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Post by HASIB RANA on May 20, 2007 14:09:27 GMT 5
Tukre bhi karte jaate haiN is dil ke sath sath Us pe yeh hukM bhi hai ke noha na kijiye
KANWAL IS SH'AR PER DOBARAH GHOR KERO .......... QAFEYAH GHALAT HAY ........... NOHA IS MAIN USE NAHEEN HO SEKTA KUEN KEH YEH WORD ( NOHAH .... HAY NA KEH NOHA ) PANCHWAN SH'AR B GHOR TALAB HAY ( kab se khare haiN hum ) ( guzra na kijiye ) ZMANAH MUKHTALF HAY ............... ( JAB B KHARE HOON HUM ) ( GUZRA NAH KIJIEY ) ZEYADAH BEHTER RAHEY GAA ....... BAQI JO TM BEHTER SAMJHO .................... TUMHARE MERZE WISH U ALL THE BEST BE HAPPY [/COLOR][/SIZE]
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Post by Atif Mirza on May 11, 2008 5:52:30 GMT 5
Bahut umda! Urdu maiN likhi gayee ghazal kay maqtay kay misra-e-oolaa maiN lafz "Aye" missing hai, jabkeh English maiN theek hai. This must be a typo! Hai na? Daad hazir hai.
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 2:20:08 GMT 5
Thank You Aqeel jee ,....
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Post by kanwal on May 25, 2008 2:22:02 GMT 5
,....yeh to doosri ghazl thi ,... shayed jaldi meiN dheehan nahiN raha ,....... anyway bohat shukriya,..... HUMMMMMMMMMMMM ......... MALOOM HAY ......... 3 DIN PEHLEY MAIN B YEH GHALTI KER CHUKA HOON ......... NAZAM KI JAGAH GHAZAL POST KER DE THE ............. KHAIR ........... NICE GHAZAL Pehloo meiN aapke bhi to hoga zaroor yeh Dil pe humare zulm to itna na kijiye KITNI DAD DOON ................. MERA KHYAL HAY KEH JITNI DAD B DAY DOON KAM ER JAEY GEE ........... IS SHEAR K SAMNEY ......... WISH U ALL THE BEST KANWAL .......... SDA MUSKORATI RAHOO
[/COLOR][/SIZE][/quote] Thank u, thank u thank u dearest friend ,....
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Post by kanwal on Jul 31, 2008 1:17:44 GMT 5
Adaaaaaaaaaaaaab kanwal ye khubsoorat ghazal pehlay bhi nazar sey guzri hay. or aj phir issay parh kar utna hi acha laga jitna pehli bar parh kar laga thaaaaaa bohat umdaaaaa khush raho Aapka repyl,...
hausla afzaa andaaz dekh ke acha laga ,...
Thank you Suman jee ,...
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Post by kanwal on Jul 31, 2008 1:19:40 GMT 5
Tukre bhi karte jaate haiN is dil ke sath sath Us pe yeh hukM bhi hai ke noha na kijiye
KANWAL IS SH'AR PER DOBARAH GHOR KERO .......... QAFEYAH GHALAT HAY ........... NOHA IS MAIN USE NAHEEN HO SEKTA KUEN KEH YEH WORD ( NOHAH .... HAY NA KEH NOHA ) PANCHWAN SH'AR B GHOR TALAB HAY ( kab se khare haiN hum ) ( guzra na kijiye ) ZMANAH MUKHTALF HAY ............... ( JAB B KHARE HOON HUM ) ( GUZRA NAH KIJIEY ) ZEYADAH BEHTER RAHEY GAA ....... BAQI JO TM BEHTER SAMJHO .................... TUMHARE MERZE WISH U ALL THE BEST BE HAPPY
[/COLOR][/SIZE][/quote] Ok fine jee ,....
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Post by kanwal on Jul 31, 2008 1:24:24 GMT 5
Bahut umda! Urdu maiN likhi gayee ghazal kay matlay kay misa-e-oolaa maiN lafz "Aye" missing hai, jabkeh English maiN theek hai. This must be a typo! Hai na? Daad hazir hai.
Thank you Atif jee ,...
bas kabhi kabhi typing meiN ghalti ho jaati hai jo nigaah se posheeda rehti hai ,...
Thank you so much k Aapne meri tawjah is tarf dilaayee ,...
Jeete rahiye ,...
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