kitaab-ru ne meri Khud apney husn ki tafseer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN ek khayal-e-sar-e-rehguzaar-e-shab tha Saeed Kisi ke khwab ne ta-beer ker liya hai mujhey izafa: Nikal ke jaoN kahaN main hisar-e-gardish se Safar ne paoN ki zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey Khoosoorat Ghazal Saeed sahib khoobsoorat izafay kay saath waqaee izafa is ghazal ki khoobsoorti main izafa karta hayRafi bhai, Buhut Nawazish aapki. Saeed
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Post by saeed on Jun 5, 2008 6:59:06 GMT 5
[glow=red,2,300][glow=red,2,300]Saeed Khan
Aap ne tu khiyal ke jugnu ikathey ker ke iss ghazal ki hataili per saja diye...
Khub bohat khub!
Noshi Gilani[/glow][/glow] Noshi saheba, aapko ghazal pasand aayi... buhut shukriya is izzat-afzai kliye. Saeed
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Post by saeed on Jun 5, 2008 7:00:36 GMT 5
Back from holidays....eik taza kavish dostoN ki nazr.... Shikast maan ke taskheer ker liya hai mujhey Ghazaal-e-dasht ne zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN muntashir tha kisi aks-e-rayegaaN ki tarah Nigah-e-shauq ne tasveer ker liya hai mujhey
Bikher gaya tha sar-e-shehr-e-na-shanasaaN maiN Kisi ke rabt ne ta-meer ker liya hai mujhey
Merey sukhan meiN samaa ker kitaab-ru ne meri Khud apney husn ki tafseer ker liya hai mujhey
MeiN ek khayal-e-sar-e-rehguzaar-e-shab tha Saeed Kisi ke khwab ne ta-beer ker liya hai mujhey izafa: Nikal ke jaoN kahaN main hisar-e-gardish se Safar ne paoN mein zanjeer ker liya hai mujhey
merey januN pe ko-e harf aa naheN sakta Hawa ne ret pe tehreer ker liya hai mujhey
Jab aur kuch na hua dushman-e-haseeN se merey Aseer-e-zulf-e-girah-geer ker liya hai mujhey
Sakoot-e-gham se badan khaak ho chala tha magar Kisi ke lams ne akseer ker liya hai mujhey bohat umdaa ,...
Daad ke gulshan ke sabhi phooL aapki iss
khubsoorat si kaavish ki nazR ,...pholoN bhari daad keliye buhut shukriya. khush raheN Kanwal. Saeed
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Post by ramishjaan on Jun 7, 2008 0:29:57 GMT 5
AOA saad bhai is khobsorat ghazal ke liye tahe dil se bohat sari dad qabol ki jyie waslam mukhlis ramishjaan
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anmol
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Post by anmol on Jun 7, 2008 19:05:46 GMT 5
Saeed SaaHib, aadaab!
bahut dinoN baad forum per posting shru ki to pehle aap ki ghazal talaash ki. tabSara to maiN nahiiN kar sakti, bus yehi keh sakti huuN k mujhe aap ki ghazal ka har sher pasand aaya aur aap daad ke haqdaar Thehre, so wohi pohnchaane aayi huuN, DheroN daad qubool kijiye!
Anmol
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Post by naheedv on Jun 10, 2008 3:57:04 GMT 5
MeiN ek khayal-e-sar-e-rehguzaar-e-shab tha Saeed Kisi ke khwab ne ta-beer ker liya hai mujhey
Wah, buhat achi ghazal aur buhat umdah she'r daad!
Naheed
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Post by saeed on Jun 10, 2008 4:30:05 GMT 5
AOA saad bhai is khobsorat ghazal ke liye tahe dil se bohat sari dad qabol ki jyie waslam mukhlis ramishjaan Buhut shukriya Ramish Jaan saheb!
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Post by saeed on Jun 10, 2008 4:32:34 GMT 5
Saeed SaaHib, aadaab! bahut dinoN baad forum per posting shru ki to pehle aap ki ghazal talaash ki. tabSara to maiN nahiiN kar sakti, bus yehi keh sakti huuN k mujhe aap ki ghazal ka har sher pasand aaya aur aap daad ke haqdaar Thehre, so wohi pohnchaane aayi huuN, DheroN daad qubool kijiye! Anmol Anmol, Der-ayad drust ayad..... Aapka buhut shukriya is pzeerayi keliye. Aadab Saeed
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Post by saeed on Jun 10, 2008 4:33:59 GMT 5
MeiN ek khayal-e-sar-e-rehguzaar-e-shab tha Saeed Kisi ke khwab ne ta-beer ker liya hai mujhey Wah, buhat achi ghazal aur buhat umdah she'r daad! Naheed Buhut nawazish Naheed! saeed
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Post by Aqeel Malik on Jun 14, 2008 13:12:45 GMT 5
MeiN muntashir tha kisi aks-e-rayegaaN ki tarah Nigah-e-shauq ne tasveer ker liya hai mujhey
kia thriakti hoe ahang ki ghazal hay bahut umda bahut umda hamesha ap ko parh kar kuch naya aur nia likhnay ko man karta hay dad qabooleay ga is haqeer ki
aqeel
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Post by saeed on Jun 16, 2008 16:28:19 GMT 5
MeiN muntashir tha kisi aks-e-rayegaaN ki tarah Nigah-e-shauq ne tasveer ker liya hai mujhey kia thriakti hoe ahang ki ghazal hay bahut umda bahut umda hamesha ap ko parh kar kuch naya aur nia likhnay ko man karta hay dad qabooleay ga is haqeer ki aqeel Buhut nawazish Aqueel saheb! Khush raheN Saeed
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